My life after prom.

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sadia houali

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Word count: 1599

Choice count: 35

Section count: 29

Image count: 29

Error count: 7

Field Related Analysis:

Education : 29 matches (School, adult, choice, class, college, course, courses, diploma, don, exam, failed, field, field of study, first, grades, head, high school, lessons, management, project, school, semester, social, speaking, student, students, teacher, university, law school)

Tourism : 29 matches (Airport, Alcohol, Beach, Business class, Control, Destination, Driver, Extra, Flight, Glass, Hotel, Program, US, airport, bar, beach, bit, business class, course, destination, field, flight, hotel, language, one class, pass, program, registered, trip)

Computer Science : 18 matches (application, bit, call, check, choice, Class, destination, e-mail, field, mail, Math, message, open, pass, path, session, trigger, language)

Target Structure:

misconduct (1 match)

overtime (1 match)

perpetrator (1 match)

pull off (1 match)

purpose (2 matches)

straight A's (1 match)

though (1 match)

time management (1 match)

vacant position (1 match)

worthwhile (1 match)

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My life after prom.

Everything started like this.

I’m finally done with high school! Five years of hard work and boring lessons has paid up. I got my diploma. During my last year, I won a prize for the best project in my Business class. My teacher suggested that I should apply for business school. I need to do extra math courses at an adult school to be accepted to HEC. However, my English teacher thinks that I can make a great lawyer. What should I do?

Choice 1 : Go to adult school.

Choice 2 : Go directly to College.

Books

Go to adult school.

I am now registered in adult school. I have to wait till I’m done with the math course, so I can apply to College. However, I’m a student in part-time because I only have one class. I can’t apply for HEC in the winter because my program starts only in the autumn. I have to manage my time to find something to do for 6 months, so I can keep myself busy while I’m waiting. Should I travel or should I stay here and find a job?

Choice 1 : Find a job.

Choice 2 : Travel around the world.

Find a job.

I found a vacant position as a janitor in a law firm. I see a lot of lawyers every day and I’m starting to like the field of study. I’m thinking about changing my path and go directly to Ahuntsic College, so I can get my diploma and apply for law school.

Choice 1 : Cancel the maths courses.

Choice 2 : Stay in the maths courses.

Janitor

Travel around the world.

My first destination, Jamaica! I've arrived at the airport of Jamaica, my first destination! I don’t know where I can find a taxi and I don’t speak their language. I hear a man speaking English very loud with his friends. He’s a little bit older than me.

Choice 1 : Ask for his help.

Choice 2 : Find myself a taxi.

plane

Ask for his help.

Finally someone who speaks English! He's nice and sweet. He starts to flirt with me. He is suggesting to take me to my hotel, so I won’t have to pay for the taxi. He says that it’s very rare to find a taxi driver that speaks English.

Choice 1 : Follow him into his car.

Choice 2 : Find myself a taxi.

airport

Follow him into his car.

He has a nice and luxurious car. His friends join us. After one hour of silence driving, I'm starting to regret my decision. I see a gun near his seat and I’m starting to get worried. I got sucked up in a lot of trouble. I don’t know what to do.

Choice 1 : Take the gun.

Choice 2 : Ask him why he carries a gun.

luxurious car

Take the gun.

Bad choice, he’s faster, he pulls the trigger on purpose. GAME OVER.

Write a choice here.

AK-47

Ask him why he carries a gun.

He's starting to get stressed, and takes the gun and point it at me. He stopped looking at the road, we run into a truck. GAME OVER.

Write a choice here.

car accident

Go directly to College.

I apply for Social Science at Ahuntsic College and I got in. I study very hard the entire session and most of my grades are between 90 and 100%. At the end of my third semester, my Cote R is 29.5. I have achieved my purpose. It’s now the time to apply for university.

Choice 1 : Choose Sherbrooke University.

Choice 2 : Choose UQAM.

Ahuntsic College

Choose Sherbrooke University.

Even though my cote r is high, Sherbrooke University declines my admission because my cote R is not high enough.

Write a choice here.

Sherbrooke University

Choose UQAM.

UQAM accepts my application and I start my program the autumn that followed the end of College. I pull off a nice time management and my grades gets very high, I got straight A's!! I'm one of the best students of my class. 3 years has passed and it’s now the time to have my Bar exam. Even if a did some internships with great lawyers that complimented me, I am very stressed. I don’t know if I’m ready to pass this exam.

