Life choices.

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Karolane Ratté

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Word count: 1835

Choice count: 34

Section count: 22

Image count: 22

Error count: 5

Field Related Analysis

Education : 75 matches

(cat, cegep, choice, college, don, down, first, knowledge, learned, management, reader, school, trainee)

Law : 32 matches

(absence, animals, bar, children, client, clients, close, construction, family, house, minutes, office)

Food and catering : 25 matches

(animals, bar, bite, box, eat, happy, haven, night, restaurant)

Target Structure: (10 matches)

drawback (1 match)

leaves of absence (1 match)

leg work (1 match)

more often (1 match)

more often than not (1 match)

time management (1 match)

trainee (1 match)

wage (1 match)

threats (1 match)

volunteering (4 matches)

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Life choices.

Almost the end of the college.

I am studying at the cegep of Thetford in the program of Office Work Coordination. There are two years left before finishing my program. However, I don't know if I want to continue my program because two years is very long. I wish that I could be at another place than at school.

Choice 1 : Finish program

Choice 2 : Change program.

Choice 3 : Leave school

School

I have finish Office Work Coordination program.

I am done to my school program, and I am ready to work. I can go to travel in Punta Cana. It is my dream since I was young. I wish to travel with my friends soon.

Choice 1 : Start working.

Choice 2 : Travel.

Diploma

Change program.

I haven't finished my first program because it is for me not I was thinking about this program, so that's why I choose to be in the program of Accounting and financed at Laval College. I have been studying in a similar program, so I think I like this program more. If I don't like this programs I think I will leave school, or I will work at a restaurant with my friend. Maybe also does some volunteering at the SPCA of Beauceville.

Choice 1 : Leave school.

Choice 2 : Work at a restaurant.

Choice 3 : Volunteering at SPCA of Beauceville.

Comptability and financed

Leave school.

I have finally left school because I think that it's useless to continue when I don't see anything interesting there. I prefer to meet new people. Once, I would like to meet my future boyfriend because I feel alone. I am wishing I can meet the singer of my favorite group of music. Also, I am hoping I can meet someone who came from to another country than mine.

Choice 1 : Meet my boyfriend

Choice 2 : Meet the singer of my favorite group of music

Choice 3 : Meet a foreigner

Bye school

Start working.

I am working at Thetford Hospital. It is one of my dreams to work there because I like to help the sick people. They give me happiness every day when they pass at my office. My boss say always to me that I am the best worker because I have more knowledge than the other workers. However, there is some patient they are very violent with me, but they don't know because this is their sickness. Some of them are very kind because for them I am their favorite worker. Sometimes, I prefer to work at another place because there is too much work for me.

Choice 1 : Go emergency.

Choice 2 : Stay working there.

Choice 3 : Work at school.

Hospital

Travel.

Punta Cana is so a beautiful place that we want to stay for a long there, but everything Have a limit, so soon I come back home. Before coming back home, I want my last memorable moment there. I have two choices, go surfing or to go at bar with my friends.

Choice 1 : Go surfing.

Choice 2 : Go at bar.

Punta Cana

Leave school.

Finally, I don't like the second program I chose. My program was Accounting and financed. I learned a lot about it, but it's not what I like to do in my life. In finance, I learned how to win at the lotto 649, so that's why I won two choices: Win a car or win a house.

Choice 1 : Win a car.

Choice 2 : Win a house.

Leaving school

Work at a restaurant.

Younger, I have worked at the restaurant but my boss was not fair with all of his employees, so that's why I have chosen to leave. Many years later, my friend and I work together. We have the same schedule but the difference of us is I am her trainee, and I show her how to work well.When we show to someone our job, we need time management. We also need a higher wage. The drawback we can have when we show to someone our is we need to be patient because the person cannot be good at the first time you show him the work.

Choice 1 : Become a supervisor.

Choice 2 : Continue to show the work of my friend.

Restaurant

Volunteering at SPCA of Beauceville.

Once, my cousin and I adopted a cat and a dog. Ten years later, I have the idea of going volunteering at the same place we adopted our animals. All the animals likes me and also the employees, and boss. Two years later, my boss leaves his position. At this moment, we don't have a boss, so all the employees chose me to become their boss because they think I will be the best for them. Should I take this important position?

