The History of My life.

A hypertext narrative by

Massiel Martinez

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Word count: 1135

Choice count: 30

Section count: 23

Image count: 22

Error count: 4

Field Related Analysis

Education : 47 matches

(choice, college, emotional, european, first, options, reader, school, training, university)

Nursing : 33 matches

(b.d., body, breathing, cells, cold, culture, diabetes, diagnoses, disease, doctor, fly, formula, glucose, hormone, hospital, hr, im, immune, immune system, insulin)

Paramedics : 29 matches

(breathing, calls, cold, diabetes, disease, doctor, doctors, glucose, hospital, medical, nurse, nurses, nursing, pills, treat, treatment, virus)

Target Structure: (4 matches)

hr (1 match)

internship (1 match)

overtime (1 match)

retirement (4 matches)

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The History of My life.

My studies in Nursing.

This is my last year of nursing studies at Ellis College. I still don't know what exactly I'm going to do. But whatever decision I make, my life will change forever. That's why I have to choose what I want to do. I have two options, one to continue my studies at university and the other to settle permanently in Miami.

Choice 1 : If I am going to The University.

Choice 2 : Move permanently to Miami.

nursing student

If I am going to the University.

I don't know which university I will choose. I excite between the two universities. Which one should I choose? I hope to be able to take the right decision.

Choice 1 : University Of Laval

Choice 2 : University Of Montreal

studying

Move permanently to Miami.

I love the idea of living in Florida, but I have to consider that it would involve many changes in my life, Living in Florida will bring me closer to my family. But I am afraid of the tropical storms that threaten Florida.

Choice 1 : I will find my boyfriend and my family.

Choice 2 : A tropical storm destroys my house

MiamI

I will find my boyfriend and my family.

I would love to see my family again. I also love the idea of seeing my boyfriend again. We will have family dinners and spend Christmas together, in the new home in Florida.

Choice 1 : Find my boyfriend and my family.

Choice 2 : My first job interview in English in Miami.

mariage boho beautiful

After school ...

After I have finished my studies I am going to work at the CHUM Hospital.This is where I always wanted to work. Because they have many advantages for employees.

Choice 1 : I get sick with a virus that destroys my immune system.

CHUM Hospital

I have nowhere to go. I stay on the street.

I live in the street like a homeless person.I have to eat food in the garbage. I don't eat well. I gain 200 pounds (ca. 91 kg) and the doctor diagnoses me with Diabetes. OMG!

Choice 1 : I have Diabetes!

Homeless

The virus destroys my immune system.

He spent many years ill with no hope of survival. My blood clots and my breathing accelerates. Doctors and nurses do not know what treatment is appropriate to treat this disease.I have to take a lot of pills a day and the nurse draws my blood 20 times a day.

Choice 1 : The great discovery of the vaccine

sick person

Our dream comes true.

We bought the house of our dreams next to the beach.

Choice 1 : This was the home of a former pirate.

Beach home

Luck is on our side.

We found a hidden pirate treasure in the backyard of the house. We're rich!

Choice 1 : What do we do with all this money?

Treasure

The great discovery.

I discover a secret formula to invent the vaccine against my own disease. I finally found the cure for the Virus. I am awarded an award and the recognition of the whole planet.That is why they give me a better position in my work company. Wow, I feel good about this recognition.

Choice 1 : I get promoted in the company.

winners

My first job interviews in English.

My first job interview was at the Children's.I am a little nervous because I don't know if they will give me the job. Finally HR calls me to give me the news that I have the job.My training would be paid too.

Choice 1 : I get promoted in the company.

Choice 2 : They don't give me the job.

Job interview

What do we do with all this money?

I have an important decision to make. It is time to take my retirement or do other projects with this money.

Choice 1 : Yes! It is time to take our retirement.

Thinking about life

It is time to take our retirement.

We are ready to take our retirement. Finally we will be able to travel to the countries that I always wanted to know. I would like to know the whole European continent.We will make the trip by plane or by boat.

Choice 1 : I have To fly 18 hours .

travels

Give this section a short title.

Write the part of the story here and present your reader with choices.

Write a choice here.

Nurses will have fewer burnout.

Nurse burnouts are the state of mental, physical, and emotional exhaustion. Caused by sustained work-related stressors such as long hours.

Choice 1 : I am going to make some changes to improve the work of the nurses

Burnout nurses

I get promoted in the company.

In this new job, I will be able to change some company policies with which I have never agreed. For example, I will suspend mandatory overtime for nurses.

Choice 1 : If human resources accepts it

Choice 2 : If human resources do not accept

overtime nurses

Work and study at the same time.

I go to university to finish the BAC I will need to work part-time at the hospital to pay for my studies.If all this is very difficult for me, I will stop studying.

Choice 1 : If I continue studying for 2 more years.

Choice 2 : I leave school.

Work and study

If I continue studying for 2 more years.

During my studies I am going to do an internship in South Africa. I meet many people who need medical assistance. I finally knew this wonderful country! I meet many people who need medical assistance.

Choice 1 : I leave school.

Africa people

I leave school.

If I leave school, I will do the backpack trip that I have always dreamed of.I will visit all of South America.

Choice 1 : I have To fly 18 hours to reach my destination

Choice 2 : I finally went back to school

roaptrip .

I have Diabetes!

What is diabetes? It is when your body does not process food well to use it for energy. Normally, the pancreas produces a hormone called insulin to help glucose enter the cells of our body.

Choice 1 : I need insulin

blood sugar test

I have To fly 18 hours.

Traveling by plane makes me dizzy. It is unbearable. I have cold sweats and feel like I'm going to pass out.

Choice 1 : I fall asleep and when I wake up ...

The flight attendant

I fall asleep and when I wake up ...

I feel better. And I fall asleep during my trip. When I wake up we have reached the city of ...

Choice 1 : Miami

Choice 2 : Brazil

Maps

I arrived at Rio!

Rio Carnival is wonderful. Green, red and blue colors stand out in all the streets. The music is beautiful. I am going to know and enjoy the culture of this beautiful country.

Write a choice here.

carnival