My school life at Ahuntsic College.

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Section count: 17

Image count: 17

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Education : 96 matches

(choice, classes, coach, college, colleges, degree, down, first, games, grades, learn, management, marks, points, scholarship, school, skills, student, students, teachers, training, university)

Business : 25 matches

(business, image, management, money, paid, pay, team)

Forestry : 11 matches

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My school life at Ahuntsic College.

The beginning of my school life.

It was the beginning of the school year. I had to choose how I would spend my college life.

Choice 1 : Starting as a new member of the American football team.

Choice 2 : Starting as a new member of the soccer team.

Ahuntsic College

Starting as a new member of the American football team.

It is the day of the selection and I'm feeling well. The selection started and I aced all the exams. I was accepted in the team, and I was playing on the offence team as a wide receiver.

Choice 1 : Going to all the practices.

Choice 2 : Missing some practices.

american footbal team

Starting as a regular student in business management.

It is my dream to own big companies and make a lot of money. I also like being my own boss. This degree will help me success in life.

Choice 1 : Start working in a business oriented job.

Choice 2 : Concentrate on school.

Student business management

Starting missing classes to do more training.

It is the time of the finals for school, but I am missing classes to train more for the upcoming game. The coach notices that I am playing better and put me on the first team. I am overjoyed. The day of the game I scored half of the team points. I like the feeling of winning, so I decided to keep training. My grades are becoming low, but I am still passing.

Choice 1 : I went to university with an American football scholarship.

winning my first game

Going to all the practices.

I have morning practices before school and some after school. I also have tactical meetings before games. I went to all the practices and to all the meetings. I was the first to attend practice and the last to leave. The coach liked my determination but I wasn't on the first team because I wasn't good enough.

Choice 1 : Starting missing classes to do more training.

Choice 2 : Concentrating on school because I want to be a doctor.

Training drills

Missing some practices.

I have morning practices before school and some after school. I also have tactical meetings before games. I skipped almost all of them because I am spending time with girls. The coach is angry at me, but I am the most talented member on the team, so he put me on the starting team. A lot of players are envious and jealous of me because I am on the first team without putting efforts, and I am popular with the girls.

Choice 1 : Going out with more and more girls.

Choice 2 : Falling in love.

me and one of my girl

Concentrating on school because I want to be a doctor.

It is the time of the finals for school, I keep going to the practices but I started concentrating more and more on my studies. I am still not good enough to be on the first team. My grades went up and I have really good grades.

Choice 1 : I got accepted in university as a medicinal student.

studies

I went to university with an American football scholarship.

My hard work paid off, and I am now the best star player in all the colleges. I got into university with a scholarship with the help of my coach. I barely passed my exams and I think the teachers were nice with me because I am the image of the school.

Choice 1 : New start

succes

I got accepted in university as a medical student.

I aced all of my exams and obtained the best marks at the end of the year. I got accepted in one of the best universities of the country. I was happy because I now have the chance to become a doctor, but I was sad that I didn't become a good American football player to play in university.

Choice 1 : New start

Medical student

Going out with more and more girls.

I am the most popular person in my school and all the girls love me. I am still on the team but the coach despises me. I am not the star player anymore. I started doing drugs at parties. I had some affairs with some girls at the party.

Choice 1 : Father and a drug addict.

parties

Father and a drug addict.

I am now a father with one of the girls at a party. I am trying to stop taking drugs, but I can't. The coach expelled me of the team. I stopped studying to attend to the needs of my new unwanted family.

Choice 1 : New start

no life

Falling in love.

I fell in love with the most beautiful and popular woman in the school. I started missing more and practices and the coach down graded me on the second team. I was sad but at least I was happy with my new girl. In the end, she cheated on me with another guy on the team because she was there only for my fame and not for what I represent.

Choice 1 : Not depressed.

Double face

Not depressed.

I am so sad that my girls cheated on me but It removed my distraction from my sport. I went all out in the training and came back on the first team. I am so talented that the coach forgave me. I gave my all in the training and even got accepted at the university in their American football team.

Choice 1 : New start

hardwork

Start working in a business oriented job.

I started working part-time at Best Buy to learn some practical skills in management and earn some money on the side to avid student debts. My grades were fine but not the best.

Choice 1 : Success with my peer at my job.

My job

Concentrate on school.

I study every day without a rest to have the best grades between my comrades in my program. I have the best grades and have a great prospect for one of the best universities in the country.

Choice 1 : Success in university.

studying

Success with my peer at my job.

I got accepted to university but not the best one. It is normal because my grades were lacking because of my invested time at my job. I am still happy because Best Buy liked how I worked hard, and they are paying my tuition for university, and they promised me if I graduated, I will be the Boss of one of the Best Buys establishment.

Choice 1 : New start

boss

Success in university.

I got accepted in the most prestigious university in the country. I accumulated a lot of students debt but I could pay all of it with the first check of my future job.

Choice 1 : New start

Graduaded