A big changement.

A hypertext narrative by

Sabrina Al Mallah

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Word count: 167

Choice count: 3

Section count: 2

Image count: 2

Error count: 2

Field Related Analysis:

Education : 6 matches (choice, college, first, grades, homework, teachers)

Tourism : 3 matches (Program, US, program)

Archaeology : 3 matches (college, here, thing)

Target Structure:

straight A's (1 match)

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A big changement.

A new step in my life.

It was the first year of college for me. I did not know which program to choose because there are a lot of choices, and I was interested in a lot of fields of studies. I think it is very hard to stay concentrated in college when you have a lot of stress. In my opinion, you shouldn't give up and be organized.

Choice 1 : Be organized

Choice 2 : Leave college

Deciding my program

Be organized.

My first day of college was nice until the teachers started to give us a lot of exams and homework's at the same. I didn't know how to act. I really needed straight A's because it is important for me to have good grades, so I decided to buy an agenda and be very organized. This is a very good way to have good grades. College is certainly difficult and the most important thing is to be organized.

Choice 1 : Be organized.

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Doing homeworks