You decide.

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Élodie Veillette

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Word count: 1514

Choice count: 29

Section count: 19

Image count: 19

Error count: 7

Field Related Analysis:

Education : 19 matches (School, choice, class, college, diploma, don, field, first, grade, grades, high school, learn, learned, project, school, social, speaking, students, teacher)

Archaeology : 11 matches (bit, class, college, comes, community, group, HER, Re, rolled, tell, thing)

Psychology : 10 matches (bit, class, dream, field, game, interview, mean, proposition, run, sweet)

Target Structure:

a foot in the door (1 match)

come in handy (3 matches)

internship (1 match)

learn the ropes (1 match)

purpose (1 match)

retirement (1 match)

straight A's (1 match)

though (3 matches)

vacant position (1 match)

wage (1 match)

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You decide.

How it all started.

You just finished High School and you decided to apply at Montmorency College. You have two choices of programs and you have a hard time deciding between the two.

Choice 1 : Go in Special Care Counseling, your dream job.

Choice 2 : Go in Social Science, your parents dream program.

Your diploma

Go in Special Care Counseling, your dream job.

You are so happy about your decision and you are excited to begin. The first day of class, you are stressing out. You don't know who to talk to. You're scared you're not going to find your class. On you schedule, there are two classrooms indicated for your first class. There is C1633 or there is B3355.

Choice 1 : Go to C1633.

Choice 2 : Go to B3355.

Special Care Counselling

Go to C1633.

You are happy. You made the right choice going at this class. The first exercise is to learn to know one person in the class. You have two choices. The person at your right is a good-looking guy, he looks sweet, but a bit distracted. The person at your left as a lot of tattoos and piercings, and she looks a bit busy talking to her friends. You don't know who to choose and you don't want to judge the appearances.

Choice 1 : Choose the guy.

Choice 2 : Choose the girl.

C1633

Go to B3355.

There is no one and you realize it is not the right class.You run back to C1633 and knock at the door. The teacher comes and opens you the door. She walks back to the front of the class and asks you to join her. She starts speaking to the students and asks you to present yourself as the person that came late for her first class. You have two choices, the first one is to start joking around and explain your misadventure, the second one is to be to embarrass to speak in front of that much people and go sit.

Choice 1 : You're to embarrass and go sit.

Choice 2 : You start joking around and explain your misadventure.

B3355

Choose the guy.

You start speaking with him and you realize he is a really nice guy. You think you maybe made a friend for the rest of the session and you are really happy that you met him. Two weeks later, the teacher asks students to put themselves into groups for the project that is coming. You want to be with Isaac, but maybe you should choose somebody else to get to know new people.

Choice 1 : Choose another person.

Choice 2 : Choose Isaac.

Isaac

Choose the girl.

You turn yourself to look at her in the eyes, but she starts speaking with her friend. You try to include yourself, but they exclude you with no remorse. At the end of the ten minutes, the teacher starts asking questions about what you learned about the other person. She looks at you and the girl and asks you first what you learned.

Choice 1 : You lie to the teacher and make-up a story about what you two talked about.

Choice 2 : You tell the teacher the truth, that you two didn't speak, because she was talking to her friends.

Hanna

You lie to the teacher and make-up a story about what you two talked about.

The girl looks at you and does the same thing. You two stop talking and the teacher asks another team. You know you'll just have to work harder to make friends.

Choice 1 : Game over

You tell the teacher the truth, that you two didn't speak, because she was talking to her friends.

The teacher looks at you both with a disappointed look, and asks another team. The girl and her friends look at you with a bad look and start gossiping. You know you'll have to work harder to make friends.

Choice 1 : Game over.

You start joking around and explain your misadventure.

The class laughs at your jokes and a guy stands up. He defends you and says that he wasn't sure either about what class to go to. At the end of the class, the teacher excuses herself to you and says she didn't want to embarrass you.The guy that defended you, come to you and present himself as Isaac. You two become friends and two weeks later there is a group project. You want Isaac to be your partner, but you think maybe you should try to make other friends.

Choice 1 : Choose another person.

Choice 2 : Choose Isaac.

Laughing classroom

You're to embarrass and go sit.

The teacher looks at you in a mean way and continue giving her class. For the rest of the session, this teacher was mean to you and was giving you bad grades even though you respected all of her criteria.

Choice 1 : Game over.

Embarrassed face

Go in Social Science, your parents dream program.

It is the second week of class and you want to change to another program already. It is not what you wanted and you followed what your parents wanted for you. Every class makes you unhappy and you don't know what to do. If you make a change of program, your parents will be disappointed, but you will be happy.

Choice 1 : You change program.

Choice 2 : You stay in this program for the rest of the session.

Social Science

You change program.

You made the right choice for yourself and even though your parents were disappointed when they learned the news, they were happy for you. Special Care Counseling, the new program you chose, makes you happy every day. You know you want to be a Special Care Counselor until your retirement.

Choice 1 : The end.

Special Care Counselling

You stay in this program for the rest of the session.

At the end of the session, you are so unhappy that you can't stay in this program. You can't deal with Social Science anymore. You have two choices, the first is to change program and the other is to stop going to college because it has disappointed you too much.

Choice 1 : You change program.

Choice 2 : You stop going to college.

Unhappy face

You change program.

You made a change of program and it made you very happy. You hope that next session will be better and will be more in your field of interest.In the summer, you even got an internship to learn the ropes of a job. It made you so happy and it still does.

Choice 1 : Game over.

Special Care Counselling

You stop going to college.

You start working in a place at the minimum wage, even though your job interview went terribly. You don't really like the place, but you only have a High School diploma, so there is not a lot of places that would accept you. Your parents are really mad at you, and they don't understand your decision. For them, stop going to college is unacceptable, and they don't want to speak to you. You think you maybe made the wrong decision, but college has disappointed you in so many ways that you didn't know what else to do.

Choice 1 : Game over.

Choose Isaac.

Isaac is really happy you chose him to be your partner. A girl comes and asks you if she can join your group because she doesn't have anyone else to be with. You and Issac accept with great pleasure. You had a good grade and every time, for the rest of the session, you had to be in a group, you chose Isaac and Samara. The three of you, as a group, rolled straight A's in every group project. The teacher, because of your good grades, asks the three of you if you want to volunteer to come in handy to your community.

Choice 1 : You come in handy to your community.

Choice 2 : You do not accept the proposition of your teacher.

Samara

Choose another person.

The other person was very nice, but you didn't work as well with her than you do with Isaac. He is not mad at you for the decision you took, he understood. You had an okay grade and you promised Isaac that he will be your partner next time.

Choice 1 : Game over.

You come in handy to your community.

You three accepted volunteering to work for your community. At the beginning of the summer, there was a vacant position to work for a community service. Isaac and Samara pushed you into accepting the job. You accepted and you made some over time there before going back to college. You finally had a purpose, you were helping people and that was what you always wanted.

Choice 1 : The end.

Community service

You do not accept the proposition of your teacher.

You would have been really happy to volunteer even if it were for free. It would have gotten you a foot in the door for your future job. You are disappointed in yourself for refusing.

Choice 1 : Game over.