The last one.

A hypertext narrative by

Cassandre Bastarache

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Word count: 1861

Choice count: 46

Section count: 31

Image count: 31

Error count: 0

Field Related Analysis:

Computer Science : 23 matches (body, bridge, call, capacity, check, choice, click, close, emergency, forest, Function, group, install, noise, odds, open, path, physical, Pick, sleep, store, tree, window)

Nursing : 21 matches (accident, ankle, body, capacity, test, fatigue, foot, Health, hospital, HR, kneecap, muscle, nail, physical, play, position, practice, puncture, reaction, sleep, injured)

Tourism : 19 matches (Air, Construction, Crossing, Human, Resources, air, bridge, cabin, capacity, coach, door, roll, roll on, stop, through, ticket, to visit, trail, train)

Target Structure:

a foot in the door (1 match)

background check (1 match)

HR (1 match)

learn the ropes (1 match)

more often than not (1 match)

on-the-job-training (1 match)

put aside (1 match)

straight A's (1 match)

test drive (1 match)

vacant position (1 match)

wage (1 match)

S1.

Congratulations! You are just finished your DEC in Human resources at St-Jérôme College. What are you going to do next?

Choice 1 : You choose to go to the University of Sherbrooke to study Bachelor of Education in Physical Education and Health.

Choice 2 : You choose to start converting a van to live in it, drive and travel all around America with your little puppy.

S2.

You have just started university and a lot of projects are open to you. What are you going to do next?

Choice 1 : You decide to apply to a vacant position in a sports shop as a new wage job.

Choice 2 : You join the university's ultimate Frisbee team.

S3.

When building the van, you get a foot in the door rapidly. More often than not, you put aside other projects to learn the ropes of this one by volunteering. You notice that it would be necessary to change the tires and install solar panels on the roof. You hesitate to make these changes because you don't have much money. What are you going to do next?

Choice 1 : You agree to make the necessary changes knowing that your bank account will be almost empty at the end of the construction.

Choice 2 : You only accept the installation of solar panels to be autonomous.

S4.

The HR of the company passed you a background check and you manage to get the job. Rapidly, you are offered to do an on-the-job-training and a test drive. You are so good that they offer you to be a mountain bike instructor too. What are you going to do next?

Choice 1 : You refuse because you prefer to work quietly in the store.

Choice 2 : You accept and you do the necessary training to have straight A's and be specializing as much as possible.

S5.

The head coach has just retired and the new one is inexperienced. The style of play brought has never been seen in the championship. You and your team no longer know which style to adopt. What are you going to do next?

Choice 1 : The game plan paid off. Your team wins the championship.

Choice 2 : You play like old-fashioned. Your team loses everything.

S6.

For this night, you hesitate to venture into the great outdoors or stay by the water. What are you going to do next?

Choice 1 : You decide to sleep in the wilderness.

Choice 2 : You choose to sleep by the water.

S7.

You plan to go for a week in the forest, on the other hand it only announces bad temperatures. Knowing that your solar panels must receive the sun's rays to function, you decide to go anyway. What are you going to do next?

Choice 1 : You come across a tree house. You decide to go take a look.

Choice 2 : Going off the road with old tires, you get a puncture.

S8.

A close friend comes to visit you at the store and asks if you can tune his bike for free. You accept because you aren't able to say no. What are you going to do next?

Choice 1 : You make him a nice repair. His bike couldn't be better adjusted.

Choice 2 : Insulted by his request, you sloppy your repair and you call him immediately so that he comes to pick up his bike.

S9.

Knowing the capacity of your young people, you bring them to a terrain that is not yet mapped but traced. What are you going to do next?

Choice 1 : One of your explorers breaks his rear derailleur by making a drop.

Choice 2 : One of your explorers breaks his ankle when crossing a bridge.

S10.

After this victory, you feel that your body is tired, but you decide to train anyway. You are thinking of either doing cardiovascular or muscle training. What are you going to do next?

Choice 1 : You decide to do cardiovascular training.

Choice 2 : You decide to do a muscle training.

S11.

You are getting sucked up by these loses. You are so angry that you tell the coach that his playing style is bad. Immediately... What are you going to do next?

Choice 1 : He refuses that you continue to be a part of the team.

Choice 2 : He requests that you join him at the end of the next practice in his office.

S12.

You finally decided to settle down. To stabilize the van, you have to put mats and logs under and next to the wheels, but it's getting late so you don't know what to do. What are you going to do next?

Choice 1 : Even if you are tired and have difficulty seeing since it is dark. You manage to find the items you need.

Choice 2 : You go to bed and tell yourself that you will live with the consequences the next morning.

S13.

You wake up in the middle of the night because someone knocks on your door. It's the police. He gives you a ticket and forces you to change places by saying good night. What are you going to do next?

Choice 1 : The policeman finally left. You decide not to move the van for the rest of the night and go back to sleep.

Choice 2 : You are looking for the place that the policeman suggested to you to spend the rest of the night.

S14.

You enter the cabin. She is small and very warm. You sit on the bed and fall asleep. You wake up by jumping. What are you going to do next?

Choice 1 : You get up immediately and run to the door to join your van.

Choice 2 : You open your eyes to see if there is someone and go back to sleep.

S15.

After a few hours and a few calls, no one can come and help you. You decide to fix it alone. What are you going to do next?

Choice 1 : You see it's a nail going through the tire. You take a pair of pliers and try to pull it off, but it's more difficult than you think.

Choice 2 : You inflate the tire and roll on it to try to get out of the wood.

S16.

You put it perfectly in order. He thanks you and he leaves. Meanwhile, the owners enter the store and notice that there is no invoice associated with this latest bike. He asks you for explanations and you crack. You reveal everything to them. You get scolded because it doesn't happen. You will learn from your actions.