Architecture.

A hypertext narrative by

Jérémie Duchesne

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Word count: 1155

Choice count: 24

Section count: 25

Image count: 24

Error count: 5

Field Related Analysis:

Education : 19 matches (Enterprise, School, choice, class, college, don, evaluate, first, head, homework, market, project, reader, school, semester, student, teacher, technology, university)

Computer Science : 18 matches (architecture, bridge, child, choice, Class, computer, enterprise, jump, open, pass, period, printer, reader, running, search, table, threat, design)

Dance : 18 matches (Back, Bridge, bridge, Couple, Draw, draw, Face, jump, modern, Out, Run, Running, Step, step, Time, Turn, Walk, Wall)

Target Structure:

HR (2 matches)

intern (1 match)

internship (2 matches)

maddening (1 match)

misconduct (1 match)

premium wage (1 match)

straight A's (1 match)

wage (3 matches)

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Architecture.

Montmorency College

The beginning.

It is your final semester of architecture technology at Montmorency College. For the next step of your life, you don't know what to do but you know that the labor market can wait. Finally, you don't have a choice.

Choice 1 : Go to Montreal University.

Montreal University

Go to Montreal University.

It is your first day of school and you are stress. You put on your new cloths to give a good impression to your colleague. When you enter the class, only one place was left and it was just aside a girl.

Choice 1 : You sit aside her.

Choice 2 : You go at the back of the class and stay on you feet.

Choice 3 : You decide to turn around and leave the class.

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Choice 1 :

Architect office

Go on the labor market.

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Choice 1 :

laughing baby

You sit aside her.

You start talking to her and after a while, you notice that she giggle even if you don't make jokes.

Choice 1 : You like the way she is.

Choice 2 : The way she giggles make you crazy.

Stay on your feet in class

You go at the back of the class and stay on your feet.

The teacher starts the class and after five minutes your legs start shaking and you can't concentrate.

Choice 1 : You sit on the ground.

Choice 2 : Ask questions to forget the notion of time.

Leave the class

You decide to turn around and leave the class.

Write this part of the story here and present your reader with choices.

Choice 1 : Open a firm with your friend.

Choice 2 : You go working for your uncle.

new couple

You like the way she is.

You have been flirting with her for a while you are now a new couple. In that same period, you need to search for an enterprise that will accept you as an intern.

Choice 1 : You get except for your internship in a big architect firm.

Choice 2 : She cheats on you with your best friend.

Architect

You get except for your internship in a big architect firm.

Congratulation, after the firm gives you a job after the university and now your girlfriend will give the birth of your child in few months.

Write a choice here.

dead-end life

She cheats on you with your best friend.

You are really sad and when you are at school, you find all maddening. You just have paid a new computer for Autocad but you are too depressed to make good work. You decide to have a walk but the only thing you think of about your future is a dead-end.

Write a choice here.

excellent grade

The way she giggles make you crazy.

You think she is a little stupid, and you decide to stop talking and listen to the teacher. A few weeks later, you receive straight A's in all your program exams.

Choice 1 : you get a job after the university as a residential architect.

Choice 2 : You are at an interview but the HR likes you too much.

modern house

You get a job after the university as a residential architect.

You make a big modern house for a bilinear and you are very proud of yourself. Your boss gives you a better wage because he was impress.A few days later, there was an earthquake and the house collapse because you forgot about a detail. So, the boss fired you.

Write a choice here.

sexual harassment

You are at an interview and the HR likes too much.

Your first day at job, you went to the bathroom and the woman that evaluate you at your interview came in. She pushes you on the wall and kisses you. The day after, you never came at your job.

Write a choice here.

Falling asleep at school

You sit on the ground.

You fall asleep in class and when you woke up, nobody was there except the teacher.

Choice 1 : You run out the class the faster you can.

Choice 2 : You talk with her.

Broken arm

You run out the class the faster you can.

While you were running, you fall on the ground and broke your arm. The teacher laughs at you and tell you to never come back again in her class. You end up at the hospital and get out with a beautiful plaster on your arm. You can't draw anymore.

Write a choice here.

Talking with your teacher

You talk with her.

You decide to apologize and assure her that you will never misconduct yourself again.

Write a choice here.

Ask a question

Ask questions to forget the notion of time.

After the class, the teacher asks you to stay and offer you a job at his firm because he sees in you an involved student.

Choice 1 : You accept the offer.

Choice 2 : You refuse.

Falling

You accept the offer.

You start to work with him and you realize that he was stealing his clients by increasing the price for no reason. You threat him to stop but he doesn't want. You hit him in the face and when he falls, he hurts his head on a desk. You realize that he doesn't get up, he doesn't breathe anymore.

Write a choice here.

Model student

You refuse.

You don't have time to have a job. You focus on your homework and projects to become the best student of the architectural cohort.

Write a choice here.

Little architect technologist firm

Open a firm with your friend.

School isn't for you anymore. You decide to go on the labor market with your friend in a little enterprise as an architect technologist.

Choice 1 : You make a really good team with your friend.

Choice 2 : You are bored with this enterprise.

Best friend

You make a really good team with your friend.

You make awesome project, the house you design with him are incredible. You really enjoy your job and you make a good wage. He is very good with Revit and Photoshop and it's helping you for having a lot of clients.

Write a choice here.

Rejected

You are bored with this little enterprise.

You want bigger projects and become more popular as an architect technologist. After you give you resignation, you try to find a well-known firm. Each time, nobody wanted you. So, you end up on a bridge and jump.

Write a choice here.

Family business

You go working for your architect uncle.

Your uncle offered you two vacant positions in his firm. You need to decide what you want the most.

Choice 1 : Take care of the indoor design.

Choice 2 : Become an expert in junctions.

3D printer

Take care of the indoor design.

You pass your time on the drawing table to make new design. You use the new 3D printer and all of your clients are impress of your talents.

Write a choice here.

Window detail

Become an expert in junctions.

This job isn't the most thrilling but you known you will receive a few premium wage.

Write a choice here.

The End.