The life of a college student.

A hypertext narrative by

Laurence Bombardier

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Word count: 1461

Choice count: 22

Section count: 15

Image count: 15

Error count: 1

Field Related Analysis

Topic: Police-Technology

right (3 matches)

sabotage (1 match)

snitch (1 match)

Topic: Corrections-Technology

agent (3 matches)

Topic: Education

assignment (6 matches)

choice (23 matches)

college (1 match)

course (3 matches)

fail (2 matches)

failed (3 matches)

failing (4 matches)

first (1 match)

further (2 matches)

grade (2 matches)

homework (1 match)

intelligence (1 match)

semester (11 matches)

skills (1 match)

student (1 match)

teacher (23 matches)

university (5 matches)

Topic: Dance

back (3 matches)

close (1 match)

out (2 matches)

together (1 match)

Topic: Business

agent (3 matches)

real estate (3 matches)

Topic: Public Administration

worth (2 matches)

Topic: Nursing

b.d. (1 match)

grade (2 matches)

im (17 matches)

Topic: Paramedics

care (1 match)

skills (1 match)

Topic: Web development

close (1 match)

form (1 match)

name (1 match)

pass (3 matches)

write (3 matches)

Topic: Chemistry

percent (1 match)

Topic: Archaeology

close (1 match)

comes (1 match)

form (1 match)

her (4 matches)

here (3 matches)

keep (1 match)

study (1 match)

tell (4 matches)

thing (4 matches)

Topic: Theatre

part (1 match)

Topic: Sociology

care (1 match)

dummy (2 matches)

estate (3 matches)

homework (1 match)

intelligence (1 match)

Topic: Film

acting (1 match)

form (1 match)

Topic: Fine Arts

right (3 matches)

situation (2 matches)

Topic: Law

acceptance (1 match)

agent (3 matches)

assignment (6 matches)

bugging (1 match)

close (1 match)

estate (3 matches)

estate agent (3 matches)

real estate (3 matches)

redemption (2 matches)

Topic: Social Work

help (2 matches)

teacher (23 matches)

Topic: Tourism

agent (3 matches)

demand (1 match)

form (1 match)

Topic: Medical Records

form (1 match)

Topic: Psychology

cant (2 matches)

dream (6 matches)

Topic: Research Methods

percentage (2 matches)

Topic: Applied Linguistics

form (1 match)

Topic: Biology

form (1 match)

grade (2 matches)

intelligence (1 match)

Topic: Construction and Civil Engineering

acceptance (1 match)

cant (2 matches)

fault (1 match)

form (1 match)

grade (2 matches)

half (1 match)

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The life of a college student.

The end of the semester.

It's the end of my last semester in College, if I want to go to university I need to do well in my last assignments. I have hard choices to make.

Choice 1 : Helping my coworker doing the assignments.

Choice 2 : Let your coworker do all the work.

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Helping my coworker doing the assignments.

It's the end of the semester and this assignment is worth a big percentage of my final grade for this course. I couldn't let my coworker do all the work by herself, it was a way too hard work to do alone. Also, if I did let her do all the work, she could've told the teacher and I would've had zero percent, I do not want that. Let's be honest, it was way faster to do it with someone else, it was more fun too!

Choice 1 : You end up passing you assignment.

Choice 2 : You end up failing your assignment.

Helping with the assignments

Let your coworker do all the work.

It's the end of the semester and this assignment is worth a big percentage of my final grade for this course. I am not stressed out at all, I have the nerd with me, she's really good with homework and assignments. I'm pretty sure she's going to do great, and she won't need my help. Also, what is way more fun, is that she's not going to say anything to the teacher, I know her, she's not a snitch. So, she's going to do the work, ace it, I'm going to write my name on it and, we will pass our course. The only thing that is bugging me is that my coworker told me this word by word... "You are never going to do anything great in life if you always depend on other people to do you work!" It was weird, but whatever, she's not right, she's couldn't know.

Choice 1 : Your coworker tells the teacher about what you did... or should I say what you didn't do?

Choice 2 : You're lucky, your coworker didn't say anything...

relaxing while your coworker does all the work

Your coworker tells the teacher about what you did... or should I say what you didn't do?

