Life

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jeremy deschamps

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Word count: 1808

Choice count: 29

Section count: 19

Image count: 18

Error count: 58

Field Related Analysis:

Education : 27 matches (Down, School, choice, class, college, degree, diploma, don, exam, failed, first, games, goal, grade, grades, graduation, homework, management, reader, review, reward, school, skills, student, task, trainee, university)

Law/Paralegal-Technology : 24 matches (African, award, bias, case, Child, company, construction, drugs, fact, family, House, interest, Local, minimum wage, month, office, opinion, order, section, sentence, short title, Special, suicide, title)

Computer Science : 24 matches (bias, bit, call, child, choice, Class, Computer science, computer, garbage, local, medium, member, min, News, path, Push, reader, review, search, searching, Section, sentence, task, video)

Target Structure:

bias (1 match)

cursory (1 match)

ins-and-outs (1 match)

intern (1 match)

internship (1 match)

more often than not (1 match)

OJT (1 match)

overtime (1 match)

retirement (2 matches)

straight A's (1 match)

though (2 matches)

time management (1 match)

trainee (1 match)

undermine (1 match)

wage (1 match)

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Life

End of secondary.

I had just finished my schooldays, and I was heading home. On my ways, I was wondering what approach would be better to have for my studying. I always had good grades without studying. I guess some people would call me a straight A's. But recently I got only 70% in a French exam. I don't know if I should continue to do cursory review of my notes or trying to get better time management skills with homework. In fact, exams will be more and more tough. Maybe if I manage to pull good grades my moms will reward me and maybe she will buy me the new scooter. I have three choices:

Choice 1 : I do a thorough study

Choice 2 : I study a little bit two days before exams.

Choice 3 : I can do as always and play video games.

a

Study.

After Studying like a good student, the final exams seem easy. I finished it in one hour and quit the class first after another 30 min of review. Finally, my work paid, I got A’s on all exams and manage to get a reward by the school for my hard work and my scooter.

Choice 1 : After my graduation I might search for a first job to have some money while doing college in medicine.

Choice 2 : Or I can just chills with my 5ft grade secondary diploma take a year off doing volunteering abroad.

Choice 3 : Or I can go to my local dealer start doing drug dealing, I heard it payed well.

a

Late.

After studying two days before the exam I though I was going to be good for the exam and I was right! I Got good grades but not enough good grades for medicine.

Choice 1 : After my graduation I might search for a first job to have some money while doing college in computer science.

Choice 2 : Or I can take a break and get to go in other country in the world volunteering.

a

Oups.

Playing video game was not a problem until here but I failed my last exam that was way to hard. And finally, my years too went to the garbage I did a year of school for nothing. Now I will have to do it again… Why did I do that.

Write a choice here.

a

Job.

Last week, I was searching for a job. Just a little job that would help me with my expensive habits. I got picked up by a McDonald's not too far from my house and got my first OJT there! There was another trainee to and we became friends! They showed me how to cook the perfect Big-Burger It was awesome to see the ins-and-outs of a fast food this popular. I've worked there all day, and my wage is not that low I made point five more money than the minimum wage. The only drawbacks that I got was that I got tired after 4 hours of doing the same thing. But I don't want my choice to be bias by money. I don't know what to do...

Choice 1 : Do I quit the job and focus on study?

Choice 2 : Do I stay at mcdonalds for now while studying

a

Volunteering.

After the fist month of volunteering abroad I became friend with people I would not have known staying at home doing work. I’m glad I chose to go take a break. After my years of volunteering I might will continue to college knowing more about the world that before. Maybe it will help me. Or I can continue doing volunteering and help others in country around the world.

Choice 1 : Doing my studying when I’ll return to my home country.

Choice 2 : Continue doing volunteering in country around the globe.

a

Prison.

Well doing drugs got me in prison for a lifetime sentence should have gone for the school, I guess…END.

Choice 1 : End of secondary.

a

Bored.

Schools went surprisingly good since I do not have to work and study at the same times. After College I went to university but now, I still have 2 years to go before I’m finished with school and start working in an hospital helping other. The thing is that I really am getting bored of doing homework and studying. I don’t have a life anymore... All my friend finished school 2 years ago and I cannot go on party and enjoy life anymore. I’m stuck into studying. I could always go in a DEP and do construction it doesn’t seem that bad and It’s well payed… Should I:

Choice 1 : Continue in medicine and push my self to finish it.

