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Field Related Analysis:

Nursing : 18 matches (adult, bandage, biology, blood pressure, pressure, test, Doctor, heart, injection, labour, medicine, nurse, practice, stage, supervisor, nursing, trust, injured)

Education : 17 matches (CEGEP, Maria, School, adult, choice, college, don, exam, first, high school, homework, school, student, students, teacher, test, university)

Law/Paralegal-Technology : 15 matches (answer, arrested, blood, Cause, cheat, fact, hire, House, interest, parent, surprise, test, trust, vocation, waste)

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My career story.

I need to make a choice.

I am 22 years old. It is my first session at the college, at Cegep de Saint-Jérôme. I don't know what I want to do in the future, but I know I need to be here, to make a choice.

Choice 1 : Springboard program.

Choice 2 : Nursing program.

Thinking about my future

Springboard program.

I didn't want to go to the College right after High School. Springboards program interest me because everybody tells me that we don't need to study, and I don't want to do my homework because I am a very lazy person.

Choice 1 : Such a waste of time.

Choice 2 : I decided to quit college. It was not for me.

Springboard program

Nursing program.

I am in the Nursing program, and I love it. The only problem that I have right now is that I am scared of the blood.

Choice 1 : I am SCARED.

Choice 2 : Nursing is my vocation.

Nursing

I am SCARED.

It is now my second year of Nursing, we are in November. It is my first period in the morning when I have a call. It is an emergency. Something cause an explosion at the college in the biology's department. They need all the nursing students to helps injured students.

Choice 1 : College need us.

Choice 2 : I think my best friend is dead.

scared

Such a waste of time.

Springboard is such a waste of time. I need to do my homework because in my last French exam, I didn't pass the test. People who tell me that this program is easy are crazy. And now, I just don't want to be at the college. I don't like it. I don't like Springboard program. I think I just need to work at McDonald, and I will be happy for the rest of my life.

Choice 1 : I decided to quit college. It was not for me.

Choice 2 : My sister's hire me at McDonald.

time

I decided to quit college. It was not for me.

This morning is my first morning with no school. And no job. My parent's kick me out of the house because I left the Springboard program without finish it. I need to find a job and a place to live. I have to admit that I am scared.

Choice 1 : My sister's hire me at McDonald.

Write a choice here.

My sister's hire me at McDonald.

I am so happy and exited! My sister hire me to McDonald. I left the Springboard program and now, I am ready to start my real adult life. Who said school is necessary to be happy? Chicken Nuggets makes me happy more than college life.

Write a choice here.

Mcdonald

College need us.

I am so stressed. I am running everywhere. Blood is everywhere. It is a big explosion. I don't understand what to do. I think I am going to faint. I hear my heart beat in my ears. I can't see anything... BANG. I think I am dead.

Write a choice here.

explosion

I think my best friend is dead.

I am running to help all the students. I make injections, bandage, I take the blood pressure... And I see Marie. Marie is my best friend. She is on the floor. Laying in the blood. Her blood. I try to wake her up. She doesn't answer me. I start to cry. She doesn't breathe. Alexandra, the Nursing teacher, arrive and try to help her. It is too late. Marie is not alive.

Write a choice here.

dead

Nursing is my vocation.

Everything is going well. I am not scared of the blood anymore, I practice every day the injection. I am very happy to be a future nurse. I love nursing so much, I am not sure if I want to be a doctor after, or to continue in nursing.

Write a choice here.

Choice 2 : Doctor choice.

Choice 3 : Nursing choice.

vaccination

Doctor choice.

I am now in Medicine program at McGill University for 3 years now. I am on my way to be a doctor. What people ignore about me, is the fact that my teacher is my Boyfriend. I don't know if I tell my secret to my best friend or keep it for me.

Choice 1 : Tell my secret to my best friend.

Choice 2 : Don't tell my secret to anyone.

doctor

Nursing choice.

I am now in the newborn department for my first stage. It is my first week and I am excited. I love babies, and I am really happy to be in this department, but I think I made a mistake this morning... I am not sure if I give the right baby to the mother after her labour. We had to clean the newborn and I think I switched two babies... Should I.

Choice 1 : Tell it to my supervisor.

Choice 2 : Don't say anything.

nursing

Tell it to my supervisor.

I don't have any choices. I need to tell what's happen this morning to my supervisor. I just can't imagine the mother, with another baby than her baby. I am not sure if I tell it to my supervisor or to the mother first.

Write a choice here.

baby

Don't say anything.

Okay, I know that Is maybe the biggest mistake in my life. But, if nobody sees the difference between the two baby, who cares?

Write a choice here.

baby

Tell my secret to my best friend.

Maria, my best friend, is angry. I don't know why. I just said to her that Hugo, my teacher, is my boyfriend. She said that I was a cheater.

Choice 1 : My best friend is my boyfriend's girlfriend !

Choice 2 : She is happy for me.

Don't tell my secret to anyone.

I think Hugo and I are so happy that it is better for us to keeps our secrets. We don't want to be arrested because I am his student.

Write a choice here.

secret

My best friend is my boyfriend's girlfriend !

Marie is angry. And me too. She said that Hugo was her secret boyfriend for 5 months. I am not sure to trust her or him.

Choice 1 : Hugo said she was a liar.

Choice 2 : It is true and.... surprise.

angry

She is happy for me.

She is so happy for me. She asked me if Hugo, my boyfriend, can help her to cheat on the school system and have better notes.

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happy

Hugo said she was a liar.

I can't trust Maria anymore. Hugo thinks she is just jealous, and she dreams to be in my place.

Write a choice here.

It is true and.... surprise.

Hugo is an honest person. Maybe too much... He said that Maria and him are together, and she is pregnant. Surprise!

Write a choice here.

surprise