Strong Lily

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Word count: 1406

Choice count: 11

Section count: 9

Image count: 9

Error count: 13

Field Related Analysis:

Computer Science : 12 matches (aspect, bit, child, choice, crash, hands on, name, News, parent, rate, True, trusted)

Law/Paralegal-Technology : 11 matches (account, brain, Child, family, Financial, House, interest, living, mission, parent, promise)

Tourism : 11 matches (Marketing, Program, Resources, baggage, bit, brand, marketing, multiple, program, rate, single)

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Strong Lily

Early life.

This is the story of a little girl called Lily, Lily is now 8-year-olds living with her single mother. Every day is a struggle for them, but Lily has always been positive and always keeps a smile on her face. Lily’s father passed away a few years ago when she was just 5 years old her mother Judy was forced into becoming a single parent to her only child. He was only 30 years old and passed away in a car crash on his way to work to provide money to his struggling family.

Choice 1 : Judy should get another job to support her family

Choice 2 : Lily should stay in school and ecourage her mother Judy to look at the positive side.

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Financial Ruin.

Financially Lily’s father Robby owned a business and was making the money for the whole family to survive, when he passed it put Judy in a very difficult financial situation who hasn’t worked since having Lily. For Lily growing up and seeing her mother's struggle financially, changed her forever she would always tell her not to worry and that one day they would be laughing about this moment. Lily made it her life's mission to provide a better life for not only her but her future family, she made a promise to her mom that one day she would take all of her struggles away. When Lily was just a teenager her mother was diagnosed with brain cancer and her medical bills become so high, they had to sell their house and move in with Judy’s parents.

Choice 1 : Lily getting a job to help out her parents.

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Let's get to work.

It was at that moment that Lily become motivated to build her brand and get her family out of misery. She went on to work hard on herself & her studies always having her family baggage as motivational factors in the back of her head. After finishing her studies Lily went on to start her own fashion brand, since she was just starting, she was hands on, on almost every aspect of the brand but took the decision to hire one more person. After doing multiple interviews with a lot of people Lily finally met her match her name was Jessica, she had just graduated from fashion marketing from LaSalle College and working for Lily would be her internship for her program.

Choice 1 : Lily should be more cautious of who she trusts.

Choice 2 : Lily should've looked for someone more qualified for the job.

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The tragic Empire.

She grew up to build a multi-millionaire fashion label and was making enough money for not only support her mother Judy financially for the past few years especially but also her extended family members. Back when Lily was just a teenager her mother was diagnosed with brain cancer and her medical bills become so high, they had to sell their house and move in with Judy’s parents. Lily now at 30 years old got the news this morning April 14, 2021, her mom passed from Cancer and wasn’t with her during her final moments. Growing up poor, he always thought that money would fix everything and make everyone happy. When Judy passed away Lily changed forever and learned that life is more than money and that money can’t bring you happiness.

Choice 1 : Lily should've spent more time with her mother.

Choice 2 : Lily should've looked around her and realise her true blessings sooner before they were taken away.

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Reached for help.

Financially Lily’s father Robby owned a business and was making the money for the whole family to survive, when he passed it put Judy in a very difficult financial situation who hasn’t worked since having Lily. But Judy decided her to the best of her ability within her resources to find financial aid. She reached out to her bank on behalf of her husband and herself and was able to place a bit of money into an account with the interest rate. For Lily growing up and seeing her mother's struggle financially, changed her forever she would always tell her not to worry and that one day they would be laughing about this moment. Lily made it her life's mission to provide a better life for not only her but her future family, she made a promise to her mom that one day she would take all of her struggles away. When Lily was just a teenager her mother was diagnosed with brain cancer and her medical bills become so high, they had to sell their house and move in with Judy’s parents.

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Lily getting a job to help out her parents.

Lily made a decision to get a job to help out her struggling parents in anyway she could and now that she was a teenager she could get a job. It was at that moment that Lily become motivated to build her brand and get her family out of misery. She went on to work hard on herself & her studies always having her family baggage as motivational factors in the back of her head. After finishing her studies Lily went on to start her own fashion brand, since she was just starting, she was hands on, on almost every aspect of the brand but took the decision to hire one more person. After doing multiple interviews with a lot of people Lily finally met her match her name was Jessica, she had just graduated from fashion marketing from LaSalle College and working for Lily would be her internship for her program.

Choice 1 : Let's get to work.

Lily should stay in school and ecourage her mother Judy to look at the positive side.

It was at that moment that Lily become motivated to build her brand and get her family out of misery. She went on to work hard on herself & her studies always having her family baggage as motivational factors in the back of her head. After finishing her studies Lily went on to start her own fashion brand, since she was just starting, she was hands on, on almost every aspect of the brand but took the decision to hire one more person. After doing multiple interviews with a lot of people Lily finally met her match her name was Jessica, she had just graduated from fashion marketing from LaSalle College and working for Lily would be her internship for her program.

Choice 1 : Let's get to work.

Lily should be more cautious of who she trusts.

It was at that moment that Lily become motivated to build her brand and get her family out of misery. She went on to work hard on herself & her studies always having her family baggage as motivational factors in the back of her head. After finishing her studies Lily went on to start her own fashion brand, since she was just starting, she was hands on, on almost every aspect of the brand but took the decision to hire one more person. After doing multiple interviews with a lot of people Lily finally met her match her name was Jessica, she had just graduated from fashion marketing from LaSalle College and working for Lily would be her internship for her program. She trusted Jessica & LaSalle College that she would be able to fufill the position.

Choice 1 : The tragic Empire.

Lily should've looked for someone more qualified for the job.

It was at that moment that Lily become motivated to build her brand and get her family out of misery. She went on to work hard on herself & her studies always having her family baggage as motivational factors in the back of her head. After finishing her studies Lily went on to start her own fashion brand, since she was just starting, she was hands on, on almost every aspect of the brand but took the decision to hire one more person. After doing multiple interviews with a lot of people Lily finally met her match her name was Jessica, she had just graduated from fashion marketing from LaSalle College and working for Lily would be her internship for her program. She had a hard time finding someone for the job so she ended up hiring Jessica who is a bit under qualified.

Choice 1 : The tragic Empire.