The journey.

A hypertext narrative by

Marcel Traore

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Word count: 1191

Choice count: 39

Section count: 30

Image count: 30

Error count: 16

Field Related Analysis

Education : 90 matches

(academic, choice, classes, college, continuing, diploma, fail, first, grade, high school, learn, level, reader, school, training, university)

Business : 19 matches

(company, competitive, cost, franchise, manager, money, office, owner, pay)

Film : 19 matches

(experience, focus, franchise, story, title)

Target Structure: (5 matches)

internship (1 match)

learn the ropes (1 match)

office politics (1 match)

purpose (1 match)

retirement (1 match)

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The journey.

End of high school.

I just finish high school now I have the choice of either go to a college or just start a regular job for my level of study to become an engineer.

Choice 1 : New job.

Choice 2 : College choice.

high school

New job.

I have sent my application for various work, and I got an interview with both of the company, but I just got accepted to my dreamed university. What do I do?

Choice 1 : Foot locker.

Choice 2 : USA University.

new job

College choice.

I want to go to a University in the United Stated not only to focus on my study. I also want to go because my dreamed University is there. The only problem is that I want to stay in Canada to be with my friends and family.

Choice 1 : Canada University.

Choice 2 : USA University.

college

Canada University.

I regret not going to my dreamed school in the USA. Plus, I fail most of my classes because I'm always with my friends.

Choice 1 : Do nothing.

Choice 2 : Getting advice on how to do well in school.

University

USA University.

I am glad that I made this choice. I love this environment and my grade are excellent. The only problem is that I witness a girl getting sexual harassed, and I don't know what to do.

Choice 1 : Focus on myself.

Choice 2 : Help her.

US University

Do nothing.

I just fail all of my classes, and now I don't know what to do.

Choice 1 : dropping out

nothing

Getting advice on how to do well in school.

I just graduated from the University on top of my program. Thanks to the girl who help me. Know I can either go to the same company or find another one.

Choice 1 : go find another company.

Choice 2 : Original company.

advice

Focus on myself.

I decided that it was better to focus on myself. I still feel like I should have done something, but I don't care anymore. Now all that matters is my grade and getting my dream job. I don't know if I should socialize or not.

Choice 1 : The end of University without socializing.

Choice 2 : The end of University with friends.

focus

Help her.

I just find the one good for me. I can't imagine my life without her.

Choice 1 : The end of University with friends.

helping

The end of University without socializing.

I have now ended my academic journey. Last summer, I had an internship in a company that I had a strong impression of it due to their competitive ways of doing.

Choice 1 : Apply for this company.

alone

The end of University with friends.

I am now done with my studies, and I am ready to explore my life to his fullest.

Choice 1 : Continuing my career here until I retire.

end of school

Find a other company.

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Write a choice here.

Apply for this company.

I got hired for my first important job as an engineer. I'm so happy. Now I am doing my on job training. I will learn the ropes of this job, but I have a weird feeling about this the more I get to know their ways of doing.

Choice 1 : Keep working there.

Choice 2 : Go find a other job.

apply

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Write this part of the story here and present your reader with choices.

Write a choice here.

Original company.

I have made a bad decision. I end up in an office politics. I hate this job. Every single movement that I make is look at closely by everyone to make me fall. The only this that get me going is that, because I'm here for a long time, I have a high paying job.

Choice 1 : Continuing my career here until I retire.

Choice 2 : Go find a other job.

company

Continuing my career here until I retire.

I am now used to this situation, and I became on top of this company. I just learn to focus on myself.

Choice 1 : Focus on the last part of my career.

keep on going

Go find a other job.

I have made the best choice of my life. Now I find a new job, and I love this one. Now the only thing left is to focus at the end of my career, and my retirement.

Choice 1 : Explore life.

Choice 2 : Focus on the last part of my career.

find a job

Focus on the last part of my career.

I'm one of the richest men on earth, but at what cost? I never went out, and I didn't find the woman of my life. I guess I miss the purpose of life by choosing work over happiness.

Choice 1 : THE END.

career

Explore life.

I'm glad that, in my golden years, I'm able to relax. The only regret I have is to not have the one for me.

Write a choice here.

aventure

Happy.

I'm so happy with the way I live my life. I'm so glad that I don't have any regret, and I even found the one I love.

Choice 1 : THE END.

happy

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Write this part of the story here and present your reader with choices.

Write a choice here.

Foot locker.

I am on the bottom of the food chain in here I don't know if I should keep on doing it or go to a University in Canada.

Choice 1 : Canada University.

Choice 2 : Keep doing it.

foot locker

Keep doing it.

I just spend 5 years in here. I am now the manager of this place. Should I try owning a franchise?

Choice 1 : End of high school.

Choice 2 : keep on going.

keep going

Settle for the minimum.

I am now living pay check to pay check in my 30s. Even if I found myself a girlfriend, I don't think it will last long.

Choice 1 : Keep doing it.

Choice 2 : keep on going.

settle

keep on going.

I know I messed up, but I don't really care. I know that I am alone I don't care I just want to end this life of misery.

Choice 1 : Bad ending.

keep on going

Bad ending.

This is a bad experience in life. I made so many mistakes and settle for less.

Choice 1 : THE END.

dropping out.

I don't know what to do anymore. I don't have a job and a diploma to find one. I also don't have any money.

Choice 1 : Bad ending.

dropping out

Give this section a short title.

Write this part of the story here and present your reader with choices.

Choice 1 : THE END.

THE END.

Your journey as ended. Did your end satisfied you? Try again to find another one.

Choice 1 : start over

end

Heading to the top.

I am now an owner of a franchise. I am living my life with my family of two children. I am happy that I kept ongoing.

Choice 1 : Happy.

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