Finance

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NoƩmie Yanibada

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Word count: 1732

Choice count: 33

Section count: 23

Image count: 22

Error count: 15

Field Related Analysis:

Education : 30 matches (Education, John, School, admissions, choice, class, classes, college, courses, degree, diploma, don, failed, first, grades, graduate, head, homework, learn, learned, motivation, options, reader, scholarship, school, students, taught, teacher, teachers, university)

Law/Paralegal-Technology : 17 matches (administrator, answer, close, company, drugs, family, Financial, House, offer, passport, premium, promise, reputation, section, short title, title, young)

Psychology : 16 matches (anxiety, attitude, burnout, class, dream, family, focus, love, mean, miss, motivation, need, run, sign, subject, trip)

Target Structure:

dead-end job (1 match)

internship (5 matches)

premium wage (1 match)

thoughtful (1 match)

wage (1 match)

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Finance

My career.

You just completed your college degree and now it's time to choose what university you're going to go.You dreamed of going to HEC Montreal since you were young, but you want to keep your options open so you send your admissions to three universities.You get accepted in all three, where should you go?

Choice 1 : Go to HEC Montreal.

Choice 2 : Go to Concordia's University.

Choice 3 : Go to UQAM University.

Universities

Go to HEC Montreal.

You are really exited you got into your dream university! It's a lot of work and it's really stressful to be in HEC.There's a lot of competition and you didn't make any friends since you started.You failed your two first exams and have no more motivation to continue.What can you do?

Choice 1 : You decide to work hard and to continue your studies.

Choice 2 : You decide to change school, since it's too hard and you get a lot of anxiety.

HEC Montreal

Go to Concordia's University.

You were first scared because the courses are all in English, but you quickly learned the ropes and enjoy your time there.The people are awesome and there's a lot of help available.For your finance class in John Molson School of Business you have to choose between two teachers.Who would you chose?

Choice 1 : You go with Miss Yaouri.She's one of the greatest teachers in the school and has a reputation for being really thoughtful with her students.

Choice 2 : You choose Miss Tremblay.She doesn't give a lot of homework, but her exams are really hard.

Concordia

Go to UQAM University.

You attend UQAM and it's really not what you expected.You got sucked up in some trouble on the first day when someone mistook you for someone else and punched you.Except that, you really don't like the school, you regret your decision and don't know what to do.What should you do?

Choice 1 : You suck it up and decide to finish your diploma there either way.

Choice 2 : You get a new passion for photography and decide to quit school to travel and enjoy your life.

UQAM

You decided to work hard and to continue your studies.

With all your hard work, you got the best grades in your classes and even made honor roll on your first year.You got the chance to travel and study in another country or you could continue your studies here.

Choice 1 : You decide to go to Yale University where you got a full scholarship in the United States.

Choice 2 : You decide to stay here in Montreal and focus on your work and stay close to family.

study abroad

You decide to change school.

You decide to go to Concordia's University and think it's the perfect school for you and won't become a dead-end job.You graduate and get a job as a secretary for a financial administrator.You learn a lot there and you have the chance to work with a great team there.You're doing an excellent job, and they even want to promote you.You'll get a chance to do a formation to become one of the finance advisors there.

Choice 1 :

finance job

You choose Miss Yaouri.

You love your classes with Miss Yaouri! Her reputation suits her well, and she's always there to answer questions and is even interested in our lives.You learned a lot of things because of her.You are now even interested in education.You get a chance to work with her on the weekends and help younger kids in school, should you, do it?

Choice 1 : You decide to help her on the weekends with the kids.You think it's going to be a great experience.

Choice 2 : You decline the offer,because you want to focus on school first.

teacher

You choose Miss Tremblay.

You didn't expect this teacher to be so mean and not interesting.She has a lot of problems with the students including you and won't take the time to clearly explain the subjects in class.You are tired of her attitude and you say that something has to change.What should you do?

Choice 1 : You decide to confront her in front of the class and say everything that comes to heart.

Choice 2 : You say nothing.

miss Tremblay

You stay at UQAM.

Your 3 years at UQAM really wasn't enjoyable, so when you got done you decided to take a year break of school.After that year you never got back to school and stayed at your parents house without a job.You don't know what to do with your life anymore, but you know that you don't want to go back to school.What should you do?

