All the decisions you can make.

A hypertext narrative by

Diana Ribeiro

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Word count: 979

Choice count: 28

Section count: 19

Image count: 19

Error count: 2

Field Related Analysis:

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contact (1 match)

heart (1 match)

hospital (2 matches)

nurse (1 match)

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medicine (1 match)

nurse (1 match)

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volunteer (1 match)

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Target Structure:

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hr (1 match)

ins-and-outs (1 match)

internship (8 matches)

leave of absence (1 match)

misconduct (1 match)

overtime (2 matches)

purpose (1 match)

though (1 match)

trainees (1 match)

undermine (1 match)

threats (1 match)

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All the decisions you can make.

The beginning of the end.

You have two exams left before graduating from High School. You really want to succeed and decide to study every day until then. Two days before your exams and you get an invitation from your friend to a party. You decline and tell her that you will party after your exams. But she really wants you to go and tells you that your longtime crush has been asking her if you are going. You are now torn between the two options.

Choice 1 : Go to the party.

Choice 2 : Stay home and study.

Graduation

Go to the party.

Unfortunately, you fail both exams and are not able to enter the Nursing program as you wanted. Come on! You should have known better than to choose a boy or a girl over your education!

Choice 1 : Stop going to school and apply for a dead-end job.

Choice 2 : Retake your missed course next year.

Party

Stay home and study.

You succeed at both exams and will be able to join the Nursing Program at Maisonneuve's College just like you wanted. Plus, you just received an invitation to an internship of your choice with on-the-job training included. You are now thinking of enjoying your summer instead of taking the stage even though it could get you a foot in the door of your career.

Choice 1 : Take the internship.

Choice 2 : Enjoy your summer.

Study

Stop going to school and apply for a dead-end job.

Why would you choose this option? You only failed two exams, it is not the end of the world. You can and should retake the courses and succeed at it.

Choice 1 : Retake your missed course next year.

Retake your missed course next year.

Your first semester is over and you pulled all of your classes. You will now be able to go into the Nursing program. However, you are skeptical about continuing school.

Choice 1 : Continue the Nursing Program.

Choice 2 : Take a sabbatical year to travel.

Take the internship.

You got an internship and can now discover the ins-and-outs of medicine! Furthermore, the hospital manager tells you he might offer you a workplace following your internship!

Choice 1 : Accept the job.

Choice 2 : Decline the job.

Enjoy your summer.

During the summer, you had a boat accident with your friends and do not remember anything.

Choice 1 : Try again.

Lose the internship.

Your parents are angry with your choice and tell you to work for your expenses. You won't be able to continue school and work a full-time job. You start thinking if you really want the internship or if you are not better off with a new hobby. You do not want to give up your dream of working for Doctors Without Borders and volunteering abroad.

Choice 1 : Take the internship.

Choice 2 : Find a new hobby.

Accept the job.

The hospital says you will be employed as soon as the on-the-job training is over. They offer you the chance to work in various units with great trainees, but you hesitate between the Surgery Unit or the Pediatrics Unit.

Choice 1 : Go to the Department of Surgery.

Choice 2 : Go to the Department of Pediatrics.

Decline the job.

You realize that you will never have the same opportunity again and decide to talk a walk to free your mind. While you are walking, you get stabbed by a man who was fleeing from the police after robbing a bank.

Choice 1 : Try again.

Find a new hobby.

You decide to give acting a chance and take drama classes. On your way to one of your classes, you get hit by a car and stay in a coma.

Choice 1 : Try again.

Drama class

Continue the Nursing Program.

You graduate from Nursing School! You remember applying for university but are not sure if you want to continue your studies for now.

Choice 1 : Go to university.

Choice 2 : Take a break from school.

Nursing graduation

Take a break from school.

You are putting in overtime every day and you develop a disease from stress.

Choice 1 : Go back to the beginning.

Go to the Department of Surgery.

A few months later, after a lot of overtime and, you discover that it is a toxic workplace with many cases of misconduct and threats from employees. Your colleagues hinder your evolution and undermine it as a young nurse. Also, treating cerebrovascular accidents and heart attacks every day saddens you, but quitting now does not seem like the best idea.

Choice 1 : Go to the Department of Pediatrics.

Choice 2 : Stay in the Surgery Unit.

Go to the Department of Pediatrics.

You have found your purpose! Your place is with the kids and you know it just by your drive of work. Finally, you think that you should go to university to specialize in Pediatrics, but you need money to pay your debts of gaming.

Choice 1 : Go to university.

Choice 2 : Keep working.

Take a sabbatical year to travel.

You decide to travel alone to India with your backpack and your plane crashes in the Pacific.

Choice 1 : Try again.

Keep working.

You are overworked and do not have enough money for your debts. You are now homeless.

Choice 1 : Try again.

Stay in the Surgery Unit.

Three weeks later, you contact an HR and decide to take a leave of absence. They decide to not give it to you so you quit your nursing job. You start thinking going to university might not be a bad idea after all.

Choice 1 : Go to university.

Go to university.

You do not graduate from university but you meet your future partner and volunteer together abroad!

Write a choice here.

Medical Volunteering