My Adventures in Doctor Program.

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Topic: International-Studies

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Topic: Medical-Electrophysiology

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Topic: Medical-Records

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Topic: Nursing

association (11 matches)

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grade (1 match)

health (1 match)

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Topic: Law

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drugs (3 matches)

family (4 matches)

house (1 match)

order (1 match)

profession (1 match)

Topic: Pharmacology

drugs (3 matches)

health (1 match)

medical (1 match)

Topic: Physical-Rehabilitation

medicine (3 matches)

Topic: Paramedics

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health (1 match)

heart (1 match)

medical (1 match)

medicine (3 matches)

profession (1 match)

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treat (2 matches)

Topic: Radiation-Oncology

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Topic: Psychology

association (11 matches)

drive (1 match)

family (4 matches)

Topic: Physics

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Topic: Geomatics

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Topic: Literary Studies

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Topic: Sociology

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bias (1 match)

care (2 matches)

goal (1 match)

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management (1 match)

medicine (3 matches)

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Topic: Social Work

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program (6 matches)

projects (1 match)

teacher (3 matches)

Topic: Research Methods

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bias (1 match)

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friend (3 matches)

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Topic: Geography

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Topic: Forestry

management (1 match)

natural (1 match)

Topic: Theatre

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house (1 match)

part (3 matches)

Topic: Orthotics and Prosthetics

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Topic: Nuclear Medicine

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health (1 match)

heart (1 match)

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treat (2 matches)

Topic: Wildlife management

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management (1 match)

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Topic: Public Administration

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Topic: Accounting

association (11 matches)

Topic: Aerospace Engineering

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Topic: Applied Linguistics

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rating (1 match)

Topic: Archaeology

association (11 matches)

college (1 match)

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Topic: Astronomy

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Topic: Biology

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heart (1 match)

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Topic: Business

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Topic: Chemistry

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Topic: Construction and Civil Engineering

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Topic: Corrections-Technology

order (1 match)

Topic: Dance

back (4 matches)

break (2 matches)

natural (1 match)

time (9 matches)

Topic: Diagnostic-Imaging

body (2 matches)

heart (1 match)

medicine (3 matches)

treat (2 matches)

Topic: Education

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project (11 matches)

school (4 matches)

students (1 match)

teacher (3 matches)

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university (5 matches)

Topic: Environmental Protection Health and Safe

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Topic: Film

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project (11 matches)

take (11 matches)

time (9 matches)

Topic: Dental-Hygiene

visit (1 match)

Topic: Fine Arts

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support (1 match)

Topic: Web development

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plane (2 matches)

profile (1 match)

return (1 match)

session (2 matches)

submit (1 match)

Topic: Tourism

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association (11 matches)

beach (1 match)

bias (1 match)

course (4 matches)

food (1 match)

goal (1 match)

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leg (1 match)

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My Adventures in Doctor Program.

At the beginning.

I'm studying in Natural Science (health profile) at Montmorency College. Also, I pull off despite family problems, so I have straight A's in every subject.More often than not, I study in my home. In addition, it's my last year, so I applied to go in a doctor program at the University of Montreal. I would like to be a doctor, because I'm someone who likes to take care of others. I have all summer to decide what I am going to do next.

Choice 1 : I go to the University of Montreal.

Choice 2 : I take a break for a year.

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I go to the University of Montreal.

My purpose is to be a doctor and have a stable life. Also, I am happy, because I know that the wage in this profession is very high. This is my first day in the medical program at the university. However, I work part-time in a restaurant and I don't know what to do.

Choice 1 : Reduce hours of my work

Choice 2 : Continue with the same hours of my work per week.

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I take a break for a year.

I decide to put aside school to rest a little. In addition, I take an apartment with my best friend. However, I got bored.

Choice 1 : Stay at home.

Choice 2 : I'm going to take a plane ticket to go see my family in Morocco.

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Reduce hours of my work.

By working fewer hours, I have better time management. Indeed, I take more time to finish my school projects and study really hard to learn the ropes. Also, I have less drive of work. My boss is not happy, so I have to decide between two things.

Choice 1 : Leave of my job.

