Herve's life

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Word count: 999

Choice count: 14

Section count: 15

Image count: 15

Error count: 6

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Topic: History

culture (1 match)

province (1 match)

research (1 match)

Topic: International-Studies

culture (1 match)

development (1 match)

social (3 matches)

Topic: Nursing

ambulance (1 match)

conduct disorder (1 match)

culture (1 match)

division (1 match)

engagement (2 matches)

et (1 match)

evaluation (1 match)

knee (1 match)

Topic: Law

agent (1 match)

bias (1 match)

child (1 match)

club (1 match)

community (1 match)

contract (1 match)

development (1 match)

discrimination (1 match)

division (1 match)

fact (1 match)

intervention (1 match)

opinion (1 match)

parent (1 match)

Topic: Physical-Rehabilitation

long (2 matches)

side (1 match)

Topic: Police-Technology

right (2 matches)

threats (1 match)

Topic: Paramedics

ambulance (1 match)

crew (2 matches)

intervention (1 match)

practice (1 match)

training (1 match)

Topic: Psychology

accessibility (1 match)

bit (1 match)

conduct disorder (1 match)

culture (1 match)

discrimination (1 match)

dream (3 matches)

field (1 match)

focus (4 matches)

game (1 match)

Topic: Metorology

degree (1 match)

winter (1 match)

Topic: Physics

current (1 match)

focus (4 matches)

reflection (1 match)

Topic: Literary Studies

aside (1 match)

time (4 matches)

Topic: Sociology

bias (1 match)

community (1 match)

culture (1 match)

culture of poverty (1 match)

discrimination (1 match)

fact (1 match)

game (1 match)

goal (1 match)

intervention (1 match)

management (1 match)

open (1 match)

poverty (1 match)

relationship (1 match)

school (14 matches)

small (1 match)

social science (1 match)

theory (1 match)

training (1 match)

wants (1 match)

Topic: Social Work

accessibility (1 match)

activist (1 match)

behavioral theory (1 match)

bias (1 match)

child (1 match)

community (1 match)

competency (1 match)

conduct disorder (1 match)

culture (1 match)

culture of poverty (1 match)

discrimination (1 match)

disorder (1 match)

engagement (2 matches)

help (1 match)

human development (1 match)

intervention (1 match)

parent (1 match)

perspective (1 match)

poverty (1 match)

practice wisdom (1 match)

reflection (1 match)

social (3 matches)

Topic: Research Methods

bias (1 match)

floor (1 match)

intervention (1 match)

theory (1 match)

Topic: Geography

field (1 match)

island (1 match)

ocean (1 match)

Topic: Forestry

management (1 match)

sciences (1 match)

Topic: Theatre

aside (1 match)

Topic: Fire Safety

ambulance (1 match)

Topic: Orthotics and Prosthetics

last (1 match)

Topic: Nuclear Medicine

back (1 match)

knee (1 match)

straight (1 match)

Topic: Wildlife management

fish (1 match)

game (1 match)

management (1 match)

Topic: Public Administration

management (1 match)

Topic: Accounting

bank loan (1 match)

salary (1 match)

Topic: Advertising

current (1 match)

Topic: Aerospace Engineering

matter (1 match)

Topic: Anthropology

culture (1 match)

discrimination (1 match)

Topic: Applied Linguistics

game (1 match)

move (1 match)

Topic: Archaeology

bit (1 match)

college (3 matches)

community (1 match)

contract (1 match)

culture (1 match)

evaluation (1 match)

here (8 matches)

keep (2 matches)

pick (1 match)

study (1 match)

theory (1 match)

Topic: Astronomy

day (1 match)

Topic: Biology

community (1 match)

culture (1 match)

development (1 match)

division (1 match)

edward (1 match)

et (1 match)

fish (1 match)

parent (1 match)

Topic: Business

agent (1 match)

company (1 match)

contract (1 match)

development (1 match)

division (1 match)

loan (1 match)

making money (1 match)

management (1 match)

money (5 matches)

salary (1 match)

store (2 matches)

team (2 matches)

Topic: Chemistry

current (1 match)

degree (1 match)

matter (1 match)

met (1 match)

research (1 match)

science (1 match)

theory (1 match)

Topic: Construction and Civil Engineering

accepted (1 match)

bank (1 match)

build (1 match)

half (1 match)

island (1 match)

Topic: Corrections-Technology

agent (1 match)

intervention (1 match)

young (2 matches)

Topic: Dance

back (1 match)

break (1 match)

knee (1 match)

out (2 matches)

side (1 match)

social (3 matches)

through (1 match)

time (4 matches)

triple (1 match)

Topic: Diagnostic-Imaging

pregnant (1 match)

Topic: Education

choice (22 matches)

college (3 matches)

degree (1 match)

discrimination (1 match)

don (1 match)

evaluation (1 match)

field (1 match)

field of study (1 match)

first (1 match)

goal (1 match)

grades (1 match)

intervention (1 match)

learn (2 matches)

management (1 match)

research (1 match)

school (14 matches)

score (1 match)

semester (1 match)

social (3 matches)

student (1 match)

training (1 match)

university (9 matches)

Topic: Film

crew (2 matches)

experience (1 match)

focus (4 matches)

score (1 match)

take (2 matches)

theory (1 match)

time (4 matches)

Topic: Fine Arts

perspective (1 match)

right (2 matches)

situation (1 match)

