My business life.

A hypertext narrative by

Lara Pannitti

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Word count: 2023

Choice count: 51

Section count: 35

Image count: 35

Error count: 1

Field Related Analysis:

Law/Paralegal-Technology : 25 matches (account, act, answer, arrested, case, club, company, conference, criminal, fact, family, House, illegal, International, issue, living, Local, month, offer, police officer, port, premium, private, test, waste)

Tourism : 23 matches (Alcohol, Casino, City, Competition, Conference, Demand, Extra, Museum, Party, Plane, Program, Restaurant, Restaurants, brand, casino, chef, conference, door, international, port, program, single, trip)

Computer Science : 21 matches (check, choice, Class, Declare, don't care, Eiffel, group, huge, hypertext, local, manager, name, neighbor, port, Private, score, station, store, tournament, tower, True)

Target Structure:

come in handy (1 match)

dead-end job (1 match)

ins-and-outs (1 match)

intern (1 match)

internship (1 match)

overtime (1 match)

premium wage (1 match)

purpose (1 match)

straight A's (1 match)

test drive (1 match)

though (1 match)

vacant position (1 match)

wage (1 match)

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My business life.

My work ethic.

My name is Lara Pannitti. This hypertext starts during my first year at Montmorency College. I need to choose how I will use my time now that I am a full time student. I have to to decide if I should focus on my school work by studying a lot, or if I should demand to work more hours at my part-time-job.

Choice 1 : I Focus on my School Work.

Choice 2 : Demand to work more hours at my job.

How to work

I Focus on my School Work.

All of my hard work at school has finally come in handy. I graduated from college as a straight A's student. I am so talented that the HEC university, one of the best Business schools in Montreal, gave me a scholarship. One of the biggest Business company also heard of me, and they offered me a job. I need to decide which of these two offers I should accept.

Choice 1 : I Accept the HEC Offer.

Choice 2 : I Accept the Job Offer.

envelope

I Accept the HEC Offer.

During my first week at HEC Montreal, I had a conference about the different programs of the university. The one that caught my eye was the Study abroad program. In fact, I would be able to do one of my school semesters in another country.

Choice 1 : I go study abroad.

Choice 2 : I stay here in Montreal.

HEC

I Accept the Job Offer.

I am so happy in this new job! Even though I am new here, I still make premium wage. For the first time in my life, I can say that I am rich! I have so much money and I don't know what to do with it.

Choice 1 : I save my money.

Choice 2 : I splurge.

Job

I go study abroad.

I am in Rome, Italy! I love studying here. I want to find something to do during my free time here. One of the locals gave me a flyer for a cooking class. I don't know if I want to test drive cooking or if I want to try every restaurant in this city.

Choice 1 : I eat at restaurants and gain 60 pounds (27.22 kg).

Choice 2 : I take cooking classes.

Study abroad

I stay here in Montreal.

I have nothing to do and I am bored. I found out that there is a vacant position in an extracurricular group at my University. I take my chance and apply.

Choice 1 : I got in!

Choice 2 : I didn't get accepted.

Montreal

I eat at restaurants and gain 60 pounds (27.22 kg).

I am back in Montreal and I am obese. I shouldn't have eaten all of this pasta in Italy. Just going to the bathroom is an exercise for me. My next door neighbour is a producer for the television show called "The Biggest Loser" and he offered me a place on the show as a contestant.

Choice 1 : I go as a contestant on the show.

Choice 2 : I don't participate in the show.

Obese

I take cooking classes.

Taking these classes made me realise that I have a passion for cooking. Nothing makes me feel better than making a perfect Tiramisu. My dream is to become a chef but I don't know if I have the courage.

Choice 1 : I follow my dream.

Choice 2 : I play it safe.

Cooking class

I go as a contestant on the show.

The Show was the best thing that could ever happen to me. I lost all of my extra weight and became famous. I am living in Hollywood and my next door neighbor is Oprah. I exercise every day and I have my very own Morning show.

Choice 1 : Want another ending?

My own TV show

I don't participate in the show.

I am now too fat to do anything. I can't get up and I need someone constantly with me to help me do my every day chores. My life has no purpose. I am a prisoner of my own house.

Choice 1 : Want another ending?

I don't participate

I follow my dream.

Taking risks paid off! I opened my very own restaurant in the old port of Montreal! I am a renowned chef. Movie stars come to Montreal just to taste my cuisine! I am best friends with Gordon Ramsay. Every two weekends, I fly to New York with my private plane to meet him at his restaurant.I love my life.

Choice 1 : Want another ending?

My own restaurant

I play it safe.

I am forty years old, and I am working in a dead-end job. My life has no meaning. I have trouble getting up in the morning because I am not doing anything to make the world a better place. I lost my determination. I am depressed and lonely.

Choice 1 : Want another ending?

boring job

I got in!

My team and I are in the International Business Competition. The score is equal. It all come down to my answer. If I say the right answer, we are the winners of the tournament.

Choice 1 : I give the right answer.

Choice 2 : I give the wrong answer.

happy

I didn't get accepted.