Choice 1 : Return to the beginning

SPCA Beauceville

Meet my boyfriend.

After leaving School, I move at New Brunswick. This is at this place that I meet my boyfriend. He is my neighborhood.More often than not, every night I see him in front of my window. I have planed to see him in his room, but I don't want his parents see us together.

Choice 1 : Return to the beginning

Boyfriend

Meet the singer of my favorite group of music.

My mother and I go at a show, but she doesn't tell me who I will see to play music. When we arrive, she shows me who it is, and it's my favorite singer Ed Sheeran. I am so happy to see him singing. After the show, I go to see him, and I invite him to go to eat at the restaurant. He accepts! We stay there to talk for a long time, and he asks me if I want to go to his house.

Choice 1 : Return to the beginning

Ed sheeran singer

Meet a foreigner.

My father helps me to move my things in Montreal. A foreigner walks at the same road that I am moving. I go to the truck to take a heavy box, and when I'm out the truck, I'm almost falling down that the boy comes to save me because he saw I'm in danger. I said thank you to him.He asks me if he can help me to finish putting my things in my new apartment, and I accept.

Choice 1 : Return to the beginning

Foreigner

Go emergency.

I just wake up. I see my sister sit beside me and very sad. I ask her what's happened, and she answers me that while I'm working a patient enter me a knife in my leg. She also says to me that the people around the patient, and I hear the patient to tell me a lot of threats. I am choking to know what's happened because I don't remember anything about this moment of the day. Finally, the last thing my sister tells me is don't worry here they will help you to get your leg back in health by doing leg work. Also, you have a lot of leaves of absence.

Choice 1 : Almost the end of the college.

Emergency

Stay working there.

My office at Thetford is my first serious job, and I like so much my colleagues there are like my second family. I have planed to say there as long as I'm able to stay there because this is the happiness of my life. I hope they will keep me.

Choice 1 : Almost the end of the college.

Hospital Thetford

Work at school.

Working at school is for me new life because I see I like to work the children. It gives me also the idea to want a baby because they are so cute.One thing is sure to me is once when I get old, I will want to take care of the children for helping there mother to go working during the day. This is a manner to me to do a little business.

Choice 1 : Almost the end of the college.

School

Go surfing.

While I am surfing, I see the wonderful sun to stunning on my beautiful shin. The water is so blue and amazing. I hope that every day I can surf. Ten minutes later, I feel under my plank something very sharp. I see finally that this is a shark. He success to bite me so strong that I am so weak to run away.

Choice 1 : Almost the end of the college.

Surfing

Go at bar.

It becomes the night, so I decide to go at bar to drink Vodka. Far from me a group of boys' looks at me, and maybe want to dance with me. They come to see me. and they ask me if I want to drink with them. I accept, and we dance until the bar became close.

Choice 1 : Almost the end of the college.

Bar

Win a car.

I learned that there is a family that they win the new car at the lotto 649. My mother said to me to arrive at my house as soon as possible. Once I arrive home, no lights is opened outside like an inside. I ask myself a lot of questions because they said they are at my house. I walk until the back of my house, and once at the same time, all members of my family opened all the lights, and they said SURPRISE!! They said the new car is us we win, and we give it to you.

Choice 1 : Almost the end of the college.

Car

Win a house.

After few years, I didn't expect that my house will fall down very soon. My boyfriend works at construction, and one night he arrives very late. I ask him why this is so late, and he said to me is friends give us is second houses because he knows that our house will go to fall down. I am so happy to hear. It is the first night that I sleep so well.

Choice 1 : Almost the end of the college.

House

Become a supervisor.

At the restaurant, a lot of clients say to me that I am the best for working there. I am thankful for this people. Two days later, a client said to my boss that I can be a superior worker like a supervisor. At the beginning, my boss was not agreed, but a morning I saw him checking me to work, and this is the same day he said to me he wants me to be a supervisor at the restaurant.

Choice 1 : Almost the end of the college.

Superviser

Continue to show the work of my friend.

My friend and I have a lot of fun to work together, and the clients see that too. My boss is also happy for us because for once have employees who are very happy to work together.

Choice 1 : Almost the end of the college.

Restaurant

Start over.

Write this part of the story here and present your reader with choices.

Choice 1 : Start over