Becoming a grown adult.

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Word count: 1253

Choice count: 40

Section count: 25

Image count: 24

Error count: 5

Field Related Analysis:

Education : 16 matches (Down, School, adult, choice, college, course, diploma, don, first, high school, reader, scholarship, school, social, teacher, university)

Tourism : 12 matches (Area, Program, apartment, course, double, international, language, option, pass, program, round, trip)

Computer Science : 10 matches (application, choice, manager, pass, path, reader, relay, store, supervisor, language)

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Becoming a grown adult.

High School.

You just finished high school and you need to choose which college you want to go and in which program you will go to start your path of teaching.

Choice 1 : You go in the Maisonneuve College in the program Arts, Letters and Communications in option language.

Choice 2 : You go to Lionel-Groulx College in the program Social Science.

You go in the Maisonneuve College in the program Arts, Letters and Communications in option language.

So, you are now in the great College of Maisonneuve! So now that you will be here for two years you need to decide if your going to rent an apartment or if you are going to rent a residency to be closer.

Choice 1 : Rent an apartment.

Choice 2 : Rent a residency.

Rent an apartment.

Congrats! You find an apartment of two bedrooms, a washroom and a kitchen, do you take a roommate?

Choice 1 : A roommate would be great!

Choice 2 : Oh no, I don't want to relay on another person.

Rent a residency.

You didn't have any problems in renting that residency and you now have your diploma. What will you do?

Choice 1 : You are going to McGill University to become a teacher.

Choice 2 : You are going to travel for a year with the money you saved and go to the university after.

Live at your parents house.

You live at your parents house now and you continue your last year of study. What do you do at the end of it?

Choice 1 : You find a job.

Choice 2 : You are going to McGill University to become a teacher.

A roommate would be great!

Great! You now have your roommate and you are starting a new chapter of your life. Your first year went really well with that roommate, but they lost their job and can't pay the rent anymore. What will you do?

Choice 1 : Help them to pay their part while they find a new job.

Choice 2 : Kick them out and find a new roommate. There is no way you pay double.

Oh, no! I don't want to relay on another person.

Write this part of the story here and present your reader with choices.

Write a choice here.

Help them to pay their part while they find a new job.

Your roommate found a new job and pay their bills while refunding what you paid for them for the rent. Your last year of college pass and you got your diploma. What would you do?

Choice 1 : You go travel for a year with the money you saved and go to the university after.

Choice 2 : You are going to McGill University to become a teacher.

Kick them out and find a new roommate. There is no way you pay double.

Unfortunately, you don't find a roommate in time and you can't continue to pay the rent alone. You need to go at your parents house.

Choice 1 : Live at your parents house.

You are going to travel for a year with the money you saved and go to the university after.

You are going in five countries that year and you can go on another round, do you go?

Choice 1 : Yes I would love to!!!

Choice 2 : No I need to go study...

You are going to McGill University to become a teacher.

You now have four years of study in front of you. You need to rent another apartment in the area of the university. Do you take a roommate this time?

Choice 1 : Yes.

Choice 2 : No.

You find a job.

You find a job as a cashier in a shop. After, a year you have a choice to make.

Choice 1 : You are going to McGill University to become a teacher.

Choice 2 : Stay at that store and become a supervisor.

You go to Lionel-Groulx College in the program Social Science.

Great choice! Now all you have to do is choose where you are going to pay rent for those two years!

Choice 1 : Rent an apartment.

Choice 2 : Rent a residency.

Yes.

Great! You are gonna go in a bigger apartment then before so it's gonna cost more, do you want another roommate?

Choice 1 : Hell yeah! The more the merrier!

Choice 2 : Hell no! One is enough!

No.

Alright, then you are gonna go in a one piece apartment and start your scholarship.

Choice 1 : You decide it is not for you and find a job.

Choice 2 : You continue your studies.

Go to another trip.

You decide to do that for the rest of your life and decide of a life plan. Six months per year you are gonna work and plan your next trip and the other six you are going to follow that plan. You do that for the rest of your life, helping people in that same amount of time.

Choice 1 : Finally, you died alone but happy. The End. Go to the beginning.

Stay at that store and become a supervisor.

You did a great job!!! Your boss fall in love with you and propose. What will you do?

Choice 1 : Says yes!!!

Choice 2 : Says no...

Hell yeah! The more the merrier!

Unfortunately, nobody wants to have two roommates... You are going to have to stay two...

Choice 1 : You continue your years of studies.

Choice 2 : You decide that it is not your destiny to become a teacher and find a job.

Hell no! One is enough!

You and your roommate got really broke and got kick out of the apartment. You couldn't go at your parents home because they died a few months ago. You live like a homeless person for the rest of your life.

Choice 1 : You are now dead. The End. Go to the beginning have another life.

You decide it is not for you and find a job.

You got a stable job and found the love of your life. You will create a big family and never go to school again.

Choice 1 : The End. Return to the beginning.

You got your diploma!

Congratulation! You got an application in the school of your dream, do you take it?

Choice 1 : Of course!!!

Choice 2 : You change your decision and decide to find a job.

You become a teacher!!!

Bravo!!! You got your dream job and you are a great teacher!! You found your lover and create a family with them. You retired happy and with a great feeling that you did the best you could.

Choice 1 : You died of cancer in your retirement, letting your children and your partner alone in this world. The End.

You find a job.

You become the best in that job and when it shut down, you could not find another one... You become homeless.

Choice 1 : The End.

Says yes!!!

You married to them and became the manager of that shop with him. You grow that small shop in an international business and had five kids. You died of old age.

Choice 1 : The End.

Says no...

Your boss didn't like what you said and fired you. Thanks to that, you start your own business and grew old with a person that really loves you.

Choice 1 : The End.