My Career Path.

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My Career Path.

Choose the right cegep.

I want to go into the health science program because I am not sure what I want to do in life. I don’t want to study far from Montreal and I don’t want to lose my friends. They are always there to help me pull straight A’s at school. Most of my friends are going to College Maisonneuve, but I have one friend going to College Ahuntsic.

Choice 1 : Go to College de Maisonneuve.

Choice 2 : Go to College de Sherbrook.

Choice 3 : Go to College Ahuntsic.

Student going to cegep.

Go to College de Maisonneuve.

The health science program is quite difficult. It is maddening not to be able to have grades as well as high school, but it’s a different level and there is a lot of competition. I am currently in my fourth and last semester. I need to decide which program I want to study at University. Being in contact with the human body doesn't bother me, however, I don't like blood very much. I don’t like to work in the laboratory neither do I like to work under pressure.

Choice 1 : Medicine program.

Choice 2 : Kinesiology program.

Choice 3 : Nutrition program.

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Go to College de Sherbrook.

It is too far away from Montreal. I won't be able to go there. Try Again.

Choice 1 : Choose the right cegep.

Go to Cegep Ahuntsic.

I want to stay with most of my friends or I won't be able to pull off my science-related classes. Try again.

Choice 1 : Choose the right cegep.

Medicine program.

I don’t have many friends in that program because of the competition between us. I am overwhelmed with homework and exams due for the same week, so I need to have perfect time management. I need to find an internship for the days to come. I am stressed, and I lack sleep because of all this. Also, I know I am not too comfortable with blood, so I think of the worst-case scenario possible that can happen in front of that red substance. I am in trouble.

Choice 1 : Change your program for the next semester

Choice 2 : Find an internship, it isn't a big deal.

Laboratory project.

Kinesiology program.

2 years have passed. I am currently graduating from the kinesiologist program. I learned a lot about myself. I know that I am an athletic person who likes to exercise. I think it is an interesting program to study body posture and body gesture to help other people maintain their physical capacity. I recently got an offer to work in a kinesiologist center but I really want to travel around the world.

Choice 1 : Accept the work offer.

Choice 2 : Take one year off to travel around the world.

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Nutrition program.

I have such good grades in that program. It is mostly about molecules we found in food, and their benefits on the human body. I work a lot with a microscope and it is an easy instrument to manipulate. I am gifted with those tools. Even if I am talented in that domain, I don’t find myself being passionate about it. I don’t know what I am supposed to do next.

Choice 1 : Continue in the nutrition program.

Choice 2 : Take an appointment with a career adviser.

Food

Accept the work offer.

I start my OJT with an employee who works there for more than 2 years. Every single trainee there says to me that he is the best one, and I am lucky. The wage that is given to me is very low compared to other places I applied for. My trainer has a strong bias against one person who works there because He isn’t able to speak without stammering. He has me for the whole month, and I figure out that there are a lot of drawbacks counting the attitude of some employees there. I have the opportunity to be conscious about the ins-and-outs of my career, but I don’t like the atmosphere.

Choice 1 : Stay isn't so bad.

Choice 2 : Quit the center and try to find another place.

Take one year off to travel around the world.

I had an amazing year travelling around Europe and Asia and I accomplished a dream. The disadvantage in that situation is that I don’t have enough money in my bank account to be financially independent. I need to find a job in a haste but with no experience in the field and one year off, I am discouraged. Maybe, it wasn’t the best idea to take that year off.

Choice 1 : Kinesiology program.

Money

Quit the center and try to find another place.

I easily found a job in a sports department as a kinesiologist. The advantage of working in a sports department is that there are only people willing to accomplish their goal, and they have a motivational mindset. My salary is way above the previous wage. I didn’t learn the ropes in the other center, but it doesn’t matter because I have good coworkers and a great environment to work in. It feels like a good place to stay until my retirement.

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Sport department

Stay isn't so bad.

I am in my second month in this center. I have a patient who needs help to improve her body movement. She is really pretty. My coworker flirts with the client instead of working. I feel like she is not feeling comfortable with the professional misconduct. It isn’t the first time, and I can’t put aside that kind of behaviour to do my job properly. After a thorough reflection, I quit the job because it doesn't correlate with my values.

Choice 1 : Accept the work offer.

Harassment

Find an internship, it isn't a big deal.

I applied everywhere, and I have two offers for my internship. The first one is in a hospital emergency department, and the other one is in the operating department.

Choice 1 : Emergency department.

Choice 2 : Operating department.

Emergency department.

There are a lot of patients that need help immediately. It isn’t an easy department for a start in a hospital. I am constantly under pressure because I need to be fast and effective. I do infusion and I manipulate medical machines and instruments like a syringe. I don’t hate that, but I am not comfortable with the constant pressure. It adds more stress and it isn’t a motivating factor to come to work every day. I don’t know what I can do in this case.

Choice 1 : I will get used to it. It isn't the time to give up.

Choice 2 : I need to talk with the manager of the department to maybe have a possibility to change.

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Operating department.

I attend a lung operation with other trainees who are in the same department as me. When I saw the first cut into the skin, I started to shiver. One doctor comes to see me and asks me if I am alright. The moment I open my mouth I pass out. I definitely know that this program isn’t meant for me, and it was the worst experience and error of my life. I need to find another program suitable to my capacities and strengths.

Choice 1 : Change program

Operating room

I will get used to it. It isn't the time to give up.

After weeks of working under pressure, I am really unhappy and discourage. I don't feel good about myself and my coworkers seem to have understood my discomfort. They encourage me to change the program before it is too late. I think it's a good idea.

Choice 1 : I change the program

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I need to talk with the manager of the department to maybe have a possibility to change.

I am on my lunch break. I decide to go talk with my manager. After our discussion, I came to the conclusion that working in a hospital is working under pressure wherever I am. I don’t feel comfortable in this place and on that program. I change my program for the next semester.

Choice 1 : I change my program for next semester.

Continue in the nutrition program.

I have a diploma in nutrition. I really don’t want to work as a nutritionist because I think it is boring work. I must go back to university to do another program.

Choice 1 : Change the program

Diploma

Take an appointment with a career adviser.

The career adviser gave me two choices. I can change the program next semester or I can go volunteer in the nutrition field this summer to test drive the profession.

Choice 1 : Change the program

Choice 2 : Do some volunteering.

Career path

Do some volunteering.

I am not sure about my career path. I decided to go abroad to do some volunteering related to science nutrition. I never volunteer in my life, so I don’t know what to expect. I am so nervous and skeptical about that experience. I have a paper with all the advantages and disadvantages listed down on if I should be volunteering. I go there without any purpose but to help the other volunteers with a premium wage. I have to work in a laboratory for many hours and surprisingly I don't like that. It isn't as easy as it is at school. I came back with invaluable experience, but the desire to pursue a career related to nutrition is over.

Choice 1 : Try again.

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