life choice

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Edouard Desjardins

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Word count: 1478

Choice count: 28

Section count: 20

Image count: 20

Error count: 24

Field Related Analysis:

Law/Paralegal-Technology : 17 matches (club, company, construction, criminal record, criminal, division, drugs, family, House, judge, law, lawyer, office, police officer, record, term, young)

Education : 17 matches (School, achievement, choice, classes, coach, college, don, failed, first, grades, high school, school, semester, social, teacher, term, university)

Tourism : 15 matches (City, Construction, Europe, Extra, Party, Program, Restaurant, US, average, bit, brand, coach, league, program, stop)

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life choice

Before the start of college.

I am near the end of high school and the college is near. I have to decide where I want to go. My brother studies in Quebec City and want me to come and play with the college soccer team. On the other part, all my home town friend are going to Lionel-Groulx. What should I do?

Choice 1 : Go to Ste-Foy College.

Choice 2 : Go to Lionel-Groulx College.

Go to Ste-Foy College.

I went to Ste-Foy College in Quebec City. The college soccer team plays in division 1, and they are very good. Since my brother plays for them, he and the coach asks me to do the tryouts. I went and I performed very well. I made the team as a recruit, and I was very happy. The season start soon and I want to be in the best shape possible but I should put more time in my studies. What should I do?

Choice 1 : I put time in the gyms.

Choice 2 : I put time in my studies.

Go to Lionel-Groulx College.

I went to Lionel-Groulx College. I choose to apply in Social Science because I want to become a lawyer. Also, all of my friends went to this college, so we are all together. Since I want to become a lawyer, I need to have very great grades but I want to have fun because I am young. A part of my friends are doing the party and the other part spend the most of their time studying. What should I do?

Choice 1 : Do the party.

Choice 2 : Study with your friends.

I put time in the gyms.

I decide to put time in the gyms. I'm in top shape when the season starts. The season went really well, and we finish first in the league. We went to the Canadian championship and win it to. I was name recruit of the year and the MVP of the league. I'm the first ever recruit to win both of the honors. Since my season went so well, I have offers from clubs in Europe and one from the Impact de Montreal, the professional club in Montreal. A dream com true. Where should I go?

Choice 1 : Go to Europe.

Choice 2 : Play in Montreal.

I put time in my studies.

I decide to put time in my studies. My soccer season went great but not as great as I expected to. But I had very good grades and my cote R is very high. I just finish my 3 semester and I have to chose where to go to university. I want to be a lawyer so two universities have cross my mind. University Laval in Quebec City or University of Montreal. Where should I go?

Choice 1 : Go to University of Montreal.

Choice 2 : Go to University Laval.

Go to Europe.

I went to Europe and I played for many years there and for the best club. I became a great player and win many big trophies. I was one of the greatest to ever touch the ball. My dream came true.

Choice 1 : Before the start of college.

Play in Montreal.

I chose to stay near my friends and family and play for Montreal in the MLS. I had a long and great career in the MLS. After I retired and became a soccer analyst for RDS.

Choice 1 : Before the start of college.

Go to University of Montreal.

I was accepted in the Law program at the University of Montreal. Also, I get to live with two of my high school friends. One day, my friends ask me if I want to go to a party but I know that I have a lot of work to do because the mid-term exams are near. What should I do?

Choice 1 : Go to the party.

Choice 2 : Stay at home and study.

Go to University Laval.

I chose to stay in Quebec City. After one semester, I feel like I'm not in the right place. One of my friend is a cook and want to open a restaurant. But I think that I want to stay at school and go in another program. What should I do?

Choice 1 : Open a restaurant.

Choice 2 : Change program.

Go to the party.

Let's party! The party was very nice but I didn't have enough time to study and failed my mid-term exams. I can try to recover my semester but it will be hard. Also, I don't know if I want to be a lawyer anymore and my passion for fashion is growing, so I am thinking of leaving University and start my own brand of clothing. What should I do?

Choice 1 : Start my clothing brand.

Choice 2 : Try to recover my semester.

Stay at home and study.

I stayed home while my friends were going out. It paid of and I finish my exams with strait A. I became a Lawer and later a judge. I have made a lot a money and I'm happy.

Choice 1 : Before the start of college.

Start my clothing brand.

I start my own clothing brand. The first year were difficult but we manage and now Im the owner of one of the most popular fashion brand in the world.

Choice 1 : Before the start of college.

Try to recover my semester.

I decide to put all my time in my classes. I manage to get average grades, so I'm happy. My other semesters were excellent and I had fantastic grades. I got out of the University and became a lawyer.

Choice 1 : Before the start of college.

Open a restaurant.

I decide to open a restaurant with my friend. It went well and later we made two more. One in New York and one in Los Angeles.

Choice 1 : Before the start of college.

Change program.

I decide to drop the Law program and to go in history. Later I became a teacher in the high school I went when I was younger.

Choice 1 : Before the start of college.

Do the party.

I hang out with my friends, and we do the party a lot. One of my friend invited use to a party, and we went without even asking question. Later that night, one of my friend got in a fight and I jump in because I want to protect my friend. Also, I am strong and I know how to fight. We manage to win the fight and leave the party without a scratch. Later that night, two police officer stop us when we were walking home from the party. They told us that they got a call on guys that match our look, so they brought us to the police office. They then search our bag and find some drugs that wasn't ours. We had left our bags in a room, so we thought some people framed us. In conclusion, we spent some time in jail and had a criminal record.

Choice 1 : Before the start of college.

Study with your friends.

I spend most of my time studying with my friends. It's time to apply to the university and I don't know what to do. Since the start of the college I want to become a lawyer but I am not certain anymore. I'm thinking of going in construction. Also, I love music and cinemas, so I have a lot of choice.

Choice 1 : Go in construction.

Choice 2 : Start my band with some friends.

Choice 3 : Go in cinemas in university.

Go in construction.

I drop out of the university and start working in construction. I worked a lot for five years and decided to start my own Construction company. I put a lot of hours into my company but I'm OK to do extra time because I work for myself. I lived in a house that I build and I think this is a great achievement.

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Start my band with some friends.

I started a band with my friends. We were known in Canada and a little bit in France. After my years touring, I started teaching music in school and I liked it. I didn't make a lot of money but I ham happy and this mean a lot to me.

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Go in cinemas in university.

This was the best décision of my life. I love the program! Two years later, I started making film and now I am known all over the world. I currently lived in Hollywood and I am one of the biggest film producer in the world.

Choice 1 : Before the start of college.