Choice 2 : Change the program.

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Continue with the same hours of my work per week.

I continue with the same hours of my work per week. Sometimes, I do overtime in my work. However, I have less time to study and understand the subjects well. I don't have good grades. Therefore, I regret having continued to work part-time.

Choice 1 : Go to the beginning, and start again!

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Stay at home.

I put aside school, so I could stay at home. As a result, I feel better and less stressed. My best friend suggests that I get involved in an association that helps the poor.

Choice 1 : Always stay at home.

Choice 2 : I get involved in the association

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I'm going to take a plane ticket to go see my family in Morocco.

Arrived in Morocco, I stay with my family. I visit a lot of places. Every day, I go to the beach near my grandmother's house. However, after a year, I start to be tired. Indeed, this travel becomes maddening. Therefore, at a distance, I continue my studies in medicine.

Choice 1 : Go to the beginning, and start again!

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Leave of my job.

I feel much better to have quit my job. I have time to learn in-depth lessons. In addition, I have received my course choices for the next session and I see bias about the teachers that I may have. For the first aid course, I hesitate to choose between two teachers.

Choice 1 : I choose Mrs Julia.

Choice 2 : I choose Mr Nathan.

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Change the program.

I changed my program to biomedical, because I have to support myself personally. I regret a lot, but I have no choice.

Choice 1 : Go to beginning, and start again!

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I choose Mrs Julia.

I love this teacher. She is kind and explains the course very well in a thoughtful way. Therefore, I got a very good mark and passed this course easily.

Choice 1 : Go to beginning, and start again!

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I choose Mr Nathan.

This teacher gives a lot of homework. He corrects the exams very severely. In addition, my best friend told me that it's a very difficult teacher, and he deters these students. For the end of the session, I have to submit a project. I don't know if I should do it alone or in a team.

Choice 1 : I do the project as a team.

Choice 2 : I do the project alone.

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I do the project as a team.

My teammates are not working well and are not serious in this project. Also, there is the presence of flirtation in my team. It annoys me a lot. I don't know if I should change teams or not.

Choice 1 : I change team.

Choice 2 : I stay with the same team.

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I do the project alone.

This project on the human heart is very difficult. I feel very stressed and overloaded. I regret not doing this project as a team.

Choice 1 : Go to beginning, and start again!

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Always stay at home.

A year after staying at home, I feel less and less well. Indeed, I am often tired and my leg hurts because I often stay at home. Also, I want to be alone and not talk to anyone. These drawbacks are very bad for me. I do not know what to do.

Choice 1 : To take drugs.

Choice 2 : Go back to studies.

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I get involved in the association.

My first day in this association was very good. I was able to treat a few sick people. Also, I gave food to poor people. It's a great experience. Though, I have to decide between two things!

Choice 1 : Continue my studies and at the same time, I stay with this association.

Choice 2 : Leave this association.

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To take drugs.

I start to take drugs. I don't take good care of my body. Every day, I cry and I feel depressed.Also, sometimes I have suicidal thoughts.

Choice 1 : Go to beginning, and start again!

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Go back to studies.

I go to university and continue my studies in medicine. I am interested in all the systems of the human body. I hope to finish my studies thoroughly in order to achieve my goal and feel fulfillment.

Choice 1 : Go to beginning, and start again!

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Continue my studies and at the same time, I stay with this association.

I went back to school. At the same time, part-time, I get involved in the association.Also, it is very worthwhile. Indeed, this association allows me to treat people and help them.

Choice 1 : Go to the beginning, and start again!

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Leave this association.

I abolish the other days that I have to go to the association and therefore I leave it. I return to continue my studies in medicine. I try to have straight A's in all subjects.

Choice 1 : Go to the beginning, and start again!

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I change team.

I love my new team. My teammates are working very well. These are people who want to have straight A's in all classes. Therefore, I got a very good rating in this project.

Choice 1 : Go to the beginning, and start again!

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I stay with the same team.

My teammates don't want to listen to my ideas. Also, they never ask me for my opinions, and they put back the project in late. I did not get a good grade in this project.

Choice 1 : Go to the beginning, and start again!

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