Good or Bad Choices ?

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Word count: 1174

Choice count: 40

Section count: 27

Image count: 27

Error count: 7

Field Related Analysis:

Nursing : 11 matches (cream, dietetics, Health, hospital, medical, medicine, plane, play, reaction, sleep, stress)

Education : 11 matches (P, School, campus, choice, don, failed, first, learn, school, teacher, university)

Tourism : 9 matches (Europe, Food, Party, Plane, Restaurants, door, leg, p.m, through)

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Good or Bad Choices ?

Start at the beginning.

I have just finish my French BAC, and I'm perplexing. I don't know what to do... Go? Stay?

Choice 1 : Go to Canada.

Choice 2 : Stay in France.

Canada vs France

Go to Canada.

I arrived in Canada. I love this country! But I have to continue my studies... But I also would like to see what this country has to offer to me.

Choice 1 : Start a DEC in dietetics.

Choice 2 : Take a year to discover Canada.

Gaspésie

Stay in France.

Finally, I stay in France. Now I have to decide whether I follow my best friend to travel around Europe or go to university to study medicine.

Choice 1 : Go to university to study medicine.

Choice 2 : Travel around Europe with my best friend.

France

Start a DEC in dietetics.

This domain is made for me! I will soon have my last exams from my last session so it's the final! I have to study but do I choose to study at home or go to campus every day...

Choice 1 : Study at home.

Choice 2 : Study on campus.

study

Take a year to discover Canada.

It's cool to discover Canada but financially it's not cool hahahah! So, I have to find a way to make money! Do I take a job or ask my parents to continue my discovery?

Choice 1 : Ask my parents.

Choice 2 : To work.

?

Go to university to study medicine.

I have worked very hard to be successful in all of my medical years. But when I started working I didn't like it at all!! I have to go back to school to do what I love!

Choice 1 : Start at the beginning.

Fail

Travel around Europe with my best friend.

It's cool to discover Europe but financially it's not cool hahahah! So, I have to find a way to make money! I worked in fast food restaurants for years and never went back to school.

Choice 1 : Start at the beginning.

FAIL

Study at home.

I need to study for my final exams but Netflix released a movie that I wanted to see a long time ago. A movie with ice cream? Or study?

Choice 1 : Netflix and ice cream.

Choice 2 : Study my final exams.

?

Study on campus.

There is a big party tonight but I have to study for my final exams. What do I have to do?

Choice 1 : The big party.

Choice 2 : Study my final exams.

campus

Ask my parents.

My parents are very strict, especially when it comes to studying. When I told them that it had taken a year to discover Canada, their reaction was not what I expected. They want me to take the first plane back to France.

Choice 1 : Start at the beginning.

FAIL

To work.

I worked in fast food restaurants for years and never went back to school.

Choice 1 : Start at the beginning.

FAIL

The big party.

The party is awesome! This is the best I have done. My friend tells me to take a shot but I want to go dancing with the others...

Choice 1 : Take a shot.

Choice 2 : Go dancing with the others.

big party

Study my final exams.

I study, I study and I study. I spend my time doing this. I have health problems due to stress and have to take time off from my studies.

Choice 1 : Start at the beginning.

stress

Netflix and ice cream.

After the film, I started a series, I think I heard a noise, am I going to see, or I am going to sleep because it is very late ...

Choice 1 : To sleep.

Choice 2 : Go in the direction of the noise.

ice cream

Study my final exams.

I start studying but my friends ask me if we can study together in face time, what do I do?

Choice 1 : Study with my friends.

Choice 2 : Study alone.

study

Take a shot.

I drank a shot, then 2, then 3 and I never quit. I wake up, I look at the time ... DISASTER! It's 3 p.m... My exams were this morning... I failed my exams...

Choice 1 : Start at the beginning.

3 p.m.

Go dancing with the others.

I love to dance but I didn't expect so many people, I got into a huge crowd and couldn't get out ... I had a panic attack, and I woke up the next day in a hospital bed... I just missed my exams...

Choice 1 : Start at the beginning.

hospital

To sleep.

I fell asleep so late that I didn't wake up in time for my exams.

Choice 1 : Start at the beginning.

sleep

Go in the direction of the noise.

I get up making as little noise as possible, I look out my bedroom door and I see someone! There is a person in my house ... Do I confront him or do I stay hidden?

Choice 1 : Confront him.

Choice 2 : Stay hidden.

noise

Study with my friends.

It's always more fun to study together. We start an aperitif and my drink falls on my computer! He doesn't want to come back on again but I hadn't finished studying ...

Choice 1 : Start at the beginning.

oops

Study alone.

I've been studying for 2 hours. Have I put on music or continue to study without music?

Choice 1 : With music.

Choice 2 : Without music.

study

Confront him.

Abruptly, I open the door of my room and I shout with all my strength to warn the neighbors. And suddenly I find myself with a bullet in my leg and the thief is gone.

Choice 1 : Start at the beginning.

gun

Stay hidden.

I remain hidden in my room, letting my series continues to play. When I hear my front door slam, I look through the hole in my door and the thief is gone, but he took my computer which was left in my kitchen. So, I can no longer study.

Choice 1 : Start at the beginning.

thief

With music.

I can't concentrate with the music and start to dance. So, I start to do a workout, then I go to wash and go to bed. I arrive on time for my final exams but I totally forgot to learn the last chapters. I failed my exams.

Choice 1 : Start at the beginning.

sport

Without music.

I continue to study but, I do not understand the last chapters, do I ask my teacher and I persevere?

Choice 1 : I persevere.

Choice 2 : Ask my teacher.

?

I persevere.

I persevere and I think I have understood the last chapters. I go to bed reassured. I take my exams and when the results fall, I haven't passed my exams.

Choice 1 : Start at the beginning.

fail

Ask my teacher.

My teacher explains everything to me. I go to my final exams confident. The results fall, I PASSED.

Choice 1 : Start at the beginning.

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