My career as a civil engineer.

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Samuel Gorry

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Word count: 469

Choice count: 6

Section count: 7

Image count: 7

Error count: 1

Field Related Analysis:

Construction and Civil Engineering : 9 matches (build, accepted, carpenter, Engineer, joiner, civil engineer, civil engineering, engineering, grade)

Education : 7 matches (CEGEP, choice, don, games, grade, learn, lesson)

Tourism : 6 matches (Internet, Program, bit, dep, option, program)

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My career as a civil engineer.

I am in grade eleven, I need to submit a request to a cegep in two weeks and I still don't know what I want to do in the future.

So, I could begin to search for some programs that I could be interested in, I can look on the internet for some videos and talk with some people about different programs. Or I could not be looking in some programs and continue to play video games with my friends.

Choice 1 : Search for a good program.

Choice 2 : Play video games with my friends

School

I search for a good program, and I found one. I think I would love to go into civil engineering.

There are two cegep closes to me that give this program, but I don't know which one I want to go to.

Choice 1 : I send my request to cegep Montmorency.

Choice 2 : I send my request to cegep Ahuntsic.

Civil Engineer

One of my friends is going to do a DEP in carpenter joiner.

I don't know if my parents want me to go do a DEP, but I really want to go to work with my friends.

Choice 1 : I go with my friend to the DEP.

Choice 2 : I talk with my parents and see if there is more option for me besides following my friends.

Me and my friends

I send my request to cegep Montmorency, and I was accepted. I now have a lot of new friends that suit me well, and I am very happy.

This story is a lesson, I need to listen to myself and what I want, not what other people want.

Write a choice here.

Cegep Montmorency

I send my request to cegep Ahuntsic, and I was accepted but I realized that it was a bit far from my home finally.

I send a request to go to cegep Montmorency because it is closer to my home.

Write a choice here.

Cegep Ahuntsic

I go with my friend to the DEP.

Finally, I really don't like this program even if I am with my friend. It is not for me, I want to go to cegep and learn something I am interested in. This story is a lesson, I need to listen to myself and what I want, not what other people want.

Write a choice here.

Civil engineer

I talk with my parents and see if there is more option for me besides following my friends.

Finally, I realize that I am not interested in that DEP, I want to go to cegep in civil engineering and learn how to build bridges and roads because it is what I really want to do. This story is a lesson, I need to listen to myself and what I want, not what other people want.

Write a choice here.

Civil Engineer