The Adventure of a Student in Fashion

A hypertext narrative by

Geneviève Castellon

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Word count: 1145

Choice count: 14

Section count: 15

Image count: 15

Error count: 17

Field Related Analysis:

Education : 23 matches (Down, School, advanced, choice, class, classes, college, courses, degree, diploma, exam, field, further, grades, homework, management, private, project, report, school, semester, student, teachers)

Business : 17 matches (CEO, abilities, administration, agent, business, company, deal, label, management, marketing, money, organization, paid, partner, pay, the amount, trend)

Computer Science : 12 matches (bit, choice, Class, system, field, lock, naive, Private, recognize, spread, track, virus)

Target Structure:

abolish (2 matches)

lack of (1 match)

maddening (1 match)

overtime (2 matches)

premium wage (1 match)

put aside (1 match)

straight A's (1 match)

though (1 match)

time management (1 match)

wage (1 match)

worthwhile (1 match)

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The Adventure of a Student in Fashion

My Last Minute Essay.

It was the middle of the semester and I had a really hard time with time management. I've put aside a lot of my field related essay like my marketing project. All my life, I've been the king of kid to pull of straight A's without even trying. Now that I'm in college, I realize that I have to put effort and thought into my work. But, I get easily overwhelmed when I accumulate work. I'm out off solutions. Should I pay a colleague to do my essays or do overtime work to get my things together?

Choice 1 : Pay a colleague to do my essays.

Choice 2 : Do overtime work to get my things together.

Homework

Pay a colleague to do my essays.

I offered my college a $100 for one of my essays. He was filled with contentment and took my money with no hesitation. We had a great deal. He was make money and I was doing nothing. I was willing to give him a premium wage for two other essays, which means, $300. I was a little bit skeptical about the situation. We might get caught for cheating. I had an important choice to make : Pay my colleague $100 for one essay or pay him $300 to complete 3 essays in totals.

Choice 1 : Pay my colleague $100 for one essay.

Choice 2 : Pay my colleague $300 to complete 3 essays in totals.

money

Do overtime work to get my things together.

Pulling of grades is not an option anymore. I was powerless towards the situation. I Had so much stuff to do in a short amount of time. My marketing project was due on Monday, I had a trend report due for the next day and a counting exam the same day. I had to set up an organization system. I had to choices : Do all of it the same day or drop a class and focus on my main courses.

Choice 1 : Do all of my homework and essays the same day.

Choice 2 : Drop a class and focus on my main courses.

Overtime

Pay my colleague $100 for one essay.

I paid my colleague in advanced but this bastard had the audacity to tell me : Sorry girl but can not do your essay. I just wanted the money. The situation was maddening. I didn't know if it was worthwhile to yell at him or gently approach my disappointment to him.

Choice 1 : Yell at him.

Choice 2 : I drop out of school and become a striper.

Pay my colleague

Take a risk and pay my colleague $300 to complete 3 essays in totals.

My partner was thrill, so was I. On the contrary, my teachers weren't so happy about the situation. The administration threatened to abolish me from the school if I didn't submit an 9000 words on : Why cheating isn't a solution? My lack of jugement slapped me in the face. Either I drop out of school and become a striper or I do this freaking annoying essays.

Choice 1 : I drop out of school and become a striper.

Choice 2 : I do this freaking annoying essays.

9000 words essay

Do all of my homework and essays the same day.

I was overwhelmed by the amount of work I had to do, but it was such a big accomplishment for me. I was so proud of myself that I thought, If I can do this, I can start my own small business. But now the question is, What kind of business should I do? I could start my own private label, become the CEO of Vogue or a creative director for Gucci.

Choice 1 : Become the CEO of Vogue.

Choice 2 : Be a creative director for Gucci.

Overwork

Drop a class and focus on my main courses.

This was the best decision of my life. I had no more classes on Monday and Friday. I was a free woman. With more time on my hand, I'm not volunteering at a hospital to help with the covid-19 situation. The thing is now I feel sick. Should I go get tested for Covid-19 or do nothing and spread the virus even more.

Choice 1 : Get tested for Covid-19.

Choice 2 : Spread the virus even more.

Covid-19

Yell at him.

This dude was so in shock. I yell so hard at him that his life flashed before his eyes. I was so angry. I didn't recognize myself. All this effort only to have my fashion marketing diploma. I needed to recenter myself. I took a big breath and stopped. I made a mature decision and I did my essay.

Write a choice here.

Yelling

Gently approach my disappointment to him.

I gently approached the situation. This man was laughing at my face because I was naive and stupid. He had the audacity to keep the money even though I explain to him in concerns. I abandoned and forgot about my $100.

Write a choice here.

Gently approach the situation

I drop out of school and become a striper.

This was the best decision of my life. I'm making a lot of money just to have the attention on me. I feel fulfilled doing this job. I'm happier then ever. Flirting with guys is now my new passion.

Write a choice here.

Drop out

I do this freaking annoying essays.

I did this freaking annoying essay. I didn't get abolish from the school. I was getting back on track but my teachers weren't so happy about my behaviours.

Write a choice here.

Essay

Become the CEO of Vogue.

I gave my unimpressive cv to the CEO on the company and she said, you got everything I'm looking. You are now te COE of vogue. Congratulation. To this day, I'm a millionaire and I'm a free women.

Write a choice here.

CEO of vogue

Be a creative director for Gucci.

I went in Italy for my interview with Gucci. They were so impressed with creative abilities that they named me the official creative director of Gucci. Can you believe It? I can't. But you know what, let's just go with the flow and see what happening to me next.

Write a choice here.

Creative director of Gucci

Get tested for Covid-19.

I got tested for covid-19 and my results turned out positive. I didn't give the virus to anyone thankfully. I now have a free day from volunteering at the hospital.

Write a choice here.

Covid-19 test

Spread the virus even more.

I didn't get tested and now all the people from Montreal have the virus. We're in total lock down until further notice. The government pressed chases against me for third degree murder. My life is over. My dream of becoming a marketing agent, a stylish, a creative director and a buyer is over. Good bye liberty and hello prison.

Write a choice here.

Spred the virus