Computer science.

A hypertext narrative by

Phourapheth Sengdara

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Word count: 847

Choice count: 16

Section count: 20

Image count: 20

Error count: 2

Field Related Analysis:

Education : 17 matches (CEGEP, School, choice, college, don, field, field of study, first, games, learning, motivation, reader, school, student, trainee, training, university)

Computer Science : 10 matches (choice, Code, Computer science, computer, drawback, field, Microsoft, name, reader, Section)

Law/Paralegal-Technology : 8 matches (code, company, family, premium, rent, section, short title, title)

Target Structure:

drawback (1 match)

intern (2 matches)

internship (2 matches)

OJT (2 matches)

on-the-job-training (1 match)

overtime (1 match)

straight A's (1 match)

trainee (2 matches)

wage (2 matches)

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Computer science.

It all started like this.

I'm currently studying in computer science at Montmorency College. I'm not sure what exactly I want to do after graduated. I could take a year off and go to The United States and maybe stay there or go to university right after.

Choice 1 : Take a year off and go to The United States.

Choice 2 : Go to university.

Take a year off and go to The United States.

Its been a year now and I love it. I miss my family but I want to move in and stay longer. What should I do?

Choice 1 : Move in.

Choice 2 : Go back to Canada.

Go to university.

I'm excited to go to university and meet my friends. All of my friends are going to Laval University which is in Quebec City and far from my home. Concordia University is a good university and not too far from my home. Which University should I go?

Choice 1 : Laval University.

Choice 2 : Concordia University.

Move in.

It's been a 1 year that I didn't work and I don't have much money left. I studied in computer science I could easily apply at best buy.

Choice 1 : Yes.

Choice 2 : No.

Go back to Canada.

I'm back home and the first thing I hear is that my mom Is really sick. I need to find a job in my field of study or stay and help my mom.

Choice 1 : Find a job in my field of study.

Choice 2 : Stay and help my mom.

Laval University.

I rented an apartment in Quebec City and I'm doing well at school, getting straight A’s.This summer I have the opportunity to be OJT for Microsoft and getting paid should I go?

Choice 1 : No enjoy my summer.

Choice 2 : Yes.

Concordia University.

I'm depressing, I have no friends, no motivation what should I do?

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Yes.

This is a dead-end-job. The wage is too low, I can't pay my rent even if I work overtime.

Choice 1 : Game Over

No.

They kick me out of my apartment because I couldn't pay my rent. Now I'm homeless.

Choice 1 : Game Over

Find a job in my field of study.

When I as in cegep, I was an intern for a big company who creates a lot of games. I was learning the ropes for the whole day with a guy who been working there for a while. His name was Sebastien, he showed me what he is working on. I felt like I was on-the-job-training because I was doing the actual job and I really liked it.I wasn't the only intern. Being an internship student comes in handy because now I know if I really want to do study in computer science. After being internship student, I gained experience by learning the rope. Should I work for them?

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Stay and help my mom.

If, I want to help my mom I need to find a job and have premium wages to make her happy.

Choice 1 : Game Over

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Yes work for Microsoft as a trainee.

I was working for Microsoft. I was OJT with my best friend, and it went pretty well. The only drawback is it was early the morning and I have to wake up at 4 in the morning. As a trainee, I have to code for a new game. I was getting paid and the wage was pretty good. I forgot my lunch at, home, so I bought something to eat in the cafeteria. I didn't expect the food to be good, but it was good, I really liked it. After eating, I did the same thing that I did in the morning. They told me that I can work for them after graduated.

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No enjoy my summer.

Since I have no job I can't stay in Quebec City because I can't pay my rent.

Choice 1 : Game Over

Yes.

It's a good choice. I can now be sure if I really want to do this job or not.

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