Choice 2 : Go in a DEP finish it in one year and start working in a company

a

Bored.

Its was a pain to work while studying in medicine but I’ve done it.. After College I went to university but now, I still have 2 years to go before I’m finished with school and start working in an hospital helping other. The thing is that I really am getting bored of doing homework and studying. I don’t have a life anymore... All my friend finished school 2 years ago and I cannot go on party and enjoy life anymore. I’m stuck into studying. I could always go in a DEP and do construction it doesn’t seem that bad and It’s well payed….

Choice 1 : Continue in medicine and push my self to finish it.

Choice 2 : Go in a DEP finish it in one year and start working in a company.

a

Volunteering end.

After all I gave my all to the world and think I will left it in a good shape. I earn the Nobel award of peace after I get to help African get out of their past misery. After all My goal in life was to help other! I think I had a good life…. END.

Choice 1 : End of secondary.

a

Dream.

I got to work at my dream job last month as an intern in an hospital. My first job has gotten a lot more boring since that internship... And I really don't know if I should continue doing it. If I resign, I will get stuck in a dead end financially. In the other hand if I quit, I'll get the advantages of being happier and being able to focus on studying. I guess the more I focus on that the more I will get my dream job fast. But, I'm still skeptical about having no money inflow. What would you do in my case?

Choice 1 : Continue working in my first job

Choice 2 : Stop working and focus on getting my degree and work in the hospital.

a

Interest.

I don't know why but in the past 2 years I haven't got any accomplishment in my construction company. I guess I am powerless about it but I'm always asking myself: “how in 2 years I haven't done anything special for this small business. I do overtime every day, and yet I'm about quitting this job because it is so boring.” I don't know! Maybe, I'm missing the point... Is it normal to lose that kind of interest in a job after 20 years of work? My retirement is in 20 years it is not the time to quit. I have 50% of my years done already. I guess I will continue doing nothing in that company. Why wouldn’t I listen to my mother when she said that quitting medicine to go in construction was a bad idea for me.

Choice 1 : Continue working in this companies.

Choice 2 : Give up everything and go to school again to finish my degree in medicine.

a

Pride.

I got to live a good life. I saved a good amount of life and I’m proud off myself. My life could of gone way worse if I had chose a different path. I’m happy to die surrounded by my wife, child and grand child….END.

Choice 1 : End of secondary.

a

Others.

Yesterday I got sucked up into an opinion fight with the other member of my company. I was doing my work at my office when my right colleague shouts out that I was against the current order of the boss. So, suddenly almost every one of my 12 co-workers came to my office desk and started shout out that the current task was fair. So, being myself... I withheld my opinions without giving any though about the others. I now realise that more often than not it is the same guy that starts the fight in this company. I guess he's the one that want to undermine my effort.

Choice 1 : Continue

a

Perseverance.

After finishing my degree I worked for 40 years in medecines and end up getting a good life. My path was a little long. But I did well and I’m proud to quit the world knowing that I never gave up.

Choice 1 : End of secondary.

a

Normal.

My life was a little boring, but it had good part. I wasn’t rich but not poor too.. Had a medium life without much going on... It is what it is! I’m happy that retirement went well, and I quit this world hopping for people I love not doing mistake I have done!

Choice 1 : End of secondary.

a

Give this section a short title.

Write this part of the story here and present your reader with choices.

Write a choice here.

Mental Break Down.

After another years of working at Mc Donnalds my mental health was critical between Working 20hours a week at Mc Donnalds and doing 60hours of study and working on my degree of medecine. I Broke down inside. I forfeit... NEWS : A suicide appened in the nigth of the 20th at Laval !

Choice 1 : End of secondary.

a

Home.

It was a really happy moment when I returned to my house with my family waiting for me. I missed them while volunteering. After college, I went to university but now, I still have 2 years to go before I’m finished with school and start working in a hospital helping other. The thing is that I really am getting bored of doing homework and studying. I don’t have a life anymore... All my friend finished school 2 years ago and I cannot go on party and enjoy life anymore. I’m stuck into studying. I could always go in a DEP and do construction it doesn’t seem that bad and It’s well payed… Should I:

Choice 1 : Continue in medicine and push my self to finish it.

Choice 2 : Go in a DEP finish it in 1 year and start working in a company.

a