Word count: 1150
Choice count: 22
Section count: 15
Image count: 15
Error count: 3
Field Related Analysis:
Business : 22 matches (CEO, affordable, bankrupt, budget, business, businesses, company, customers, firm, launch, management, manager, marketing, money, offer, paid, pay, proposals, retail, salary, store, technology)
Education : 17 matches (School, choice, classes, college, credit, diploma, don, failed, first, graduate, graduation, management, school, student, technology, training, university)
Law/Paralegal-Technology : 16 matches (answer, Budget, credit, director, family, House, International, legacy, master, minimum wage, month, offer, poison, road, suicide, transform)
Target Structure:
HR (1 match)
intern (1 match)
overtime (2 matches)
straight A's (1 match)
though (1 match)
wage (1 match)
D-Day is here, after three years of war between waking up at 7 a.m., freezing winter days, bus and metro delays, and the mountains of projects and exams that follow one another, you finally got your diploma, you finished your DEC in Business Management at LaSalle College. You call your parents to tell them the news, they are proud of you, you are happy with your accomplishment until your father asks you the question that you have been trying to avoid for months, "are you going to return home to take over the family business?" You don't know what to answer, you have already applied for a master in finance at McGill, and they have accepted you, but at the same time the companies that your father wants to leave you are already founded and ready to pay you a salary that you couldn't get here. You have to make a choice!
Choice 1 : Go to McGill.
Choice 2 : Go back to your home country.
McGill University is not affordable for an international student, but that's not a problem, your father pays the tuition but you have to work to support yourself. The first year was hard for you, between your job and classes, you couldn't keep up, so you failed your first year, your father is still trying to convince you to go back home, but you want to build your future on your own.
Choice 1 : Persevere.
Choice 2 : Take a gap year.
You decide to persevere, but no matter how hard you try, you can't concentrate on your studies and your work at the same time, you have to choose one of them!
Choice 1 : Studies.
Choice 2 : Work.
You have decided to take a year off to think about a solution to this dilemma, you think about your father's proposals, but you are stubborn, so you decide to drop out of university and apply for a full-time job with your DEC. You have the choice between a retail store manager with a salary of $18/hr, or a marketing manager in a technology firm for $40/hr.
Choice 1 : Retail Store Manager.
Choice 2 : Marketing Manager.
You arrive on the job interview and the director has just welcomed you, he asks you questions and you answer that you are a graduate of Lasalle College in business management, he congratulates you and announces that you will have two months of training paid the minimum wage and it is he who will train you so that you can master the ins and outs of the job. You are a little disappointed, you think of giving up this job and apply for another one.
Choice 1 : Give up the job.
Choice 2 : Accept the job.
It was obvious, you're greedy, but you were never called back for the post, you're looking for another job in the same pay category but you find yourself without a job, and then without a house and now you're walking around the streets of Montreal asking for money for a bottle of beer and some pot.
Choice 1 : Try again
You tell your father the news, you return home to continue the family legacy, your father is happy, he prepares a warm welcome for you, you feel good, you are surrounded by your family who congratulates you and encourages you for the future, your father hires you as an intern for a while so that you get familiar with the secrets of the company, he trains you very well that the student exceeds the master. Now you are thinking of opening your own business instead of taking what your father leaves you.
Choice 1 : Start a new business.
Choice 2 : Manage family businesses.
You ask for a big credit at the bank because your father feels betrayed and does not intend to help you, so you launch alone in your adventure, you think you have an original idea. Unfortunately, your company doesn't work, you go bankrupt, the bank sues you for the money you owe them. You are in jail.
Choice 1 : Try again
Today is the big day, your father is going to appoint you as the CEO of the family company, everyone is proud of you, your father's customers and collaborators are looking forward to working with you. You will not regret your decision, because in a few years you will transform the family business into a multinational company worth billions of dollars.
Choice 1 : The end
You call your family to tell them that you are quitting your job to concentrate on your studies, you ask them to send you money every month so that you can support yourself. Your parents accept but now they are counting on you to get straight A's. Without work, you are stuck between home and university, you are fed up, but luckily your friends are preparing a big party before the final exams and you are thinking of going.
Choice 1 : Stay home and study.
Choice 2 : Go to the party.
You decide to stay home to study in spite of yourself, you don't feel well, you think you are wasting your youth on a diploma, you start asking yourself existential questions. You are depressed! You commit suicide...
Choice 1 : Try again
You're getting ready for the party, you're excited to get out of your monotony between school and home, you plan to have fun tonight. You drink, you smoke, you talk to him, you talk to her. You have fun, you let off steam, you don't count your drinks, you don't count your puffs. You let yourself go... Overdose.
Choice 1 : Try again
You tighten your belt on your expenses, you want to save money so that next session you can pay your expenses without going to work. You work overtime every week even though you are physically and mentally weak now. Your boss can't accept that you work overtime because it's over his budget, you don't accept that he doesn't want you to work more and you get angry. And without even realizing it, you are fired.
Choice 1 : Try again
You don't accept the director's offer, you are now jobless and hopeless.
Choice 1 : Try again
You accept the conditions even if you are a little angry, you shake his hand and leave the store, you cross the road and decide to light a cigarette while your eyes are focused at the end of the poison roll. A car hits you. You are dead.
Choice 1 : Try again