Choice 1 : You get a job.

Choice 2 : You don't want to work, so you just stay home, doing the bare minimum.

adult home

You travel the world for your new passion.

At first, it was difficult to get your name out there, but you grew a following one day at a time.You got the chance to sign some contracts and to work with models all around the world.Now, you got the chance to go back home and show your work or continue your travels.What should you do?

Choice 1 : You miss your family so you decide to go back home.

Choice 2 : You decide to continue to travel and learn more about photography.

photography model

You go to Yale's University.

Being at Yale is a blessing and is magical.You never taught that one day you'll be able to join such a reputed school.You thank God for all he has done for you and promise to work hard to be one of the best.This time is for you and you will enjoy every second of it.

Choice 1 :

yale

You stay home.

Staying in your city was one of your best decisions.You got recruited to an internship in one of Montreal's biggest company.You don't know what you're going to do, since you go to school full-time and have a job where you work 28 hours per week.What should you do?

Choice 1 : You still take the internship.There's no way you can't decline this offer.

Choice 2 : You quit your work, because you can't do all of them at the same time.

montreal

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Write this part of the story here and present your reader with choices.

Write a choice here.

You help Miss Yaouri.

You didn't expect this to be a really fun experience.You met a lot of kids in need of help, not just in school, but of food or clothes because of their family conditions.Now, every weekend you go to help the kids.You get attached to a lot of kids there and help many by giving them food and clothes that your family doesn't wear anymore.It's now part of your routine.

Choice 1 :

helping kids

You decline the offer.

You were never great with kids, so it was a good decision.You focus on school and work, and get incredible notes all year long.You got a long run ahead of you, but you are really excited for what's about to come.

Choice 1 :

university life

You confront your teacher.

Things got a little out of hand in class and got expelled.You now have to write a letter saying you're sorry to the board and your teacher or else you won't be able to go back into class.You never taught it would go this way.

Choice 1 :

expelled

You say nothing,because you are scared of what would happen.Instead, you get help from another teacher where you understand perfectly the subject and how it works.It was one of your worst decisions to pick this teacher.In the end, everything works out perfectly, you even got one of the best grades in the class!All thanks to mister John.

You say nothing, because you are scared of what would happen.Instead, you get help from another teacher where you understand perfectly the subject and how it works.It was one of your worst decisions to pick this teacher.In the end, everything works out perfectly, you even got one of the best grades in the class! All thanks to mister John.

Choice 1 :

say nothing

You get a job.

Finding a job is not easy.You finally found one at Starbucks near your old university.You spend a lot of years working there and got promoted to supervisor.It's not the best job, but you actually like the people there and it's kind of fun.You even think about leaving your parents place to get your own.Eventually you think about going back to school.

Choice 1 :

starbucks

You stay home and do nothing of your life.

You do nothing of your life and got caught up with the wrong group.You do an overdose and die in your room taking bad drugs.

Choice 1 :

rip

You go back home.

Being back home made you realise how much you hated being apart from your family.Lucky you, you get a position at Simons where you're going to be the head photographer of their new campaign.You love it there and have the chance to work with a big industry.You get pay well and even got a premium wage.You are really happy with how your life as turned around.

Choice 1 :

family

You decide to travel the world.

Travelling the world was supposed to be an awesome trip, but it didn't go as planned.On your first day in Italy, you lost all your personal cards including your passport.You're now stuck there and can't even pay for a hotel.For the next week, you live outside a restaurant and wait to get your papers back.

Choice 1 :

lost

You take the internship.

You are experiencing a real burnout with all this work.You have no choice, but to continue, because you know your hard works will pay off.After one year at this internship, you quickly have many offers to work with big brands.You still decide to continue university while working for big companies.You are really happy and motivated.

Choice 1 :

student

You quit your work.

You regret quitting your work now because all of your savings are now gone and you need to pay your classes and your expenses.You go back to your old boss and ask for your job back.Unfortunately, someone else took your place, and they don't need anyone else.You end up working at a McDonald's.You get fewer hours, so you can focus on your internship and university, everything is back to normal.

Choice 1 :

student