Word count: 1146
Choice count: 21
Section count: 20
Image count: 20
Error count: 0
Field Related Analysis:
Nursing : 18 matches (adult, bandage, biology, blood pressure, pressure, test, Doctor, heart, injection, labour, medicine, nurse, practice, stage, supervisor, nursing, trust, injured)
Education : 17 matches (CEGEP, Maria, School, adult, choice, college, don, exam, first, high school, homework, school, student, students, teacher, test, university)
Law/Paralegal-Technology : 15 matches (answer, arrested, blood, Cause, cheat, fact, hire, House, interest, parent, surprise, test, trust, vocation, waste)
Target Structure:
I am 22 years old. It is my first session at the college, at Cegep de Saint-Jérôme. I don't know what I want to do in the future, but I know I need to be here, to make a choice.
Choice 1 : Springboard program.
Choice 2 : Nursing program.

I didn't want to go to the College right after High School. Springboards program interest me because everybody tells me that we don't need to study, and I don't want to do my homework because I am a very lazy person.
Choice 1 : Such a waste of time.
Choice 2 : I decided to quit college. It was not for me.
I am in the Nursing program, and I love it. The only problem that I have right now is that I am scared of the blood.
Choice 1 : I am SCARED.
Choice 2 : Nursing is my vocation.
It is now my second year of Nursing, we are in November. It is my first period in the morning when I have a call. It is an emergency. Something cause an explosion at the college in the biology's department. They need all the nursing students to helps injured students.
Choice 1 : College need us.
Choice 2 : I think my best friend is dead.
Springboard is such a waste of time. I need to do my homework because in my last French exam, I didn't pass the test. People who tell me that this program is easy are crazy. And now, I just don't want to be at the college. I don't like it. I don't like Springboard program. I think I just need to work at McDonald, and I will be happy for the rest of my life.
Choice 1 : I decided to quit college. It was not for me.
Choice 2 : My sister's hire me at McDonald.
This morning is my first morning with no school. And no job. My parent's kick me out of the house because I left the Springboard program without finish it. I need to find a job and a place to live. I have to admit that I am scared.
Choice 1 : My sister's hire me at McDonald.
Write a choice here.
I am so happy and exited! My sister hire me to McDonald. I left the Springboard program and now, I am ready to start my real adult life. Who said school is necessary to be happy? Chicken Nuggets makes me happy more than college life.
Write a choice here.
I am so stressed. I am running everywhere. Blood is everywhere. It is a big explosion. I don't understand what to do. I think I am going to faint. I hear my heart beat in my ears. I can't see anything... BANG. I think I am dead.
Write a choice here.
I am running to help all the students. I make injections, bandage, I take the blood pressure... And I see Marie. Marie is my best friend. She is on the floor. Laying in the blood. Her blood. I try to wake her up. She doesn't answer me. I start to cry. She doesn't breathe. Alexandra, the Nursing teacher, arrive and try to help her. It is too late. Marie is not alive.
Write a choice here.
Everything is going well. I am not scared of the blood anymore, I practice every day the injection. I am very happy to be a future nurse. I love nursing so much, I am not sure if I want to be a doctor after, or to continue in nursing.
Write a choice here.
Choice 2 : Doctor choice.
Choice 3 : Nursing choice.
I am now in Medicine program at McGill University for 3 years now. I am on my way to be a doctor. What people ignore about me, is the fact that my teacher is my Boyfriend. I don't know if I tell my secret to my best friend or keep it for me.
Choice 1 : Tell my secret to my best friend.
Choice 2 : Don't tell my secret to anyone.
I am now in the newborn department for my first stage. It is my first week and I am excited. I love babies, and I am really happy to be in this department, but I think I made a mistake this morning... I am not sure if I give the right baby to the mother after her labour. We had to clean the newborn and I think I switched two babies... Should I.
Choice 1 : Tell it to my supervisor.
Choice 2 : Don't say anything.
I don't have any choices. I need to tell what's happen this morning to my supervisor. I just can't imagine the mother, with another baby than her baby. I am not sure if I tell it to my supervisor or to the mother first.
Write a choice here.
Okay, I know that Is maybe the biggest mistake in my life. But, if nobody sees the difference between the two baby, who cares?
Write a choice here.
Maria, my best friend, is angry. I don't know why. I just said to her that Hugo, my teacher, is my boyfriend. She said that I was a cheater.
Choice 1 : My best friend is my boyfriend's girlfriend !
Choice 2 : She is happy for me.
I think Hugo and I are so happy that it is better for us to keeps our secrets. We don't want to be arrested because I am his student.
Write a choice here.
Marie is angry. And me too. She said that Hugo was her secret boyfriend for 5 months. I am not sure to trust her or him.
Choice 1 : Hugo said she was a liar.
Choice 2 : It is true and.... surprise.
She is so happy for me. She asked me if Hugo, my boyfriend, can help her to cheat on the school system and have better notes.
Write a choice here.
I can't trust Maria anymore. Hugo thinks she is just jealous, and she dreams to be in my place.
Write a choice here.
Hugo is an honest person. Maybe too much... He said that Maria and him are together, and she is pregnant. Surprise!
Write a choice here.