A Long Story

A hypertext narrative by

Magaly Piché

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Word count: 780

Choice count: 12

Section count: 15

Image count: 15

Error count: 3

Field Related Analysis

Education : 49 matches

(choice, don, first, learn, management, mentor, school, training)

Archaeology : 16 matches

(community, her, here)

Law : 13 matches

(community, complaint, director, fine, harassment, offer, option)

Target Structure: (13 matches)

come in handy (1 match)

foot in the door (1 match)

fulfillment (1 match)

intern (1 match)

internship (4 matches)

lack of (1 match)

learn the ropes (1 match)

on-the-job-training (2 matches)

overtime (1 match)

overwhelmed (1 match)

sexual harassment (1 match)

thoughtful (1 match)

time management (1 match)

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A Long Story

A New Beginning.

I just finish school, and I am ready to work. I want to work somewhere that I can intervene in delinquency. I got two offers. One of them is an Internship in a Secondary School. The other one is more of an on-the-job training in a community center. Which one should I choose?

Choice 1 : Secondary School.

Choice 2 : On-the-job-training in a Community Center.

start

Secondary School.

As soon as I put a foot in the door, I see that I am the youngest. I'm not sure if I like it. I can choose between two people to be my mentor. There is Sylvie or Linda. Who do I choose?

Choice 1 : Sylvie.

Choice 2 : Linda.

school

Sylvie.

I love working with Sylvie. This does not feel like an internship. It feels more like a dream. She is kind and very thoughtful. I learn very quickly with her. The director even offered me a real job. Should I take it?

Choice 1 : Accept the offer.

Choice 2 : Deny the offer.

sylvie

Accept the offer.

Thanks to Sylvie, I now work in this school as an intervening in delinquency.

Write a choice here.

accept the offer

Deny the offer.

Even if, I love working with Sylvie. I do not want to continue to work there. I am going to explore other option.

Write a choice here.

deny

Linda.

I chose to work with Linda. I try to learn the ropes, but it is very difficult. I feel more like a slave than an intern. All I do is get coffee and watch Linda do her nails. There is a lack of fulfillment in this internship. I am not sure if I want to continue to work in this kind of job. Should I stay or should I quit?

Choice 1 : Stay.

Choice 2 : Quit.

linda

Stay.

I decided to stay and continue the internship. I do a lot of overtime because Linda is making me do all the work she doesn't want to do. I am not happy in this, but I don't have any other choice.

Write a choice here.

stay

Quit.

I decided to quit, and it is the best decision of my life. I did not found a new job yet, but I'm sure I will soon.

Write a choice here.

quit

On-the-job-training in a Community Center.

This is my first day in this community center. This place is really big and a lot of people come and go. We are understaff so no one really shows me everything. I learn on the spot. I need to remember everything that can come in handy. However, there is a really cute guy that is working with me, Should I flirt with him?

Choice 1 : Flirt with him.

Choice 2 : Don't flirt with him.

center

Flirt with him.

I decide to go talk to him. Everything goes just fine, and we have a lot in common. He proposes to help me with my training so that I don't get overwhelmed. Should I accept?

Choice 1 : Accept his help.

Choice 2 : Don't accept his help.

flirt

Don't flirt with him.

I decide to not flirt with him, but he come talk to me anyway. Surprisingly, he flirts with me. Even if a part of me want to flirt back, I don't. He makes me kind of uncomfortable. He tries to touch me even when I clearly said that I did not want to. This is sexual harassment. Should I go talk to my superior or just let it go?

Write a choice here.

Write a choice here.

Don't flirt

Accept his help.

I accepted his help. It was a good choice because there is a lot to learn. I also need to learn how to react to different kinds of situation with different kinds of people. But he helps me a lot. We spend a lot of time together, and he asked me on a date.

Write a choice here.

help

Don't accept his help.

I did not accept his help. I was too shy. So now, I am drowning in work. I have poor time management, and I have a lot of difficulties keeping up.

Write a choice here.

help

Go talk to my superior.

I chose to go talk to my superior, and he believed me. He said that it was not the first time that a girl complained about him. I decide to file a complaint. He is now dismissed.

Write a choice here.

superior

Let it go.

I chose to let it go. It was not the right choice. After that time he did again to me and some other girls but no one is complaining.

Write a choice here.

let it go