Choice 1 : The Bar formation of 8 months.

Choice 2 : Bar intensive formation of 4 months.

Diploma

The Bar formation of 8 months.

I want to take my time, so I can ensure my success. I finally did it, I got my diploma. I feel so proud of myself! The overtime, my hard work, my long nights of studies has been worthwhile and profitable. I am ready to practice as an attorney in Montreal. You can call me Maitre.Houali.

Write a choice here.

Lawyer

Bar intensive formation of 4 months.

I was afraid that I'd waist time in 8 months. I wanted to gain time so, I did the intensive formation, I thought that I was ready but I failed the exam.

Choice 1 : Start again the formation.

Choice 2 : Give up on the program.

Start again the formation.

I started again my formation and I took 8 months to finish it. Now, I got my diploma. I feel so proud of myself and my hardworking has been profitable. I am now ready to practice as an attorney in Montreal. You can call me Maitre.Houali.

Write a choice here.

diploma

Give up on the program.

I gave up on my studies and started to get depressed. It was not a good idea. GAME OVER.

Write a choice here.

Depression

Find myself a taxi.

A lady sees me while I'm struggling and shows me the way for the taxi. I take the taxi and finally get to my hotel. I drop my things and I’m ready to start enjoying my trip.

Choice 1 : Go to the beach.

Choice 2 : Go to the hotel bar.

taxi

Go to the beach.

I arrive at the beach and it’s very hot. The beach is empty. A man comes and tries to flirt with me. He’s not my type at all. He asks for my phone number.

Choice 1 : Lie to him and say that I am married.

Choice 2 : Give him a fake number.

Beach

Give him a fake number.

I gave him a fake phone number with a hypocrite smile and I try to walk away. He starts to follow me and soon begins to harass me in a sexual way. There is an empty beer glass bottle in the sand.

Choice 1 : Run to the hotel.

Choice 2 : Hit him.

Cellphone

Run to the hotel.

I run to my hotel, and he follows. He is way faster than me. He got to my room and became very violent. He takes the remote control hit me in the head. GAME OVER.

Write a choice here.

Hit him.

I take the empty alcohol bottle and I hit the perpetrator directly near his eye, he surely undermined me! He starts bleeding and fell onto the ground. I run to my hotel, traumatized I go directly to the airport and go back to Montreal. Thinking about his misconduct during the flight. I check my emails when I get home and I see that I received a message from the school.

Choice 1 : Open it.

Choice 2 : Leave it for tomorrow.

Bottle in the sand

Open it.

It's my math teacher. He announced me that I failed the class. The re-admission for adult school starts in one year, I wasted one year away. GAME OVER.

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Cancel the maths courses.

I apply for the winter program of Social Science, and they accepted me! I work very hard the entire session and most of my grades are between 90 and 100%. At the end of my third session, my Cote R is 29.5. It’s now the time to apply for university.

Choice 1 : Choose Sherbrooke University.

Choice 2 : Choose UQAM.

Stay in the maths courses.

It’s been 2 months now since my maths'courses has ended. I wake up Monday morning and the school has sent me a message. I’m very stressed.

Choice 1 : Open it.

Choice 2 : Ask my boyfriend to open it.

Ask my boyfriend to open it.

I put my stress aside and ask my boyfriend to read the e-mail for me. The teacher announced me that I failed his class. I need to wait till next year for a new application. Back to square one. GAME OVER.

Write a choice here.

boyfriend

Go to the hotel bar.

I arrive at the hotel bar, and I see the English man that I saw at the airport. He smiles at me.

Choice 1 : Ignore him.

Choice 2 : Smile back.

hotel bar

Ignore him.

I get back to my room, put my bathing suit on and go to the beach.

Choice 1 : Go to the beach.

Smile back.

I’m very shy, he comes to me, and we start talking. He wants to bring me to his car, so he can take me to a secret spot.

Choice 1 : Follow him into his car.

Choice 2 : Ignore him.

smile

Lie to him and say that I am married.

I told him that I’m married and now he goes away. GAME OVER.

Write a choice here.

wedding

Leave it for tomorrow.

In the morning, I open the e-mail and the teacher announced me that I failed his class. I have to wait till next year to do it again. Back to square one. GAME OVER.

Write a choice here.