My journey.

A hypertext narrative by

Mégane Lemire

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Word count: 1013

Choice count: 29

Section count: 20

Image count: 20

Error count: 1

Field Related Analysis

Education : 60 matches

(choice, class, college, continuing, high school, learn, management, options, scholarship, school, social, training, university)

Business : 22 matches

(company, employee, management, offer, office, paid, team)

Law : 16 matches

(corruption, fact, harassment, offer, office, option, parent)

Target Structure: (13 matches)

come in handy (1 match)

drawbacks (1 match)

internship (1 match)

learn the ropes (1 match)

office politics (1 match)

on-the-job-training (1 match)

premium wage (1 match)

sexual harassment (1 match)

time management (1 match)

undermining (1 match)

wage (1 match)

wages (2 matches)

corruption (2 matches)

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My journey.

The Start.

I just finish my high school and I have no idea what to do with my life. I have to many options.

Choice 1 : College hockey team.

Choice 2 : Too much to handle.

graduation

College hockey team.

I'm starting to study at the College of Montmorency on the hockey team, and I am also studying in Natural Science at the same time. I don't know how I will handle that, because it can go too way.

Choice 1 : Too much to handle.

Choice 2 : Scholarship.

female hockey

Too much to handle.

I am not able to do both at the same time, Natural Science takes too much of my times. I can not be on the hockey team. I quit! I need more time management.

Choice 1 : The Start.

to tired

Scholarship.

Yes, I got a scholarship to go to university and continuous playing hockey on the university team. But I don't know if I should accept the offer because I am not sure I want to play hockey anymore.

Choice 1 : Accept the scholarship.

Choice 2 : Refuse the scholarship.

scholarship

Accept the scholarship.

Oh! Wrong choices, I got injured in a game and now I paralyze.

Choice 1 : The Start.

injured

Refuse the scholarship.

Unfortunately, I am tired of playing hockey. There are too much corruption, and I am tired of it. I think that some player should not be there because they don't have the talent. But I guess that their parent paid more to get them in the team.

Choice 1 : The Start.

Natural Science.

Great, I got in Natural Science. I will learn a bunch of new things, I am so excited to start. But I have to choose with who I will be friends. There are two people that seem nice in my class.

Choice 1 : William.

Choice 2 : Gabrielle.

William.

I regret talking to this guy. We were friends for a while, but after it got messy. He was flirting with me sometime. But with the time it got more and more and it all finish by a sexual harassment. I have to change program, I can not stay with him.

Choice 1 : The Start.

Gabrielle.

I think I choose the right one because she added a really good influence on me, and I got all straight A's. Now I have to choose witch university I will go. Ontario or McGill?

Choice 1 : Ontario.

Choice 2 : McGill.

straight A's

Ontario.

Unfortunately, that was not a good idea, because to go to this university I had to do long distance with my boyfriend, and that did not work out very well. We broke up.

Choice 1 : The Start.

broke up

McGill.

I love this university! I manage to finish my study and get an internship. I will learn the ropes of the job with an in the job training. I love it so much, it gives me the impression to come in handy just by doing my job, it's awesome.

Choice 1 : The Start.

Job with the company of the parent of my boyfriends.

I have to decide if I continuous or not in the company. I don't know if I am in the right place but at the same time I have fun. The experience I add with the on-the-job-training was very fun.

Choice 1 : Continuing with the job.

Choice 2 : Quit the job.

Continuing with the job.

I chose to continuous on this job because I needed wages. But know the parents of my boyfriend offer my to get a premium wage if I stay there for life. I don't know what to do. Do I take the offer or not?

Choice 1 : I take the offer.

Choice 2 : I don't take the offer.

premuim wage

I take the offer.

That was not a good idea, because of that I broke up with my boyfriend. We were seeing each other too much, and because of that we were arguing all the time. It was not healthy for us, we had to break up.

Choice 1 : The Start.

break up

I don't take the offer.

I prefer to concentrate on the school and get Straight A's. I will have a better wages by finishing my study as a kinesiologist.

Choice 1 : The Start.

Quit the job.

I quit the job because there were too much undermining and I didn't want to get sucked up in this. It was not a healthy place to work, I prefer kipping my relation ship with my boyfriends.

Choice 1 : The Start.

Social Science.

That was a good choice, I get throws all my study including the college and the university and now I have to choose the type of kinesiologist I want to be. do I want to work in a clinic, in team or in studio.

Choice 1 : Clinic.

Choice 2 : Team.

Choice 3 : Studio.

kinesiologist

Clinic.

Oh! That was not a good idea. The office politics is very bad and I don't want to get sucked up in this kind of thing. For example, today I heard someone talking bad about the boss, I was not sure what to do at this moment. I have to change.

Choice 1 : The Start.

kinesiologist

Team.

I think I kind of like the job, because it's an on the job training. I like the fact that I learn the job wild doing it. But there are many drawbacks, like the fact that if the employee shows the job wrong, you will do the job wrong to because that's what you learn.But I am not sure it's right for my let's see what other option I have.

Choice 1 : The Start.

team

Studio.

There is too much corruption in the space of work, I don't like that. For example, today someone came in asking for the boss, claiming that he was a friend of his, and he ends up by having a session all free because he was his friends. I have to find a new place to work.

Choice 1 : The Start.

studio