Become a Paramedic.

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Mathilde Auger

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Word count: 983

Choice count: 21

Section count: 22

Image count: 22

Error count: 5

Field Related Analysis:

Nursing : 23 matches (accident, ambulance, CPR, Doctor, DOT, ego, glucagon, HIV, injection, intravenous, medication, needle, position, practice, pulse, social, solution, stress, tone, trust, unconscious, emergency care, stretcher)

Prehospital Emergency Care : 22 matches (accident, ambulance, medication, practice, unconscious, emergency, paramedic, patient, protocol, backboard, cpr, glucagon, injection, intervention, intravenous, intravenous injection, needle, partner, pulse, stretcher, doctor, emergency care)

Law/Paralegal-Technology : 16 matches (accident, Book, close, company, court, driving, House, intervention, judge, misconduct, month, protocol, reputation, road, trust, young)

Target Structure:

cursory (2 matches)

dead-end job (1 match)

flirtation (2 matches)

hinder (1 match)

maddening (1 match)

misconduct (1 match)

overwhelm (1 match)

perpetrator (1 match)

set aside (1 match)

straight A's (1 match)

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Become a Paramedic.

diploma

Congratulation!

You have finish your DEC in Prehospital Emergency Care. Now you are a paramedic. What do you want to do?

Choice 1 : Go to university in Advanced Emergency Care.

Choice 2 : Start working for a company.

Choice 3 : Take a brake.

what?

Go to university in Advanced Emergency Care.

At your first class in University, you don't understand what he's saying about intravenous injection.

Choice 1 : Ask a question.

Choice 2 : You are too scared to ask a question.

young or old

Start working for a company.

It's your first day in an ambulance. You need to choose a partner. When you look at the paper, you have two choice.

Choice 1 : An old paramedic.

Choice 2 : A young and cute paramedic.

Nicaragua

Take a brake.

You went to Nicaragua for one year. Now you are back in Montreal and you have to make an important decision about your future.

Choice 1 : Start working in an ambulance.

Choice 2 : Wait for a month to practice remembering your protocol.

hopeless teacher

Ask a question.

The teacher gives you a maddening look and offers you to come see him at the end of the class because you are supposed to already know these things.

Choice 1 : Go see the teacher after class.

Choice 2 : You have a big ego, and you don't go.

hopeless student

You are too scared to ask a question.

When you arrive at your house, you still don't understand. The exam is really close and you need to understand.

Choice 1 : You drink coffee and stay up all night to understand.

Choice 2 : You take a cursory look at your book and start crying in a foetal position.

no muscle

An old paramedic.

The old man is really nice. You have your first call. The patient is unconscious so you need to put him on a backboard and take him to the stretcher who's 15 meters away. You take a look at your partner and realise he doesn't have a lot of muscles.

Choice 1 : You trust him.

Choice 2 : You ask someone else to help you.

blushing

A young and cute paramedic.

When he looks at you, you blush. You start driving the ambulance and he asks you to look at him because he wants to tell you something.

Choice 1 : You can't resist.

Choice 2 : Is he flirting (flirtation) with me? Okay awkward. Why is he using this tone? Did he really think I was going to look at him?

omg

Start working in an ambulance.

You are so stress about having to do an intervention with a real human without a little practice. You don't think it's a good idea anymore.

Choice 1 : You listen to yourself and go home.

Choice 2 : All your idea are bad. So why not?

judging someone

Wait for a month to practice remembering your protocol.

You go to your school. You want to practice but everyone is looking at you. They are judging you. You are not welcome.

Choice 1 : Who are they to judge you? You stay.

Choice 2 : Well going to your first day of job is not that bad finally.

hopeless face

Go see the teacher after class.

It was a bad idea. You'll never understand.

Write a choice here.

failed exam

You have a big ego, and you don't go.

You failed your final exam! Now you have the worst reputation. Advanced Emergency care is a dead-end job for you.

Write a choice here.

Advanced Emergency Care

You drink coffee and stay up all night to understand.

The coffee is the solution to everything! You pass your exam. Now you have straight A's until you finish university. You are the best Advanced Emergency Care.

Write a choice here.

Missing

You take a cursory look at your book and start crying in a foetal position.

You stopped going to school and stopped seeing people. Nobody knows you now.

Write a choice here.

Hospital

You trust him.

OH NO! You hurt your back! I hope you set aside some money because you can't be a paramedic anymore.

Write a choice here.

Fired

You ask someone else to help you.

The old man was actually your boss! You are fired. You are a perpetrator for him. Don't ever come back.

Write a choice here.

RIP

You can't resist.

Well you stopped looking at the road. You had a car accident. You are dead. Rest In Peace.

Write a choice here.

guilty

Is he flirting (flirtation) with me? Okay awkward. Why is he using this tone? Did he really think I was going to look at him?

You dot your first call. He was so mad at you that he made a medication mistake. You could have hindered (hinder) him from committing the mistake. Now it's both of your fault. Good luck in court.

Write a choice here.

crying

You listen to yourself and go home.

It was a big misconduct. Your boss fired you. You are now on social well-being.

Write a choice here.

scared

All your idea are bad. So why not?

Your first day! You go to your first call and it's an unconscious patient. You take a pulse. He doesn't have a pulse. You need to start CPR! You are to overwhelm by the situation that you can't react. Too bad, you killed him.

Write a choice here.

Montreal ambulance

Who are they to judge you? You stay.

You are determined! Your boss likes it. Congratulation, you have a promotion.

Write a choice here.

HIV

Well going to your first day of job is not that bad finally.

Your first day of work is going good so far. You need to administrate your first glucagon. You did it! Now put the needle in the biohazard container. Oh no! You stung yourself! 3 days later... The doctor comes in the room and tell you : "Sorry ma'am, you have the HIV".

Write a choice here.

The End.