My career as an Businessman.

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Younes Agnoug

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Word count: 400

Choice count: 2

Section count: 3

Image count: 3

Error count: 2

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Education : 9 matches

(choice, first, high school, school)

Law : 7 matches

(club, minutes)

Web development : 6 matches

(build, name, state, write)

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My career as an Businessman.

The beginning of my new work.

It was my first day at my new work as a Business men and the day before was my best friend birthday. I had to make an important choice.

Choice 1 : Go to bed early and concentrate and be ready for my new work.

Choice 2 : Go to my best friend party at the club that finishes late.

Businessman

Go to bed early and concentrate and be ready for my new work.

Tomorrow, was my first day at my new work as a businessman, I was so excited to get to know my work and my new colleagues, but I needed a good night of sleep to look presentable, my best friend invited me to his birthday party at the club, but I couldn't go because I work in the morning the day after, and I need to be looking presentable and not be all dirty, and wanting to sleep because it's my job for the next years of my life. A good first impression is the best thing to get to build your name as a businessman, I am so excited about my job even though I miss my best friend birthday party.

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Man who is ready for work

Go to my best friend party at the club that finishes late.

Tomorrow, was my first day at my new work as a businessman, I was so excited to get to know my work and my new colleagues, but I needed a good night of sleep to look presentable, my best friend invited me to his birthday party at the club, and I couldn't miss it even though I work early in the morning. I went to my best friend party at the club it was so nice we drank all night long we danced and sang until 2 a.m., and I got home at 3 a.m., 4 hours later my alarm goes off, and I'm in a bad state physically and mentally and I need to be at my new work in 30 minutes. 30 minutes later I am at work, and I looked all dirty, I had black encircles all under my eyes and everybody looked at me in not a good way. Who is my boss? My high school crushes, and she saw me in that state and called me a non-serious worker. I was so sad.

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Club party