The rest of my year at the HEC university was pretty boring. I had nothing to make me fell accomplished and I didn't feel like I had my place there. I never graduated from university. I am now working as a manager at my local McDonald restaurant.

Choice 1 : Want another ending?

Sad

I give the wrong answer.

Because of me, we didn't win the tournament. I got kicked off of the team and cried for weeks. I fell useless and have no friends.

Choice 1 : Want another ending?

Bad answer

I give the right answer.

Because we won the tournament, everyone in our team got an internship. As an intern, I learned the ins-and-outs of finance. That on-the-job training really helped my career. I am currently one the biggest businesswomen in Canada. I make more than a million dollars every year.

Choice 1 : Want another ending?

right answer

I save my money.

It has now been three years since I have been working for this company. My bank account is full. I don't know what to do with all of this money.

Choice 1 : I travel the world.

Choice 2 : Save the money for later.

Money

I splurge.

I went all out and bought myself the brand-new Ferrari. I am rolling in the city like there is no tomorrow. I check my bank account to see if I could afford another Ferrari, and I find out that I have a huge dept. I don't know how I would solve this important money issue.

Choice 1 : I take more hours at work.

Choice 2 : I go to the casino.

Stress

I travel the world.

At the end of my trip, I met a guy named Nicolas in France. It was love at first sight. I spent the rest of my month with him. We went up the Eiffel tower, and we saw the Mona Lisa at the Louvre Museum. Should I stay with my one true love or go back home?

Choice 1 : Stay in France with Nicolas.

Choice 2 : Go home in Montreal.

The Earth

Save the money for later.

I am now 85 years old, and I am still saving my money. Like they say, "once a money saver, always a money saver".I haven't done anything interesting of my life. I am now too old to do something adventurous. I have wasted my life.

Choice 1 : Want another ending?

Bank of Montreal

Stay in France with Nicolas.

I am currently 35 years old and I have a beautiful family. I have my dream job. Next week, Nicholas and I are going back to Paris for our 7 year anniversary.

Choice 1 : Want another ending?

Heart

Go home in Montreal.

I have never recovered from my brake up with Nicolas. I am 40 years old, and I am still single. I have no family of my own and I still regret my decision every day.

Choice 1 : Want another ending?

Alone

I take more hours at work.

After working overtime for a year at my job, I finally paid of my dept. I am finally relieved of all of the stress that came with this dept.

Choice 1 : Want another ending?

Clock

I go to the casino.

Because I don't want to work extra shifts, I decided that I was going to gamble all of the money that I have. I am going to let faith decide my destiny by playing roulette. Now I have to choose the color that I am going to bet my money on.

Choice 1 : Red.

Choice 2 : Black.

Casino of Montreal

Red.

The luck was on my side! I am a millionaire! I can now pay of my dept and maybe buy another car. I am so happy.

Choice 1 : Want another ending?

Black.

The luck was not on my side. I lost everything. I had to declare myself bankrupt. It has been thirty years, and I still haven't recovered from this lost. My life is a total mess.

Choice 1 : Want another ending?

Demand to work more hours at my job.

Finally finished my long day at work. To celebrate this big accomplishment I am going to go to my friend's Halloween party.

Choice 1 : Go to the party.

Party

Go to the party.

When I arrive at the club where the party is taking place, I realise that everyone is drinking. The alcohol here is very expensive, but I don't care!

Choice 1 : I waste all of my money on alcohol.

Alcohol

I waste all of my money on alcohol.

I drank a little too much alcohol and I got in trouble with some criminals. Now if I don't do as they say, my life could be in danger.

Choice 1 : I go get help at the police station.

Choice 2 : I do what the criminals tell me to do

Trouble

I do what the criminals tell me to do.

While I was doing the illegal stuff that the criminal wanted me to do, I heard the police sirens. I have to act quickly.

Choice 1 : I go to prison.

Choice 2 : I run away to Mexico.

Police

I go get help at the police station.

Thanks to the police officers, I got out of trouble. The criminals that were threatening me are now long gone in prison. While I was working with the police, I discovered that I liked the job of a police officer. The next day, I decided to apply to the police academy.

Choice 1 : I get accepted to the police academy.

Choice 2 : I don't get accepted to the police academy.

Police station

I get accepted to the police academy.

I am now graduated from the police academy. I love the job because everyday is different. Because of my good work, I just got promoted to detective. I am so happy with my life.

Choice 1 : Want another ending?

Police officer

I don't get accepted to the police academy.

Since I couldn't do my dream job, I decided to quit school because it was no longer useful for me. I am now 40 years old, and I am living in my parents basement. I can't keep a job for more than 6 months. I am a loser.

Choice 1 : Want another ending?

Loser

I go to prison.

I tried to explain to the officers why I was rubbing a jewelry store but my case was a bust. I am now stuck in prison for the next 30 years of my life.

Choice 1 : Want another ending?

Prison

I run away to Mexico.

I live in a little village near Mexico City. I can't see any members of my family and I have to stay low key because I am a criminal on the loose. If I go back in Canada, I will get arrested and spend the rest of my life in prison.

Choice 1 : Want another ending?

Village in Mexico