Word count: 400
Choice count: 2
Section count: 3
Image count: 3
Error count: 2
Field Related Analysis
Education : 9 matches
(choice, first, high school, school)Law : 7 matches
(club, minutes)Web development : 6 matches
(build, name, state, write)Target Structure: (1 matches)
though (2 matches)
It was my first day at my new work as a Business men and the day before was my best friend birthday. I had to make an important choice.
Choice 1 : Go to bed early and concentrate and be ready for my new work.
Choice 2 : Go to my best friend party at the club that finishes late.

Tomorrow, was my first day at my new work as a businessman, I was so excited to get to know my work and my new colleagues, but I needed a good night of sleep to look presentable, my best friend invited me to his birthday party at the club, but I couldn't go because I work in the morning the day after, and I need to be looking presentable and not be all dirty, and wanting to sleep because it's my job for the next years of my life. A good first impression is the best thing to get to build your name as a businessman, I am so excited about my job even though I miss my best friend birthday party.
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Tomorrow, was my first day at my new work as a businessman, I was so excited to get to know my work and my new colleagues, but I needed a good night of sleep to look presentable, my best friend invited me to his birthday party at the club, and I couldn't miss it even though I work early in the morning. I went to my best friend party at the club it was so nice we drank all night long we danced and sang until 2 a.m., and I got home at 3 a.m., 4 hours later my alarm goes off, and I'm in a bad state physically and mentally and I need to be at my new work in 30 minutes. 30 minutes later I am at work, and I looked all dirty, I had black encircles all under my eyes and everybody looked at me in not a good way. Who is my boss? My high school crushes, and she saw me in that state and called me a non-serious worker. I was so sad.
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