Architeture

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Alexis Potvin

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Word count: 1127

Choice count: 22

Section count: 23

Image count: 21

Error count: 56

Field Related Analysis:

Law/Paralegal-Technology : 14 matches (close, director, family, four, illegal, living, master, month, offer, office, parent, profession, street, young)

Education : 12 matches (Greats, bilingual, choice, classes, college, don, first, grade, grades, project, teaches, university)

Business : 6 matches (firm, meeting, money, offer, office, upgrade)

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Architeture

Start at the beginning.

I'm studying Architecture at College St-Laurent to become an Architect. It's my final year of college and I'm perplexed. I'm not sure witch university and country I want to go.

Choice 1 : Go to the University of Montreal

Choice 2 : Go to Mgill Universtity

Choice 3 : Don't go to University and try to work in a firm

University of Montreal

Go to the University of Montreal.

I'm now at the University of Montreal, I really like it because I made a lot of friends, and my classes are very greats because I have good teaches. I'm very comfortable because I live with my parent and I talk French at Home. After four years of University, this is my last year at University and I wonder where I will work after finishing my studies.

Choice 1 : I receive an offer in Us

Choice 2 : I decide to work in the firm of my dad

Mcgill University

Go to Mgill Universtity.

I decide to to move in an English University to upgrade my English. It's been 2 year and I still have a little difficulty in English. I don't know if I want to continue my studies in English. What should I do?

Choice 1 : I continue McGill

Choice 2 : I quit and change University

Europe

Don't go in University and take one year off of traveling and working.

I decide that I won't go to university and try to work in a firm.But I don't know where should I go.

Choice 1 : Go in Europe

Choice 2 : Go in China

US

I receive an offer in Us.

I'm very happy I just finish my University and I already have an offer in a big firm in Us.I don't know if they will take me because I have an interview in three days and I need to present a project.

Choice 1 : They didn't take me

Choice 2 : They didn't take me but they offer me a another job

Family

I decide to work in the firm of my dad.

I'm very happy because I just finish my University and my dad just propose me to join they firm. I'm very happy because I already know everyone in the firm and they are all very fun. My wonder is that I don't know if it's good for my future.

Choice 1 : I have a family and live a great life

Choice 2 : I live in my parents home

reset

They didn't take me.

I'm really sad they didn't take me because of my project. They said that it was not good enough. I really think that I will change profession.

Write a choice here.

Assistant

They didn't take me but they offer me a another job.

I'm sad because they choose another personne to be architect but they offer me to be assistant for 6 month to have experience. They said that I was to young but I will be a good Architect.

Write a choice here.

Family

I have a family and live a great life.

It's been 10 year that I work with my parent. It's very great I meet a girl who work with us and we start a family and everything is perfect.

Write a choice here.

Alone

I live in my parents home.

I'm now 40 and still live with my parent. I have no friend and no girlfriend. All I do it's work and listening my tv.

Write a choice here.

Two languages

I continue McGill.

I decide to not quit and finish my master at McGill. I'm now more than bilingual I speak English all the time. I'm happy because now I can work everywhere I want. I Just wonder if my family and my French friends will continue to talk to me.

Choice 1 : They stop to talk to me

Choice 2 : They still my friends and family

No more family and friends

They stop to talk to me.

It's been two year I finish my master at McGill. I work now in a firm in the West Island and it's been 3 year that I didn't talk to my friends and my families. They don't support that I turn English.

Write a choice here.

Friends

They still my friends and family.

It's been two year I finish my master at McGill. I work now in a firm in the West Island and it's magical I'm now more than ever close to my friend and families. I made now friends and my French friends love them. Everything it's perfect.

Write a choice here.

University of Laval

I quit and change University.

I decide to change University because my English wasn't good enough. So I decide to go to University of Laval. I hope I will have fun there and have great grades.

Choice 1 : Amazing choice

Choice 2 : worst choice ever

Wow

Amazing choice.

I'm now at University of Laval, I have great friends and my grades are amazing. With these grades I will be able to work in the best firm of architecture in the world.

Write a choice here.

Bad grade

Worst choice ever.

I'm now at the University of Laval and it's just now that I realized that McGill was perfect. I had amazing friend and the theachers at McGill was awesome. My grade are worst than ever because I thought that it's will be easy and now im in trouble.

Write a choice here.

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Choice 1 :

europe

Go in Europe.

I'm now in europe and I find a new job not in architecture. It's very difficult and I thinks it's illegal. My boss ask me to delivered something and it's very weird.

Choice 1 : Do it

Choice 2 : Don't do it

China

Go in China.

I'm now in China and I find a new job ind It's magical. My boss love me but he ask me do have a meeting with him. I don't know if it's good or bad.

Choice 1 : He promoted me director

Choice 2 : He fired me

Money

Do it.

I finally decide to did it the first time and now I have plainly of money. I never ask them what I delive but I'm now very rich.

Write a choice here.

Prison

Don't do it.

I finally decide to refuse the demand of my boss and now I just been captured and I don't know what to do.

Write a choice here.

Boss

He promoted me director.

I just get back of my boss office and he just promoted me future boss. I will take is future place in one mouth.

Write a choice here.

Home street

He fired me.

It's been 3 year that I got fired and I'm now living in the street. I have no family and home.

Write a choice here.

The End.