Finding my way.

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Olivia Colliou

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Word count: 536

Choice count: 18

Section count: 10

Image count: 10

Error count: 39

Field Related Analysis

Education : 28 matches

(choice, college, degree, first, grades, learn, management, school, skills, spiritual)

Business : 13 matches

(business, management, office, secretary)

Construction and Civil Engineering : 5 matches

(dead end, half, plan, programme)

Target Structure: (5 matches)

foot in the door (2 matches)

hr (1 match)

lack of (1 match)

office politics (1 match)

ojt (1 match)

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Finding my way.

The first step.

I will finish my program at Montmorency College in 2 year and a half. My program is Business Management and I can have a real job directly after I finish collège. Although I don't know if that programme is really for me because I hate accountancy. So should I keep going?

Choice 1 : Continue my programme

Choice 2 : Do a DEP

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Hard way.

I finish my degree in Business Management and have really good grades in everything but my grades in accountancy are really bad and making my grades not look the best.

Choice 1 : Go do a DEP

Choice 2 : Continue even if I dont look the best

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Easy way.

If I choose to do a DEP because managing college is to difficult I will have chose to make. Where do I want to go and in what will I study?

Choice 1 : I go to the closses school

Choice 2 : Go to a school more far away

Choice 3 : Study to Become an esthetician.

Changing every thing.

I will go in Laos to do a spiritual retreat for three moths. And after that I will work as a secretary because I have the skills to do that after a year of Business management.

Choice 1 : Go to the retreat

Choice 2 :

Choice 3 : Will that become the job I will do for the rest of my life ?

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The closses school.

If I go to the closses school nothing will really change I would not see different people. So I decide after finishing my DEP to go travel.

Choice 1 : I go travel in Laos

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I go to a school far away.

I discover new friend and learn a lot about my self so I decide to study to become a esthetician at the school that I am at the moment.

Choice 1 : Study to become an esthetician.

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Becoming an esthetician.

I'm loving my job but I realize later on that it's a dead end job... So I have choses to make.

Choice 1 : Realize that it's a dead end job so I change my plan and become a secretary after going on a retraite

Choice 2 : Even if I know that it's a dead end job continue working because that jobs makes me happy

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The retreat that change my perspective.

I realize that it was best for me to return to something stable like in a office.

Choice 1 : Go to the entrevue for the post of secretary for a big compagnie

The new job.

Working as a secretary for a big compagnie of Management so it can give me foot in the door. But for the moment I'm steal getting traine by my superviser who is doing OJT ..

Choice 1 : Don't stay because there's a lack of respect in the office politics

Choice 2 : Stay because it will give me a foot in the door of a big compagnie

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Get the job.

After exchanging with the HR people they told me that I got the job and that I could start next week.

Choice 1 : Go to my first week of work