High School Choices

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simona rusu

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Word count: 229

Choice count: 8

Section count: 7

Image count: 7

Error count: 4

Field Related Analysis:

Business : 6 matches (company, development, money, pay, promotion, salary)

Education : 6 matches (School, choice, college, high school, school, training)

Sociology : 4 matches (School, school, World, training)

Target Structure:

dead-end job (1 match)

internship (4 matches)

on-the-job-training (3 matches)

put aside (1 match)

though (1 match)

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High School Choices

I am finishing high school.

What should I do next? Where should I go?

Choice 1 : On-the-job-training.

Choice 2 : Ahuntsic College.

Dead-End Job.

I have decided to work in a company that offers no chances of promotion ever.

Choice 1 : On-the-job-training.

On-the-job-training.

Even though there are no promotions in the future, as a beginner in this job, I get training.

Choice 1 : Retire Broke.

Retire Broke.

After thirty years of hard work and no pay raise at all, I will be retiring with no money put aside for my final years.

Choice 1 : I am finishing high school.

Ahuntsic College.

My parents helped me realize that working for a company that offers no promises for the future is not productive for me, so I will go to college.

Choice 1 : Internship.

Internship.

I am really happy about choosing this college where I can go on an internship to help with my career development.

Choice 1 : Retire Rich.

Retire Rich.

With the help of the internship that I did after finishing college, I was able to get an amazing job that offered me the possibility to travel around the world and grow more experienced. My salary grew exponentially as well. After 30 years of amazing work opportunities, I can finally retire and go golfing every day.

Choice 1 : I am finishing high school.