Help Heather make choices

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Cheryl Chan

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Word count: 1113

Choice count: 32

Section count: 21

Image count: 21

Error count: 29

Field Related Analysis:

Dance : 12 matches (Back, Check, Cut, Face, Flat, Front, Numbers, Out, Run, Shadow, Time, Walk)

Prehospital Emergency Care : 8 matches (hospital, sleep, stroke, patient, concussion, disease, faint, doctor)

Psychology : 8 matches (bit, concussion, forgetting, patient, run, shadow, sleep, stroke)

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Help Heather make choices

You are Heather! You just woke up late for work but your still a bit tired.

You have two choices, you could get ready and maybe make it on time or you could sleep a while longer, but your boss might be very mad at you.

Choice 1 : Get Ready!

Choice 2 : Sleep for a little more.

Get Ready!

You arrive at work but everyone keeps on telling you you look extremely tired and that you should get more sleep. You continue on that day but find a $10 bill laying on the floor. Should you pick it up or leave it?

Choice 1 : Pick it up!

Choice 2 : Leave it there.

Sleep for a little more.

You wake up 30 minutes later and instantly regret your decision. Should you take the normal route to work or the short cut?

Choice 1 : Normal way.

Choice 2 : Short cut.

Pick it up!

You decide to pick it up so you reach towards it but end up slipping and falling face flat onto the floor, resulting you to get a minor head concussion. Your coworkers take you to the hospital to find out that you have too wait for 2 hours!! Should you wait in the hospital for two hours or complain to the front desk?

Choice 1 : Wait for 2 hours.

Choice 2 : Complain to the front desk!

Leave it there.

You decide to leave it there, and it ends up a nice customer just dropped it! After a nice talk, you end up exchanging numbers with him. He then text you if you wanted to meet him again at a restaurant. Do you accept this offer or decline?

Choice 1 : Accept.

Choice 2 : Decline.

Normal way.

You take the normal route and when you get to work, your boss is furious that you are late and threatens to fire you if your late again. After work, you are exhausted but the house is a big mess. Should you clean the house or take a shower and go to sleep?

Choice 1 : Clean the house.

Choice 2 : Take a shower and go to sleep.

Short cut.

You decide to take the short cut which turns out to be a dark, sketchy alley. Then a guy come out from the shadow an demands $10 or else you will never see the light of the day ever again. Do you give your $10 or run away?

Choice 1 : Give the $10.

Choice 2 : Run away.

Wait for 2 hours.

You decide to be patient and wait for the 2 hours. You end up dozing off and wake up 5 hours later, it ends up that they had forgotten about you. Do you yell at the front desk for forgetting about you or do you politely remind them that you had not had your check up yet.

Choice 1 : yell at the front desk for forgetting about you.

Choice 2 : politely remind them that you had not had your check up yet.

Complain to the front desk!

You are furious that you have to wait 2 hours so you yell at the front desk but end up getting a stroke. The doctors try saving you but you ended up dying. RIP.

Choice 1 : Back to the beginning

Accept.

He seems very polite so you accept the offer and after work you get ready to meet up with him again. He says he'll pick you up so you wait outside your apartment. He drives in and you get in the car, a few minutes later he drives you into a abandoned house. He then asks for $10,000 or else he will kill you.

Choice 1 : Give the $10,000.

Choice 2 : Don't give it to him.

Decline.

You decline his offer politely and go on with the rest of your day. When you arrive home you see that the house is a mess, but you don't really want to clean up. Do you clean up or take a shower and sleep?

Choice 1 : Clean the house.

Choice 2 : Take a shower and go to sleep.

Clean the house.

You decide to clean the house and is exhausted after. So you take a shower and head to bed, but you didn't have the best sleep.

Choice 1 : Next day

Take a shower and go to sleep.

You decided to take a shower and go to sleep, but end up watching youtube for too long, and slept very late at night.

Choice 1 : Another day

Give the $10.

You give him the $10 and he leaves you alone. But during lunch, you realize you don't have enough money to buy lunch. Do you ask a co worker or just starve yourself for the rest of the day?

Choice 1 : Ask co worker.

Choice 2 : Starve the rest of the day.

Run away.

You refuse to give him the $10 and start to run away. Sadly he had a weapon and killed you. RIP.

Choice 1 : Back to the beginning

yell at the front desk for forgetting about you.

You end up getting a stroke and die. RIP.

Choice 1 : Back to the beginning

politely remind them that you had not had your check up yet.

You politely tell them that you hadn't had your check up yet and they apologize and you immediately get your check up. The doctor tells you everything is fine and just to drink more water. You thank him and go back home, shower and sleep.

Choice 1 : Next day

Give the $10,000.

You give all the money to him an end up being homeless. Few months later you catch a disease that slowly kills you. Another few months past and you end up dying. RIP.

Choice 1 : Back to the beginning

Don't give it to him.

You refuse to give it to him and it ends up he has a weapon. You died. RIP.

Choice 1 : Back to the beginning

Ask co worker.

You ask your co worker and she gladly borrows $10. You thank her and the next day you return the money to her and you and her become best friends!

Choice 1 : Another day

Starve the rest of the day.

You decided it was fine and starve for the whole day. While you walk home from work, you almost faint because of how hungry you are, but then one of your co worker catches you and helps you home. You and him end up being best friends!

Choice 1 : Another day