Journey through the dark

A hypertext narrative by

Aisha Spencer

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Word count: 100

Choice count: 2

Section count: 1

Image count: 1

Error count: 4

Field Related Analysis

Nursing : 4 matches

(breathing, chest, heart)

Medical Electrophysiology : 4 matches

(chest, heart, legs, skin)

Biology : 4 matches

(breathing, heart, skin)

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Journey through the dark

When freedom stays.

Marcelle had heard her grandmother sing songs to keep her going. Melody was as natural as breathing for her. As she walked through the field, the blades of grass tugged at the skin on her legs. She saw the house from afar; she could also see the dirt track which led to the river.

Choice 1 : Marcelle walked towards the house cautiously, her heart beating heavily against the walls of her chest.

Choice 2 : Marcelle glanced at the house with a feeling of trepidation and slowly turned towards the dirt track. Her breathing became heavy.

An old house at the end of a field