Topic: Web development

break (1 match)

build (1 match)

call (1 match)

child (1 match)

field (1 match)

get (4 matches)

join (1 match)

name (1 match)

open (1 match)

parent (1 match)

path (1 match)

write (8 matches)

Topic: Tourism

accessibility (1 match)

agent (1 match)

bias (1 match)

bit (1 match)

boat (1 match)

contract (1 match)

crew (2 matches)

et (1 match)

field (1 match)

first floor (1 match)

goal (1 match)

human (1 match)

league (4 matches)

Topic: Communications

community (1 match)

opinion (1 match)

theory (1 match)

Target Structure:

bias (1 match)

come in handy (1 match)

dead-end job (1 match)

fulfillment (1 match)

income (1 match)

invaluable (1 match)

lack of (1 match)

learn the ropes (1 match)

overtime (1 match)

overwhelm (1 match)

pull off (1 match)

purpose (2 matches)

put aside (1 match)

though (2 matches)

thoughtful (1 match)

time management (1 match)

wage (1 match)

threats (1 match)

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Herve's life

My current situation.

Hi! My name is Hervé Tison. I am just another 18-year-old college student who doesn’t know yet what he wants to do in life. My field of study is Social Sciences, but I would like to specialize in social-work. I recently had a one-the-job-training for a well-payed job. Also, I am currently playing soccer in the province of Quebec triple A league. I sure am great at many things, but I am afraid to take the wrong path after college.

Choice 1 : Stay in school.

Choice 2 : Quit school.

Stay in school.

I decided to stay in school because it is the most invaluable decision you could make. Even though university is a long time, I will build my competency, I am going to get a degree and my life will then be stable.

Choice 1 : Only focus on school.

Choice 2 : School + Work.

Studying

Quit school.

I decided to take a break from school. My parents doubt me, and they are very bias against people dropping out of school. For my concern, it doesn’t matter, I hated school. From now on, I am going to work hard and overwhelm my parent's opinion.

Choice 1 : Focus on soccer.

Choice 2 : Work full-time.

Out of school

Only focus on school.

I still have a small income every week because of my job, but making money is not my purpose right now. In a few years, I will to have a stable job with a much better salary. I'm doing research for the perfect university. I am going to apply for the winter 2022 semester. From my perspective, the accessibility to university means the chance to become an activist and help my community.

Choice 1 : University.

Choice 2 : Girlfriend.

Doing homework

University.

I passed the evaluation! I got accepted at Princeton University in social-work and intervention. The fact that I had no other purpose than having straight A's helped me making it to one of the best universities in the world. It is my greatest fulfillment. I can't wait to learn about human development, discrimination, culture of poverty, conduct disorder and behavioral theory.

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My new school !

School + Work.

I decided to finish my studies in Social Science in college while working on the side. My final grades were not impressive, so was my R score.

Choice 1 : Attempting university.

Choice 2 : Trying something new.

Attempting university.

I got refused to all the universities I applied to. I should never have worked 20 hours every week when I was studying. I wish I won't get threats from my parents.

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Sad

Trying something new.

While I work, I like to socialize. I met someone who works on a boat during the summer. He and his crew fish for lobsters not far from Prince Edward Island et he makes enough money for the entire year. He proposed that I join his crew, it was very thoughtful of him. I always loved the ocean and team-work, I would just need to learn the ropes. It could be a lifetime experience.

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Boat

Focus on soccer.

It is my dream to play professional soccer. I am way better at soccer than at school anyway. My practice wisdom is my best quality. This summer, I am going to play in Quebec’s Premiere League of Soccer, which is a semi-professional division. My goal is to have a great season but it won’t be easy to pull off because I am going to be one of the youngest in the entire league.

Choice 1 : Did not see that coming.

Choice 2 : A young boy’s dream.

Soccer

Did not see that coming.

Everything was going so well. Half-way through the season, I was an unquestionable starter. The other teams started to play me a bit rougher and what I feared the most happened. One of the other team’s defender tackled me right on my knee. I couldn’t move, I was freaking out and I started crying. The ambulance came to pick me up.

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On my way to the hospital

A young boy’s dream.

I managed to be the best scorer even though I was one of the youngest players in the league. A few months after the last game, I receive a call from my agent. He’s telling me the Sevilla Futbol Club spotted me this summer, and they want to propose me a contract.

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Sevilla Futbol Club

Work full-time.

My engagement towards university was never high, so I decided to work and earn a wage. Nowadays, you don’t need to go to school and get important degrees to make money. I like my job and I try to come in handy by doing overtime hours.

Choice 1 : Keep the same job.

Choice 2 : I have an idea.

Keep the same job.

I thought I made a good choice back in the day. I was satisfied with the work that I had but I find myself in the same place that I was four years ago. I’m stuck in a dead-end job.

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I have an idea.

I am so glad that I quit school four years ago. I just found something that makes me happy. I made enough money with my job and I managed to get a bank loan to start my own company. I bought a place on Saint-Laurent street on the first floor, so I could open my store. It is going to be a store where you can leave your dirty shoes, and we will clean them for you.

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Clean shoes

Girlfriend.

I am in a relationship with Ana for years now. She told me that she's pregnant, I'm going to be a dad. After a long reflection, I decided to put aside my studies because I now have a new engagement. I need to have good time management, so I won't have a lack of money while raising a child.

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Ana