A Trip to Success

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Mathieu Gagné

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Word count: 777

Choice count: 12

Section count: 8

Image count: 8

Error count: 30

Field Related Analysis:

Education : 16 matches (School, choice, class, college, evaluation, exam, grade, grades, high school, learned, lesson, project, school, students, teachers, university)

Tourism : 10 matches (City, Marketing, Natural, Program, balance, marketing, program, sea, taxes, trip)

Biology : 8 matches (balance, class, diet, fish, FISH, grade, nutrient, nutrition)

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A Trip to Success

What Should I Do?

It was the end of high school. I had to make a choice for my future. I was not sure what I wanted to do later as a job. I also wanted to enjoy life while I was young. I was left with two choices. I would either go to Cégep in the Art program or take a trip to Asia to discover new things and have fun. On one hand, doing my Cégep right away would lead me to college faster, but on the other hand, maybe I would never have another chance to travel. This decision was very difficult.

Choice 1 : Go to Cégep.

Choice 2 : Go to Asia.

Thetford's Cégep

Go to Cégep.

I finally made my decision. I think the right choice was to go to Cégep right away. I went with my friend so the change of school was easy. The Art program was good for me. I met very nice students and the teachers were available for all of my concerning. I had good grades throughout the semesters. As the Cégep Art program came to an end, I had to start thinking about college. My choices were really diversified. I found interest in marketing, but this class is given in two places. I had to chose the next city where I will live. Would i rather go to Québec or Sherbrooke.

Choice 1 : Studies in Québec City.

Choice 2 : Studies in Sherbrooke.

Art program

Go to Asia.

I decided that school can wait and I went to Asia. I figured out I'd make new friends for school later. Plus, I was not going to be young forever. I needed to fully enjoy life while it was the time. I flew from Montréal to Ho Chin Minh city in Vietnam. While I was there I visited many temples and great cities. The views were amazing. I knew I could not stay there forever, but I enjoyed the trip to its fullest. I was on my way back to Canada and I caught myself thinking about going in Nutrition instead of art. I needed to think about what I was going to choose for Cégep.

Choice 1 : Study in Sciences.

Choice 2 : Study in Art.

Ho Chi Minh

Studies in Québec City.

I decided to go study in Québec at Laval University in the Marketing program. I really liked it and I am happy with my job now. I made some amazing friends while in school. I do not regret any of my decisions.

Choice 1 : I figured it out!

Laval University

Studies in Sherbrooke.

I decided to go study in Sherbrooke at Bishop's in the Business program. I really liked it and I am happy with my job now. I made some amazing friends while in school. I do not regret any of my decision. In this university we learned all about depts, incomes, taxes and much more. I was like a fish in the sea.

Choice 1 : I figured it out!

bishops

Study in Sciences.

I went in natural sciences in Cégep to go to nutrition. This profession let me help people and I love it. I do not regret my choices. After my class in Cégep, I moved to Québec to attend the Laval University in the nutrition program. We learned a lot about diets and balance. I finally knew what a good nutrient and what was not. Once, we had the project to create the best diet for someone to reach his healthy weight. I had to get a good grade on this project because there was this guy who thought he was the best. He really had the idea that he was already a great scientist like Einstein. He was being so cocky about it and I knew I could do better than him on this evaluation. So I studied hard and I got an A on my exam. I put him back in his place and it felt so good. I was fed up with his attitude and I think I thought him a good lesson.

Choice 1 : I figured it out!

Sciences

Study in Art.

I decided that it was best for me to go study in the Art program. I love what I do in school. After Cégep I wanted to go to university in marketing. This program was given in Québec and Sherbrooke. I needed to choose the best city for me.

Choice 1 : Studies in Québec City.

Choice 2 : Studies in Sherbrooke.

Arts

I figured it out!

I finally figured out what I wanted to study in. I can now explore more choices.

Choice 1 : What Should I Do?