The teacher sends me an email saying that I didn't do the assignments, that I didn't help. I am furious! I don't understand why she would do that, TO ME!! I could she do that, I thought we were friends, well... not really, but still! I am going to go talk to her right now to understand why she would do such a thing. "Hey! You, come here, I need to talk to you! Why would you do something like that to me?! That was my last chance of passing my semester, and because of YOU, I can't. You ruined my life, I'm going to tell everyone what you did to me, it is NOT okay!!" Do you know what she answered me? She said... "I told you nothing good was going to come out of this. You're never going to do anything good in life if you always depend on others. Also, no one likes you. Good bye, hope to never see you again! Oh! And by the way, I passed my semester."

Choice 1 : You go talk to the teacher and be honest.

Choice 2 : You go talk to the teacher and tell them that it is all a lie.

she tells your teacher

You're lucky, your coworker didn't say anything...

I got my results back... I passed! I'm so happy, I knew this dummy would never say anything to our teacher, she's to scared for that. Because of my intelligence I can now continue my studies and become a real estate agent. None on this is because of luck, no. It's because of hard work. I always work hard for what I want in life, and now, I have it! I'm going to go do my demands for university to have my dream job!

Choice 1 : Congratulations.

She doesn't say anything

You end up passing you assignment.

I got my results back, we passed! I'm so happy for the both of us, and it was so much more fun doing it with someone else, I couldn't think about doing it with anyone else! We can continue our life how we really wanted it. For my part, I'm going to put my demand for the University of Montreal because I really want to be a real estate agent, it is my dream. The closer I get, the happier I get, because I know that I am so close to my dream!

Choice 1 : Congratulations.

Yay! You passed!

You end up failing your assignment.

I got my results back, we failed... It's none of our fault, maybe we didn't study enough, or we didn't do exactly what our teacher wanted. I'm so sad for the both of us. I know that my coworker really wanted this, and so did I. The only thing that I can think of right now, in this situation, is to go talk to the teacher in hopes that they can let us redeem ourselves... we'll see.

Choice 1 : You don't go talk to the teacher.

Choice 2 : Ask the teacher for redemption.

Oh no... You failed

You go talk to the teacher and be honest.

I went... well we went. We talked to our teacher, she wasn't happy, at all with me. But I explained the situation, I was honest, I said that I was sorry for what I did and that I will never do it again, and she let me redeem myself by redoing the entire work. It couldn't end like that, it just couldn't. I'm going to work harder!

Choice 1 : What next?

Choice 2 : You did a great job!

being honest

You go talk to the teacher and tell them that it is all a lie.

I don't care, I DO NOT care, I am going to the teacher and tell them it was all a lie, I am definitely not failing my semester because this dummy can't keep a secret! I said to her... " Hi miss, I swear whatever my coworker told you is all fake! I did a lot of work on our assignments, we did half, half. I don't even understand our she could do that to me... and to you. Telling you lies, I don't know how I would feel if I were you... she is just trying to sabotage my end of semester!" I hope that she is going to believe my, there is no way that I'm failing that, now way!

Choice 1 : Your teacher believed you.

Choice 2 : Your teacher didn't believe you.

telling your teacher it's all a big lie

Congratulations.

"Congratulations", that is the first thing I saw on my acceptance letter form University of Montreal, I'm so happy, my life finally comes together. I kind of feel bad for what happen last end of semester, but I'm certain my coworker didn't need me, and now, look where I am. Paradise!

Write a choice here.

Congrats

What next?

I'm so sad, I failed... I failed my semester, I'm going to have to do it all over again. I know, I know, one semester isn't that bad, but I'm still and of sad, because instead of being closer to my dream of becoming a real estate agent, I'm further...

Write a choice here.

You failed

You did a great job!

OMG! I passed, well we passed! I redeemed myself, I am so so so happy, I can finally put my demands for the University of Montreal and finally live my dream, have my dream job. My life is just starting, and it feels great!

Choice 1 : Congratulations.

Yay!

Your teacher believed you.

Wow, my teacher believed me, LOL. Well, it is now time to redeem myself, I am going to take thus seriously if I don't want anything similar to happen again. I hope that I'm going to pass, I am putting so much effort, more effort than I ever did...

Choice 1 : You did a great job!

Choice 2 : What next?

LOL

Your teacher didn't believe you.

She didn't believe me... how is that possible, my acting skills are so good. I'm actually really sad, I'm just getting further and further from my all time dream... I just hope that I am not 100% going to fail. We will see.

Choice 1 : What next?

You're failing

Ask the teacher for redemption.

My coworker and I were so sad, we did not want to fail, so we went and talk to our teacher, and she let us redeemed ourselves, we are so so so happy, because it gives us another chance to pass the semester!

Choice 1 : You did a great job!

Choice 2 : What next?

Redemption