BRAD-BEL'S ENDLESS LIFE

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Inessa Dagesse

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Word count: 1665

Choice count: 33

Section count: 27

Image count: 26

Error count: 21

Field Related Analysis:

Education : 21 matches (School, choice, class, college, compensation, course, diploma, don, field, first, graduation, learn, lesson, lessons, motivation, review, school, second language, teach, trainee, university)

Computer Science : 21 matches (accelerate, call, choice, Class, clock, compromise, drawback, emergency, Error, field, manager, Package, pass, Pick, review, session, signed, store, translator, language, uncertainty)

Tourism : 21 matches (Area, Contract, Interpreter, Opportunity, Package, Restaurant, Trade, US, apartment, compensation, contract, course, field, forward, language, package, pass, residence, stop, trip, waitress)

Target Structure:

compensation package (1 match)

drawback (1 match)

drudgery (1 match)

fulfillment (1 match)

overtime (2 matches)

pull off (2 matches)

retirement (1 match)

set aside (2 matches)

though (1 match)

trainee (1 match)

vacant position (1 match)

wage (1 match)

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BRAD-BEL'S ENDLESS LIFE

The Beginning Of Uncertainty.

We are on May 20, 2023. It's my last day of class at St-Jérôme College in Arts, Letters and Communication: Languages field. I will soon receive my last notes. I look forward to my results.

Choice 1 : I pull off all my course and I get my college diploma in languages.

Choice 2 : Run a course and I can’t get my college diploma in languages.

I pull off all my course and I get my college diploma in languages.

I am so happy. I finished my college. It was a big drudgery. I can now take the next step in my life, though I have another problem. I can't decide between:

Choice 1 : Go to the united states with my boyfriend Brad-Bo.

Choice 2 : I'm going to university in Quebec to become an interpreter.

Go to the united states with my boyfriend Brad-Bo.

My boyfriend and I have been in a relationship for 3 years. Brad-Bo is an excellent basketball player. During his last year of college, he received numerous universities offers from the United States. So, I don’t want to risk deteriorating our relationship and I want to follow him in his dream. In addition, going to the United States is an opportunity for me. I could perfect my English for my future interpreter work. However, I don't know if he will:

Choice 1 : Agree to live with me in an apartment near his university.

Choice 2 : Living in the residence offered by his university.

Agree to live with me in an apartment near his university.

He can come and live with me! I'm too excited. I have been waiting for this moment for so long. Finally, we will be able to live together. I will also be able to go to the study because Brad-Bo pays half the rent. In addition, I have already set aside a lot of money. I want study to become an interpreter.

Choice 1 : A Few Years Later.

A Few Years Later.

I just graduated from university. We are few weeks after my graduation. Brad-Bo's manager just called me to do business with me. He wants me to be the personal translator for Brad-Bo because he will travel around the world. I am so happy. I immediately accept.

Choice 1 : Beginning of Professional Working Life.

Beginning of Professional Working Life.

Today is my last day as a trainee. They teach me that I must be flexible because they can call me to work any time of the day or night and I must be willing to withstand the significant pressure of a meeting. They teach me basketball slang that I must learn in my mother tongue and my secondary languages. I must be completely fluent in the basketball slang of my second language. My work has just started, and I can already say that it is the best work in the world. I will travel all over the world and every day is different in this job.

Choice 1 : Decisive Day.

Decisive Day.

It's an important day tomorrow. It will be a decisive day for Bradley's career. I have no right to any error otherwise I could compromise its future.

Choice 1 : I stay awake all night to review my files.

Choice 2 : I go to bed early to be in shape tomorrow.

I stay awake all night to review my files.

I just woke up. OH NO! I fell asleep. I'm late, I think I just missed the meetings. I hurry to change, and I leave immediately.

Choice 1 : End.

End.

My life is ruined. My boss fired me, and Bradley doesn't want to forgive me and refuses to see me again.

Choice 1 : The Beginning Of Uncertainty.

I go to bed early to be in shape tomorrow.

The meeting is now over. Everything went as planned and Bradley just signed a contract that will provide us with a dream retirement. I am proud of myself and especially of Brad-Bo. Tonight, we will celebrate in the richest restaurant in the region.

Choice 1 : End.

End.

