A day in a life of a miner

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Olivier Perreault

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Choice count: 28

Section count: 20

Image count: 20

Error count: 4

Field Related Analysis

Education : 44 matches

(choice, first, further, inspection, report)

Dance : 30 matches

(action, back, behind, check, checking, complete, follow, in place, number, skip)

Construction and Civil Engineering : 27 matches

(highway, inspection, maintenance, road, safe, underground)

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A day in a life of a miner

What is your first action of the day after waking up?

You just wake up after a long night. You are very confused and then, you remember that you work in 30 minutes. You work on a famous mine name Niobec. This mine is located in Saguenay. You have the choice to go to work or to stay in bed.

Choice 1 : You are going to work today!

Choice 2 : You make sure to stay comfortable in your bed.

Your bedroom

You are going to work today!

You decide to go to work. You eat something fast and put your working clothes. You start your truck and drive to the mine. During your travels, unfortunately you forget which road is the faster. There is one road in the wood that doesn't look safe. Another one is on the highway and this one looks way safer. The third one is a mountain road with some friendly goat.

Choice 1 : You pick the road in wood.

Choice 2 : You pick the highway.

Choice 3 : You chose the mountain road because you feel a bond with the goat.

The road

You make sure to stay comfortable in your bed.

You are too tired to go to work, so you stay in your bed. After, 3 hours of good sleep. You wake up for real and check your cellphone. You have one miss call and one new message in your voice mail. Are you going to get back to your bed for another 3 hours of sleep? You can also choice to check your voice mail.

Choice 1 : You decide to stay in your bed.

Choice 2 : You check your voice mail.

Your bedroom

You pick the road in wood.

The wood get darker and darker. After 5 minutes, you look behind you and there is nothing. You are totally blind. Maybe, you should stay in place or continue your road.

Choice 1 : You stay in place.

Choice 2 : You continue to drive.

The forest

You pick the highway.

You pick the safer choice and, you continue your road. After 15 minutes, you see a sign that indicates you that you are leaving the country. You are now in the Unite states of America.

Choice 1 : What is your first action of the day after waking up?

The sign

You chose the mountain road because you feel a bond with the goat.

At the time you chose the mountain road all the goat are going in your direction. They seem that they want to tell you something. Or maybe they want to help you?

Choice 1 : You decide to follow the goats

The goat

You decide to stay in your bed.

You decide to stay in your bed and, you give no new to everyone. Wanted posters are published everywhere in the city but no one founds you. You will be founds 15 years later in dust...

Choice 1 : What is your first action of the day after waking up?

You 15 years later

You check your voice mail.

This is your foreman, he is really mad and, you get fired. Your life is now doomed and, you will have no friend for the rest of your life.

Choice 1 : What is your first action of the day after waking up?

This is your only one friend that stay

You stay in place.

You stay in place and you were forgotten. No, one is checking for you. You are doomed to stay in the dark.

Choice 1 : What is your first action of the day after waking up?

The dark

You continue to drive.

You continue to drive but they are nothing here. You are caught in an endless loop. You stay here for the rest of your life.

Choice 1 : What is your first action of the day after waking up?

The forest

You decide to follow the goats.

All the goat are forming an arrow. They are indicating you the fastest road to go to Niobec. You are following the road they indicate you.

Choice 1 : You follow the way.

The leader of the goat

You follow the way.

You are driving so fast to make sure that you are not going to be late.You finally arrived at the mine. You can choose to go underground or to stay on the surface.

Choice 1 : You go underground.

Choice 2 : You stay on the surface.

The Niobec mine

You go underground.

You take the elevator to go underground. After, 5 minute you finally arrived at the bottom of the mine. You see your foreman and, he makes sign to come see him. You go see him and, he wants you to check all the drilling machines for the inspection of the morning.

Choice 1 : You make sure that all the drilling machines are good.

Underground of the mines

You stay on the surface.

You decide to stay at the surface. You went to your office to complete your report of yesterday. You see some coworker and, you want to talk to them but, you really have to finish your report. You have a choice to make.

Choice 1 : You finish your report

Choice 2 : You go talk with friends

Your office

You make sure that all the drilling machines are good.

You check all the drilling machines, everything looks good but one thing make you feel uncomfortable. The drill number 6 is really used. The cables are not looking good and not safe. You have the chose to call your foreman or to act like nothing happened.

Choice 1 : You call your foreman

Choice 2 : You act like nothing happened

The drilling machine

You go talk with friends.

Your foreman caught you, he is very mad. It's not the first time that you skip your job, and you are already late in some duty. You are fired.

Choice 1 : What is your first action of the day after waking up?

No jobs for you

You finish your report.

You are done with your report. You can now send him to the boss. You day at work is over.

Choice 1 : You send him to your boss

Your report

You call your foreman.

After seeing the drills, you have call your foreman. You put this drill, on the maintenance and everything is safe underground. You continue your day underground with the team. The day continue and, you finally took the elevator to the surface. You are going back home.

Choice 1 : What is your first action of the day after waking up?

Your home

You act like nothing happened.

You act like nothing happened and, you continue your day. Everything is good and your day is almost over. You are going to the elevator.

Choice 1 : You are going to the elevator

Underground

You are going to the elevator.

At the moment you were going to take the elevator, you heard an explosion further in the underground. A lot of people were killed during the explosion. It was the drill... You were fired after the company found that you haven't done you work.

Choice 1 : What is your first action of the day after waking up?

explosion