You decide my life.

A hypertext narrative by

Berivan Ozaslan

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Word count: 454

Choice count: 19

Section count: 16

Image count: 16

Error count: 5

Field Related Analysis:

Education : 8 matches (School, choice, college, grades, reader, school, student, university)

Law/Paralegal-Technology : 4 matches (living, section, short title, title)

Film : 3 matches (focus, story, title)

Target Structure:

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You decide my life.

Let's get started.

I am an accounting student at Ahuntsic College, and I am actually graduated. And it is up to you to decide if I should go to The University of Montreal or Hec Montreal.

Choice 1 : University of Montreal

Choice 2 : Hec Montreal

Ahuntsic College

University of Montreal.

If I go to The University of Montreal, I can't be with my friends who are in the same program as me and I can't see them as usual.

Choice 1 : University of Montreal.

Choice 2 : University of Montreal.

The University of Montreal

Falling in love with someone.

If I fall in love with someone then, I can live my best life at the university even though I am not with my friends.

Choice 1 : Living my best life with my lover.

Choice 2 : break up with my lover

Falling in love

Living my best life with my lover.

Now that I am living my best live with my lover I can be happy forever.

Choice 1 : Get married to my lover

Love

Get married to my lover.

I get married to him and we are finally happy.

Choice 1 : Happily married

Happily married.

Now that I am married to him I am happy.

Choice 1 : Happily married.

Marriage

Having bad grades.

If I have a bad grades I will break up with my lover, then I can be more focused on my grades.

Choice 1 : Being sad

Choice 2 : Improving my grades

Having bad grades

Being sad.

If, I am sad then I will not be able to focus at school.

Choice 1 : Quit the University

being sad

Quit the University.

If I quit the university, I will not be able to find a good job, so I will not make money.

Choice 1 : Quit the University.

being broke

Being broke.

Now that I am broke, I will be poor.

Choice 1 : End of the story

being poor

Improving my grades.

If I improve my grades, then I can find a good job at the end of the university.

Choice 1 : Making money

Improving grades

Making money.

If I make money, I will be able to live my best life after the university.

Choice 1 : Being rich

Making money

Being rich.

If, I am rich, so I can live as I want and I can buy whatever I want.

Choice 1 : Living my best life

being rich

Living my best life.

Now that I am rich I can do whatever I want.

Choice 1 : End Of the story.

living my best life

End of the story.

Now you can go back and start from the beginning.

Choice 1 : Let's get started.

Give this section a short title.

Write this part of the story here and present your reader with choices.

Write a choice here.