Word count: 1227
Choice count: 10
Section count: 7
Image count: 7
Error count: 9
Field Related Analysis:
Tourism : 31 matches (Airport, Beach, City, Destination, Flight, Hotel, Marketing, Metro, Natural, Opportunity, Program, administration, airport, apartment, beach, coach, condo, destination, field, flight, gap, hotel, language, marketing, option, program, refund, ticket, to visit, trip, weather)
Education : 17 matches (CEGEP, School, bachelor's degree, bilingual, choice, classes, coach, degree, field, first, goals, grades, options, school, semester, teach, university)
Business : 12 matches (administration, business, company, cost, marketing, money, offer, office, opportunity, pay, refund, salary)
Target Structure:
internship (2 matches)
It was my last semester at the CEGEP de Thetford. I was still living with my parents and I studied Natural Sciences. I was not quite sure of what I wanted to do next. I hesitated between two options.
Choice 1 : Go to university.
Choice 2 : Take a gap year to travel.

I decided to go to university to study Business Administration. My plan was to do a bachelor’s degree in three years and after that, I also wanted to do an MBA. I was interested in two universities that offered excellent programs in Business Administration. I didn’t know which one to choose.
Choice 1 : Go to HEC Montreal.
Choice 2 : Go to Laval University.
I decided to go to HEC Montreal because this university offered the best program. Also, I liked that it was a university specialized in business. I chose the bilingual bachelor’s degree because I thought that it was important to speak more than one language fluently in this field. Obviously, to go to this university, I had to move three hours away from my hometown. I had a friend who moved to Montreal as well, so we rented an apartment together. I was not used to live in a big city. I wasn’t familiar with the metro, so the first weeks, I was always late to my classes. I liked my school and I made new friends, but I hated living in Montreal. It was too crowded for me and I didn’t always feel safe. Also, it was hard to be far away from my friends and family. When I wanted to visit them, it was complicated. I had to leave at a certain hour to avoid traffic. In November, it was beginning to snow and the roads were not always safe, so I couldn’t visit them as often as I wanted. After my first semester, I realized that I didn’t want to live there anymore. I moved back with my parents and tried to figure out what I wanted to do next.
Choice 1 : My last semester of CEGEP.
University Laval was the best choice for me. It was not too far from my hometown and I had a lot of friends who chose that school as well. I was also able to keep my job as a gymnastics coach because I spent all of my weekends in Thetford. I moved in in a nice apartment with two of my friends. It was close to university, so I could walk to school. My first year of university was perfect. I made new friends, I had good grades and I had a lot of fun. During my second year, I decided to do an internship. My internship was in a Marketing company. At first, I was excited. I worked for a successful company and I had my own office. I liked the job, but after two months, I realized that it was not the perfect job for me. It’s not that I didn’t like it, but I needed a job that was more helpful to others. I wanted to make a difference in people’s life, and I didn’t feel that way when I was working in the field of marketing. After a while, I analysed my option and I dropped out of my program. The next year, I went back to university to study nutrition.
Choice 1 : My last semester of CEGEP.
I decide to take a gap year. During my last year of CEGEP, I was confused about what I wanted to do with my life. It felt like a good idea to take a gap year to think about it. It was also a nice opportunity to travel and to discover who I really am. I had to choose a destination for my trip.
Choice 1 : Travel to the Caribbean.
Choice 2 : Travel to Asia.
I always dreamt of traveling to the Caribbean, so I decide to do it. I wanted to do a long trip, so I looked for a job before leaving. Working would allow me to meet people and to have money to pay for the activities that I wanted to do. I found a job as a gymnastics coach in Antigua. When I arrived in Antigua, I fell in love with the place. The weather was great and the beaches were incredible. I liked my new job. I worked in a nice gym and my colleagues showed me the best activities to do and the nicest places to visit in Antigua. I also loved to teach my passion to kids from another culture. I only worked four days a week, so it gave me a lot of time to enjoy my trip. I lived near the beach, so I was almost always there when I wasn’t working. I walked on the beach every morning. My life there was awesome. A month before the end of my trip, my boss offered me a job for another year. At first, I didn’t take his offer because I wanted to start university. The last day of my trip, I had to wake up early to go to the airport. Unfortunately, I had forgotten to set up my alarm. I missed my flight. Was it because I wanted to stay without realizing it? (Rhetorical question) We will never know, but I decided to stay anyway.
Choice 1 : My last semester of CEGEP.
I chose to travel to Asia because it is a continent that is quite different from ours. I wanted to discover the Asian culture. Thailand seemed like a great destination. I planned a three-month trip. I bought my flight ticket, rented a car and an Airbnb. I was ready to leave. When I got to my Airbnb, I was shocked. It was so different from the pictures on the website. It was not clean at all, there were cockroaches and big spiders everywhere. It was difficult to take a shower because there was almost no water. I wanted to find a new place to stay, but the owner didn’t want to give me a refund. I had pay a lot for this place, so I didn’t have the money to rent another apartment. I wanted to stay in Thailand but there no way that I was going to stay in this disgusting condo. I found a way to move out from there. I started to work at the daycare center in a nice hotel. Since I was working there, I stayed there for free. They also paid me to work there. The salary wasn’t huge, but I had a nice play to stay and the cost of life was lower in Thailand. It was nice to work there, but I quit my job after two months to visit the rest of the country. Although the beginning of my trip was far from being ideal, I loved traveling to Asia. One of my goals was to discover what I wanted to do with my life and I did. I knew that I wanted to have a job that allowed me to travel the world.
Choice 1 : My last semester of CEGEP.