My Life Story

A hypertext narrative by

Séréna Siméon

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Word count: 745

Choice count: 24

Section count: 15

Image count: 15

Error count: 28

Field Related Analysis:

Education : 16 matches (P, School, choice, class, classes, coach, college, courses, diploma, grade, grades, high school, level, register, school, teacher)

Law/Paralegal-Technology : 10 matches (client, close, concentration, condition, fact, fine, harassment, injury, register, Sexual)

Computer Science : 10 matches (application, choice, Class, client, close, mean, online, restart, session, sleep)

Target Structure:

a foot in the door (1 match)

abolish (1 match)

deter (1 match)

dread (1 match)

leg work (1 match)

purpose (1 match)

sexual harassment (3 matches)

thoughtful (1 match)

wage (1 match)

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My Life Story

The start of my teenage life.

I started high school at Joseph-Francois Perreault I played basketball and I had a lot of friends thanks to basketball. During my rookie year , I played a lot of matches I was in the starting 5 everything fine until I had an ankle injury and had to quit basketball for like 6 months.

Choice 1 : Stay home doing nothing

Choice 2 : I start playing music.

I start playing music.

The fact that I was injured I could no longer play sports so I decided to register in music and I started playing the clarinet. I really liked playing the clarinet it made my passion but at one point my teacher got very sick and we got a substitute. The substitute was really mean, he was not patient and he always shouted at everyone so I decided to quit my music class after 5 months.

Choice 1 : I restart playing basketball

Choice 2 : I start to do other activities

I restart playing basketball.

Before I started basketball again, I had to do some leg work like walking and exercising but my mother said it was too early to start over so I had to deter her from the contrary. She accepted on one condition if I change school to play close to her friend who is the team coach.

Choice 1 : Change schools to play basketball

Choice 2 : Stay at the same school and stop basketball

Change the school to play basketball.

My new coach was very cool, he offered me some personal workout after school.One day, he takes me home by car, and he did me sexual harassment.

Choice 1 : I quit basketball

Choice 2 : I started an application to find work

I started an application to find work.

A job calls me to give me an interview to work part-time I will but arrive there I put a foot in the door and I see the coach who has tried to sexual harassment me. I was shocked.

Choice 1 : Go to an other interview

Choice 2 : Just go to school

Just go to school.

So, I continued to go to school and I finally finished my grade eleven diploma I had the choice between doing a D.E.P or going to college.

Choice 1 : Go to College

Choice 2 : Just go to school.

Go to college.

I decided to go to Ahuntsic College, at the beginning I was a little dread to go to college but gradually I got used to it.

Choice 1 : Continue school

Choice 2 : Go make more money

Continue to go to school.

Classes were now being done at home because of the Covid-19. The online courses were very difficult especially at the concentration level.

Choice 1 : Continue online class

Choice 2 : Quit school and go make money

Quit school and go make money.

I left school to work full time $ 19 an hour as a receptionist.

Choice 1 : Restart school in the fall session

Choice 2 : Continue to work full time with a high wage

Continue to work with a high wage.

One day, I was working and a client got on my nerves and provoked me so I got into a fight with the client so I got fired from work.

Choice 1 : Stay home all day and sleep

Stay home all day and sleep.

I really thoughtful about what I could do in my life and I decided to go back to college.

Choice 1 : Back to school

Back to school.

I decided to abolish work and stay focused on my studies but enroll in the gym to lose weight.

Choice 1 : I lose 15 pound and have great grades

Choice 2 : I gave up the gym and the school

I lose 15 pound and I have great grades at school.

My purpose was to lose 20 pounds but i still have 5 to lose.

Choice 1 : Go to gym everyday

Go to gym everyday.

I am going to the gym every day and I have finally lost the 5 pounds that I have left to lose. In my gym, a guy tried to sexual harassment me.

Choice 1 : Go to the police

Go to the police.

I went to the police, the guy was jailed and my life is back to normal.

Write a choice here.