My career as a town planner.

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My career as a town planner.

Secondary.

School can be very maddening. Especially when my best friends are always scoring straight A’s at every exam. At my last exam, I got 61% which is good. Even though I pulled off, it wasn’t enough for my parents. They said that I always put aside my homework and cursory do them. They also told me that I continue like this, I might fail and not be able to go to CEGEP next year. But I don’t know in which field of study I want to go and my motivation at school is very low. I prefer enjoying my teenager life and go to parties. What should I do? Should I listen to them or do what I want?

Choice 1 : Listen to my parents

Choice 2 : Enjoying my teenager life.

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Listen to my parents.

Enjoying my teenager life I wanted to make my parents proud. That’s why I started to be thoughtful and tried to improve my time management and to pull off my semester. I knew that I needed a thorough understanding of all my subject. I am doing well right now, and I am pulling off. CEGEP registrations are starting soon. I saw that the Arts and Sciences program is a combination of the three pre-university program. It can be I good choice! I am hesitating between the CEGEP of Maisonneuve, which is a public college, or the Jean-de-Brébeuf CEGEP, which is a private college. Cegep Jean-de-Brébeuf is the best college in Quebec, but I don't come from a well-off family, so I may have to find a student job to pay for my study fees. Should I go to Maisonneuve or Jean-de-Brébeuf?

Choice 1 : Maisonneuve CEGEP.

Choice 2 : Jean-de-Brébeuf CEGEP

CEGEP

Enjoying my teenager life.

I had a great time during to whole school year, but was unable to graduate high school. As we say: we learn from our mistakes!

Choice 1 : Try again!

SULK

Maisonneuve CEGEP.

I love my program and my school choice too! The program Arts and sciences is a small program, and we are a closed class so in most of the classes I am always with the same people. I was able to quickly make friends. I started to watch the university programs since registrations are coming soon. The bachelor's degree in town planning is interesting. The one in architecture interests me too! Which one should I choose?

Choice 1 : Town planning

Choice 2 : Architecture

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Jean-de-Brébeuf CEGEP.

I took a student job to pay for my tuition, but I'm having a really hard time dealing with school and work at the same time. What should I do?

Choice 1 : Cancel some classes.

Choice 2 : Not canceling classes.

Choice 3 : Quit school.

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Cancel some classes.

I canceled classes and I feel less overwhelmed. I started to watch the university programs since registrations are coming soon. The bachelor's degree in town planning is interesting. The one in architecture interests me too! Which one should I choose?

Choice 1 : Town planning.

Choice 2 : Architecture.

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Town planning.

The school offers volunteer experiences abroad to top undergraduate students. I was selected. Should I accept it?

Choice 1 : Volunteering abroad.

Choice 2 : Taking a year off.

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Architecture.

This program is way much more boring than I imagined! I just lost a year of my life. Should I change my program and go to town planning or simply quit school?

Choice 1 : Town planning.

Choice 2 : Quit school.

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OJT.

I learned how to work as a town planning trainee. I really liked it because it allowed me to learn and understand the ins-and-outs of the job at my work at the moment and I became friends with some other trainees. I also earned a wage which benefits me because I had just graduated and had no money. The wage was very different from other wages, because of the big amount of the paycheck. I used to think that OJT just had advantages because a friend had just told me all the benefits of becoming a trainee. However, OJT also has drawbacks. For example, there were some evidences of bias in favor of younger candidates which disadvantage older candidates who applied for OJT. Anyway, my supervisor liked the way I work during my OJT and offered to work for their company! What should I do?

Choice 1 : Accept the job.

money

Not canceling classes.

I sank several lessons this session ... I must therefore resume them. I also realize that the program does not interest me as much anymore. What should I do? Continue school and cancel certain classes or simply quit school.

Choice 1 : Cancel some classes.

Choice 2 : Quit school.

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Quit school.

I left school. I am now working full time as a cashier at Dollarama. My parents are angry. I don't like my life. I have become the shame of the family.

Choice 1 : Try again!

dollarama

Taking a year off.

I wanted to travel, but with the pandemic there is nothing I can do. I just lost a year of my life!

Choice 1 : Try again!

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Volunteering abroad.

Volunteers offer invaluable acts of kindness by doing what they do. That’s why I accepted to volunteer abroad. For those who are skeptical about it and think that there is no purpose to work if you don’t earn money, I must say that being a volunteer offers more advantages than working in a dead-end job which proposes more disadvantages. One of my friends who had volunteered in China among the rural population told me that she was able to get a job with a premium wage after returning to Montreal which is a big advantage. Volunteering abroad also allowed me to build in-depth knowledge by spending time with others and by learning a third language. However, I encountered some difficulties at the beginning. Indeed, I wasn’t able to express myself properly. It can be view as a disadvantage, but I learned rapidly. I took this as a challenge. At the beginning, I used body language mixed with English. People laughed at me sometimes, but I really enjoyed this experience. I also made new friends from different countries, and we shared our culture. Now that my this experience is over. Should I go back to Montreal or take a year off and travel?

Choice 1 : Return to Montreal.

Choice 2 : Taking a year off.

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Return to Montreal.

I was recently offered an OJT, but I discover a new passion by attending a special artist painter event. I really love their work and want to learn more about visual arts. Should I accept the OJT or register in visual arts?

Choice 1 : OJT.

Choice 2 : Register in visual arts.

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Accept the job.

I am now working as a town planner! Thanks for your help!

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Thanks

Register in visual arts.

Why should I enroll in another university program? I can draw in my spare time! I was offered an OJT! What a bad decision!

Choice 1 : Try again!

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