I'm still with Brad-Bo, and we have been married for 4 years. I have a feeling of fulfillment. My life is like I had dreamed. We live in a fabulous villa in Los Angeles, and we still travel a lot. We plan to have children when we are in our thirties, and we plan to retire at 45.

Choice 1 : The Beginning Of Uncertainty.

Living in the residence offered by his university.

Oh no! He can't live with me because the university already pays him everything, and he doesn't have enough money to pay rent. It causes me a drawback. I will have to put my studies aside until later. I would have to find a job with a good wage, to make an overtime and to set aside. I can’t go back in my choice. I have already rented the apartment.

Choice 1 : A few months later.

A Few Months Later.

We are now in September and the Brad-Bo's lessons will start soon. I just moved to my new apartment a few days ago. I really like the area. I feel like I'm going to feel at home quickly. I must find work as soon as possible. I will take any vacant position.

Choice 1 : A few days later.

A Few Days Later.

I found a job not far from home as a waitress. I've been working there for about two months. I already know the ins and outs of work. Today, I'm still doing overtime.

Choice 1 : A few hours later.

A Few Hours Later.

It's eleven o'clock. I'm the one who closes the store. I'm tired, and I can't wait to go home. It's the weekend, so Brad-Bo is waiting for me at home. He comes to see me all weekend. I can’t wait to see it.

Choice 1 : I call Brad-Bo, and he comes pick me up with his car.

Choice 2 : I don't bother him and walk home.

I call Brad-Bo, and he comes pick me up with his car.

I wait on the sidewalk and I see the Brad-Bo's car. I go into the car and kiss her. While he drives, I tell him about my day at work. We take advantage of the red lights to kiss us another time. We always do that. Moreover, there are not many cars at this hour of the night, then there is no danger. Brad-Bo thinks he sees the lights change and weighs on the gas and BAMM!

Choice 1 : End.

End.

“Brad-Bo and Brad-Bel had a car accident. They are transported to the emergency. Their condition is critical.”.

Choice 1 : The Beginning Of Uncertainty.

I don't bother him and walk home.

I'm on my way back and I hear footsteps last me. It is strange because I have often made this trip at this hour and there is never anyone usually. I start walking faster to get home faster. I hear the steps behind me accelerate. I start to run faster and BAAAM !

Choice 1 : End.

End.

“Brad-Bel is attacked by an armed man when she returned home.”.

Choice 1 : The Beginning Of Uncertainty.

I'm going to university in Quebec to become an interpreter.

I got my diploma and now I work in a small company. My job is a legwork. I must collect information about my clients, and I must learn the tricks of the trade. It is not the best job in the world, and it is very difficult, but at least it offers good compensation package. What I like most, was paid vacations.

Choice 1 : End.

End.

Today is my birthday. I am now 35 years old. I celebrate with my longtime friends. I met them during my first day of work. We celebrate in a restaurant near the office where we usually go after work. I know that there is a lot missing in my life as a man and children and work takes up a lot of space in my life. Despite everything, I love my life. I am in good shape, I have a very nice apartment and money to pay for my trips.

Choice 1 : The Beginning Of Uncertainty.

Run a course and I can’t get my college diploma in languages.

OH NO! I can’t believe it. I run my Chinese course only 59%. I am too frustrated. In addition, I worked hard for this course.

Choice 1 : I resume my course.

Choice 2 : I give up and go home.

I resume my course.

I keep the courage. I only have one lesson left. It will pass quickly. I can't disappoint my family and I don't want to have a miserable life or become homeless.

Choice 1 : One session later.

One Session Later.

I just finished my college a session later. During this session, I have been thinking and I want to change lanes. I don't know what yet, but in the meantime, I'm going to work to earn money to make quotes for university studies.

Choice 1 : End.

End.

Finally, 5 years later I'm still not going back to school, because now I'm married, and I'm a stay-at-home mom. It is not at all the life that I dreamed of having but it is sufficient, and I adore my daughter and my husband even if I regret having to stop the studies.

Choice 1 : The Beginning Of Uncertainty.

I give up and go home.

I am completely discouraged. I don't have the motivation to continue. I'm going to call my mother to tell her that I haven't graduated and that I'm going to stop studying.

Choice 1 : End.

End.

My mother does not accept that I give up studies and deny myself. I end up homeless.

Choice 1 : The Beginning Of Uncertainty.