Elliot's story

A hypertext narrative by

Elliot Boon

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Word count: 290

Choice count: 8

Section count: 6

Image count: 6

Error count: 2

Field Related Analysis:

Target Structure:

dead-end job (2 matches)

ins-and-outs (1 match)

learn the ropes (1 match)

OJT (2 matches)

on-the-job-training (5 matches)

pension (2 matches)

retirement (1 match)

though (1 match)

trainee (1 match)

wage (1 match)

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Elliot's story

High School.

I just finish high school and I got my diploma. I have many choices for my future, but I am perplexed.

Choice 1 : Dead-end job.

Graduation ceremony

Dead-end job.

My high school's diploma is enough for me, so I will work for Rona in Mascouche. Before I work full time at this store, my boss tells me that I have to do some on-the-job-training.

Choice 1 : I'm not doing an on-the-job-training.

Choice 2 : I'm doing an on-the-job-training.

Wood yard

I'm not doing an on-the-job-training.

I don't want to do OJT, because they are useless and I don't need it. Therefore, my boss fire me. Thus, I will work in a different place.

Choice 1 : The end

An employee gets fire

I'm doing an on-the-job-training.

I am a trainee and I learn the ropes of my job. Thus, I know the ins-and-outs of it. My job's wage isn't what I was expecting for, but I can live with it. I don't know if I have a good pension while my retirement. Honestly, I don't care. I still need to be careful, because a lot of accidents can happen at my workplace.

Choice 1 : I don't work carefully.

Choice 2 : I work carefully.

Rona's employee

I work carefully.

Even though I complete my OJT, I still need to be careful in my workplace. By being careful, I live my life by working in the wood yard. When I retire, I realise that my pension isn't enough to keep my house. Therefore, I finish my life in the street.

Choice 1 : High School.

A homeless person

I don't work carefully.

One day, I was working without looking around me. Unfortunately, a delivery of woods has fallen on me and that's how I died.

Choice 1 : High School.

A coffin