Laurie's Hypertext Narrative.

A hypertext narrative by

Laurie Dupuis-Bissonnette

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Word count: 1450

Choice count: 39

Section count: 28

Image count: 28

Error count: 0

Field Related Analysis:

Nursing : 15 matches (analysis, anomaly, blood bank, blood transfusion, body, cancer, complication, Doctor, hospital, necrosis, organ, position, skin, stomach, transfusion)

Computer Science : 12 matches (body, carrier, choice, drawback, field, hypertext, privacy, Private, rate, reader, sector, task)

Psychology : 11 matches (analysis, attention, blood, carrier, family, field, miss, need, patient, skin, stomach)

Target Structure:

drawback (1 match)

fulfillment (1 match)

income (1 match)

misconduct (1 match)

more often than not (1 match)

overtime (1 match)

thoroughly (1 match)

thoughtful (1 match)

vacant position (1 match)

wage (1 match)

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Laurie's Hypertext Narrative.

Biomedical analysis carrier.

If you decide to work in my field of study who is biomedical analysis, you will have a lot of choice to do. One of the choices that you need to do is if you want to work in a hospital laboratory or in a private laboratory. Most of the time, it's not you that decide this because there is more place in hospital than in a privacy laboratory.

Choice 1 : Work in a hospital

Choice 2 : Work in a private laboratory

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Hospital choice.

If you decide or rather if you are engaged in a hospital, there are a lot of advantage but there are also some disadvantage.

Choice 1 : Advantage to work in a hospital.

Choice 2 : Disadvantage to work in a hospital.

Choice 3 : The most likely choice.

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Private laboratory choice.

Write this part of the story here and present your reader with choices.

Choice 1 : Advantage to work in a private laboratory.

Choice 2 : Disadvantage to work in a private laboratory.

Choice 3 : The least likely choice.

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Advantage to work in a hospital.

One of the advantages to work in a hospital it's that the placement rate is one hundred percent. An other advantage is that in a hospital, there are a lot of department and you can choose the one you like, if there are places.

Choice 1 : back to hospital choice

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Disadvantage to work in a hospital.

Despite the benefits, there is drawback to work in a hospital as the timetable. In fact, you can work during the day but also in the evening and at night and you can also do overtime. An other disadvantage to work in a hospital is that the wage is lower than in the private sector.

Choice 1 : back to hospital choice.

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Advantage to work in a private laboratory.

One of the advantages to work in a private laboratory is that the schedule is more flexible. In fact, it's rare that we work at night in the private laboratory. An other advantage to work in a private laboratory is that the income is higher than in a hospital.

Choice 1 : back to private laboratory choice.

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Disadvantage to work in a private laboratory.

However, there are disadvantages to work in a private laboratory. One of the disadvantages is that we always do the same thing because we are always in the same department, and we can't change. An other disadvantage is that there is not a lot of place in the private laboratory. In fact, the placement rate is very low in a private laboratory.

Choice 1 : back to private laboratory choice.

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The most likely choice.

The most likely choice is to work in a hospital because of the placement rate of one hundred percent. So, we will continue the text on the hospital choice. If you work in a hospital, you have 6 different departments, but let's take just two: the histopathology and the blood bank.

Choice 1 : histopathology department

Choice 2 : Blood banks.

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The least likely choice.

Although that work in a private laboratory look very nice, chances are slim because of the placement rate.

Choice 1 : Back to the most likely choice.

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Histopathology department.

In histopathology, you do analysis on blood, on a body part and so on. You do analysis to find anomalies like cancer. In fact, everything that comes out of the human body is sent to the histopathology laboratory. It is not a department which is very stressful but you can always do errors.

Choice 1 : Cut the right piece of skin or organ.

Choice 2 : Don't cut the right piece of the skin or organ.

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Blood banks department.

In blood bank, you have the life of the patient in your hands so you need to work thoroughly. In fact, you have the task to choose the good blood bag for the blood transfusion of the patient. If you give the good blood bag at the patient, you save is life but if you don't give us the good blood bag, the patient can die.

Choice 1 : Save lives.

Choice 2 : Kill people.

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Cut the right piece of skin or organ.

In histopathology, you want to have the anomaly in the skin or the organ so, if you cut the piece of skin or of organ that look normal, you don't cut the good part. The good part to cut can be a black piece of skin or of organ or something like that. More often than not, you choose the good part to cut because you can't miss it.

Choice 1 : Analysis the good piece of the skin or organ.

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Don't cut the right piece of the skin or organ.

If we say that you cut the good part of the skin or of the organ, it's because you cut the part of the skin or the organ that is normal. So, the analyses will be normal.

Choice 1 : Analyses will be normal.

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Save lives.

In the blood bank, the work is very stressful. You can safe lives if you choose the good blood bag. If you choose the good blood bag, the transfusion will succeed.

Choice 1 : Transfusion succeed.

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Kill people.

If you don't choose the good blood bag, you can kill the patient. In fact, the patient will probably do a reject and it's can be really dangerous for him because his body fights against himself, and he can die.

Choice 1 : You don't save the life of the patient and the patient die.

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Analysis the good piece of the skin or organ.

If you cut the good part of the organ or skin, you can analyse the good part of the organ or skin and send the result at the doctor.

Choice 1 : Send the result at the doctor.

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Analyses will be normal.

If the stomach for example have a little piece of black and you don't cut this part, analyse will be normal and it's not what we want. If we said to the doctor that everything is good but in reality it's not real, you can put the life of the patient in danger. In fact, If you said to the doctor that everything but it's not real, the doctor will say that everything is good to the patient and the patient will continue is life but, maybe the patient had a cancer and can finally die.

Choice 1 : You don't save the life of the patient and the patient die.

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Send the result at the doctor.

If you cut the good part of the organ, like the part who has necrosis, you will know what the patient have with the analyse so, you will say the result at the doctor and the doctor will say it to the patient. The doctor will do everything is possible to cure him.

Choice 1 : The doctor cure the patient

Choice 2 : The doctor failed to save the patient

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Transfusion succeed.

The transfusion succeeds. You save the life of the patient.

Choice 1 : The patient is alive

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Save the life of the patient.

Congratulations you save the life of the patient!

Choice 1 : Back to the start

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You don't save the life of the patient and the patient die.

You don't do your job correctly and before of your misconduct the patient die.

Choice 1 : little complication

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You do all your job correctly but the patient die.

You do all your job correctly thoughtful, the doctor can't save the patient, and he dies.

Choice 1 : You are safe.

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The patient's family decide to to take you to court.

You need to have a good lawyer to win.

Choice 1 : You win!

Choice 2 : You lose.

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You win!

You win at the court and can continue your life at your job.

Choice 1 : You keep your job.

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You lose.

Write this part of the story here and present your reader with choices.

Choice 1 : You lose your job.

Choice 2 : You keep your job.

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You keep your job.

You keep your job and you can continue your life but, in pay attention to the errors you do in the lab. You continue in the fulfillment.

Choice 1 : Back to the start

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You lose your job.

Unfortunately, you lose your job. You quit and you leave a vacant position behind you.

Choice 1 : Back to the start

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You are safe.

You do all your job correctly so you are safe and you can continue your life normally.

Choice 1 : back to the start

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