English Class.

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Word count: 153

Choice count: 2

Section count: 3

Image count: 3

Error count: 3

Field Related Analysis:

Computer Science : 4 matches (choice, Class, -off, running)

Law/Paralegal-Technology : 3 matches (escape, rent, road)

Psychology : 3 matches (class, run, thinking)

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English Class.

Start at the Beginning.

One day, I was walking down the road with my friend Kyle. We met a strange man. He was red and had big horns. He told us he was the devil himself, Beelzebub. He wanted to challenge us to a rock-off. If we lost, he would take our souls but if we won, he would pay our rent.

Choice 1 : We decided to run away.

Choice 2 : We accepted the challenge.

Beelzebub

We decided to run away.

I looked at Kyle and immediately understood he was thinking the same as me. We immediately started running away and we were able to escape. Like two birds, we were finally free.

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By JJ Harrison (https://www.jjharrison.com.au/) - Own work, CC BY-SA 3.0, https://commons.wikimedia.org/w/index.php?curid=17965968

We accepted the challenge.

After accepting, me and Kyle started improvising a song. It ended being the best song in the world and we have beaten the devil so he paid our rent.

Write a choice here.

By Pavlikhin - Own work, CC BY-SA 3.0, https://commons.wikimedia.org/w/index.php?curid=28425250