The dream of a salesman.

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Choice count: 33

Section count: 21

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Field Related Analysis

Education : 78 matches

(ability, cegep, choice, classes, course, courses, down, exam, first, high school, learn, learning, management, professor, reader, research, school, semester, social, students, teacher, training, university)

Business : 45 matches

(company, deal, making money, management, marketing, money, office, opportunity, pressure, products, promotion, publicity, sales, sell, team)

Law : 16 matches

(bugging, cheat, contact, escape, fact, family, house, living, office, profession)

Target Structure: (8 matches)

intern (1 match)

internship (9 matches)

learn the ropes (2 matches)

learning the ropes (1 match)

office politics (1 match)

overwhelming (1 match)

though (1 match)

wage (2 matches)

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The dream of a salesman.

Now what?

High school is done, and I am now free about where I want to study. The next step is choosing my cegep. Going to cegep is good when you want to learn the ropes about responsibilities. I know that I have a lot of potential in Social Science because of my ability to talk and deal with people. But, I also think that choosing Nature Science is the way to go if I want to have a lot of doors open for me when I am done with Cegep. Because of that, don't know if I should go to Ahuntsic or Bois-de-Boulogne? We know that Bois-de-Boulogne is better for Nature Science but Ahuntsic is the way to go for psychology._.

Choice 1 : Go to Ahuntsic.

Choice 2 : Go to Bois-de-Boulogne

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Go to Ahuntsic.

Right! Going to Ahuntsic in Social Science is the best way for me to know my path. I know that I want to do something with people. My family is always telling me that I would be a great salesman. This is why psychology is a great tool when it comes to knowing what people need. Coming down to my last year in cegep, should I go in Marketing at the University of Montreal or should I go in marketing at McGill?

Choice 1 : McGill.

Choice 2 : University of Montreal.

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Bois-de-Boulogne.

Right! Nature science is really interesting. With that background I can get myself a sure wage for my future job. Brian, who is my Chemistry teacher, is offering me an internship in animal labs for research. But, after spending a lot of time in Nature Science, I found out that I really need to be around people and work as a team in a social way. Nature Science is a lot of theory and not much of direct human contact. Should I go to Social Science?

Choice 1 : Internship in Chemistry.

Choice 2 : Go to Ahuntsic.

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McGill.

I am finally at a University! I got accepted in Marketing. I am happy where I am in my first semester. The fact that all of my courses are in English are really bugging me. Yes, I do have some straight A's, but I don't think I can pull this off. But, I can sign myself to another English course, this will maybe make it easier to study at McGill.

Choice 1 : Extra English course.

Choice 2 : University of Montreal.

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University of Montreal.

This is a big step! I am now at university. I got into a cumulative program in Marketing. My first semester is awesome! But it's also time for me to choose my next certificate in Marketing. I love having a human contact at my job, but publicity is also a great subject and job to have.

Choice 1 : Publicity.

Choice 2 : Communication sales.

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Internship in Chemistry.

Well, that is a very bad experience! Even with my straight A's, this internship is really time-consuming. I don't think that being a chemist is in my future ambitions. I am not that good with time-management in this program. This is overwhelming!

Choice 1 : That was a bad experience. Go back to the beginning.

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Publicity.

The students are organizing a welcome party! But I really need to study for my first exam, and some people invited me to Study to their house. Publicity is really harder than I thought and is much more time-consuming than communication sales. What do I do?

Choice 1 : Party.

Choice 2 : Study.

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Communication sales.

This program is so great! I am the best in each of my classes! After some classes I have made some friends! One of my friends is Brian. Brian's father know Elon Musk very well because they used to work together at PayPal. This I why, one day, Brian came up up to me with the biggest opportunity of my life! He asked me if I would like to do an Internship in sales at Tesla. I would have to miss school. What to I do?

Choice 1 : Internship at Tesla.

Choice 2 : Stay in Montreal.

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Extra English course.

Wow! English is a beautiful language, but learning the ropes of my future profession in that particular language is too difficult... I should've gone to the University of Montreal.

Choice 1 : University of Montreal.

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Party.

This party is amazing! After hanging out for a while a fight was starting into the crowd. A guy named Brian was getting the beat up of his life. I decided to go help him. After a long fight, we were able to get out of the house. So, we started talking while enjoying a beer. Brian was in communication sales, and he told me that they are searching somebody for an internship with Space X! Do I leave publicity to go in communication sales and take the internship?

Choice 1 : Communication sales.

Choice 2 : Stay in publicity.

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Study.

So, we are at Alex house, he is in publicity with me. After studying for a bit, he says to me that he got the answers to the exam! When I asked him how, he told me that he had stolen the answers from the professor office. What now? Do I take the answers or go to the party and escape from the situation?

Choice 1 : Party.

Choice 2 : Cheat.

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Stay in publicity.

What are you doing? Nobody would miss that kind of opportunity. It's the dream of a salesman!

Choice 1 : Communication sales.

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Cheat.

That was a bad decision. We ended up getting caught and expelled from the school. Now my dream of becoming a salesman is crushed. Try again.

Choice 1 : Now what?

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Internship at Tesla.

This is the dream of an intern in sales. On the job training is so good with this company. This is my second week all of the managers are helping me learn the ropes to be the greatest salesman in the Tesla sales department. They are talking about offering me a job in the sales department. This is a once in a lifetime opportunity.

Choice 1 : Take the job.

Choice 2 : Go back to Montreal.

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Stay in Montreal.

Write this part of the story here and present your reader with choices.

Choice 1 : Get the job at Mondelez.

Choice 2 : Take the job at the SQDC.

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Get the job at Mondelez.

I have been doing great and finds it easy to sell those products (cookies, candy, etc.). Though the wage is not that good, I am getting free cookies and candy each day. But, after a while, I became sick. I was treated with diabetes from overeating sugar. I had to stop working and my situation is getting worse... I am now dead.

Choice 1 : Now what?

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Take the job at the SQDC.

Working in the marijuana industry has led meekest to get sucked up in smoking marijuana. After a while it became an addiction, and I was not able to work anymore. I was not following the office politics and was smoking while doing my on the job training. This led to me getting fired. This was the worst path for me because I am now a marijuana addict with no job. Try again.

Choice 1 : Now what?

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Take the job.

This is awesome! I am doing great and making money like never before. But I just got an email from Elon Musk himself asking me if I would like to take over the greatest sales team in the company and be the one leading it.

Choice 1 : Take the promotion.

Choice 2 : Its too much pressure, stay where you are.

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Go back to Montreal.

Unfortunately my plane crashed on my back to Montreal. I am now dead. Try again.

Choice 1 : Now what?

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Its too much pressure, stay where you are.

I regret making this decision. It was a once in a lifetime opportunity, and I didn't take it. Every day, I am sad because of what I have miss by taking this decision.

Choice 1 : Now what?

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Take the promotion.

I am finally living my dream! I am making seven figures per year. I am happy and living my dream of selling happiness to people while making huge amounts of money!

Choice 1 : The end.

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