Police Technology or not?

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Word count: 1909

Choice count: 43

Section count: 29

Image count: 29

Error count: 0

Field Related Analysis:

Education : 18 matches (School, choice, college, courses, don, first, games, grades, homework, knowledge, learn, learned, liberal, management, school, technology, training, university)

Sociology : 10 matches (criminology, culture, School, fact, homework, technology, management, school, World, training)

Business : 8 matches (amount, company, gain, management, opportunity, team, technology, upgrade)

Target Structure:

a foot in the door (1 match)

intern (1 match)

internship (1 match)

on-the-job-training (1 match)

overtime (1 match)

premium wage (1 match)

purpose (1 match)

put aside (1 match)

straight A's (1 match)

though (1 match)

time management (1 match)

wage (1 match)

worthwhile (1 match)

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Police Technology or not?

Start at the beginning.

I finished my first year of College in liberal art and I don’t know if I want to continue in this path or apply in Police Technology.

Choice 1 : I stay in liberal art at Gerald-Godin College.

Choice 2 : I apply in Police Technology at Ahuntsic College.

Undecided

I stay in liberal art at Gerald-Godin College.

I chose to stay in liberal art at Gerald-Godin College. At my first day of the second year there, I heard that there was already try-outs to be in the flag-football team, but I was in the team last year, and we lost all the games.

Choice 1 : I do the try-outs again this year.

Choice 2 : I don’t do the try-outs, because I’m already in the team anyway.

My choice

I do the try-outs again this year.

I went to the try-outs and there’s a lot of new girls. They are good, so I put all of my efforts to make sure I was good enough to be in the team this year.

Choice 1 : They choose me to be in the team.

Choice 2 : They didn’t choose me to be in the team.

Try outs

They choose me to be in the team.

I am very happy to be in the team and I hope it will be a good season this year, but I don’t want my sport to be my first preoccupation because I want good grades to apply in criminology for University.

Choice 1 : We lost all the games.

Choice 2 : We win all the games.

Team

We lost all the games.

We lost all of the games from the beginning, so I put less effort in flag-football and more effort in school, so I have excellent grades now and my appliance at University in criminology have been accepted!

Choice 1 : Start at the beginning.

Losing

I don’t do the try-outs, because I’m already in the team anyway.

I decided to not do the try-outs this year because I was very good last year, so I’m sure that I don’t have to prove myself to be in the team again.

Choice 1 : I’m in the team again this year.

Choice 2 : I’m not in the team this year.

Confident

I’m in the team again this year.

I’m in the team again this year, but we lost all the games, so I decided to put more effort in school than in sports to have excellent grades and be accepted in criminology at University.

Choice 1 : I’ve been accepted in criminology.

Choice 2 : I haven’t been accepted in criminology.

Criminology

I’ve been accepted in criminology.

I’m very happy to have been accepted in the program I wanted, I’m excited for next year. I wanted to have a job close to the police environment, so I will have a foot in the door in the police world because of the criminology studies I will achieve.

Choice 1 : Start at the beginning.

Criminology

I haven’t been accepted in criminology.

I’m not happy about that, but I will take a year off to volunteer abroad in South Africa. It will help me to reorganize my future and I think there are a lot of advantages by being a volunteer, it will give me life experiences, the opportunity to travel, the opportunity to learn about others culture and it will give me a purpose, the purpose to help people in need in the world.

Choice 1 : Start at the beginning.

South Africa

We won all the games.

I don’t have a lot of time for school, because the practices are intense and I’m very tired. I put aside my homework and my grades are not good because of that, I don’t know what to do.

Choice 1 : I stay in the team and continue with the grades I have.

Choice 2 : I don’t stay in the team and concentrate my efforts on school.

Winning

I stay in the team and continue with the grades I have.

I don’t want to abandon my teammates, but I know that I won’t be accepted at University in criminology. So, I will apply in something more common to liberal art, I will go in radio.

Choice 1 : I’ve been accepted in radio.

Choice 2 : I haven’t been accepted in radio.

Grades

I’ve been accepted in radio.

It wasn’t my first choice, but I’m happy and excited for next year. I will maybe become a radio animator and you will listen to me someday.

Choice 1 : Start at the beginning.

Radio

I haven’t been accepted in radio.

I’m sad that I’m not going to university next year, but it will give me a break from school. I will find a good job, maybe at a company where I could gain premium wage with the experience I will accumulate.

Choice 1 : Start at the beginning.

Break

They didn’t choose me to be in the team.

I’m sad about not being in the team, but I’m happy to have more time for school and because of my good grades, and my effort, I’ve been accepted in criminology.

Choice 1 : Start at the beginning.

Not chosen

I’m not in the team this year.

I shouldn’t have taken for granted that I was already in it, but this helps me to have better grades in school and because of that, I’ve been accepted in criminology.

Choice 1 : Start at the beginning.

Not in the team

I apply in Police Technology at Ahuntsic College.

I applied to the Police Technology program, without really thinking I would be accepted, because there were over 400 applications. Though there was this big amount of people who applied, I succeed through all steps of the acceptance in this program and I’m happy about it. So, I already have a year of College done, so I have fewer courses this year. I saw that there were try-outs for the flag- football team, but I don’t know if I should go.

Choice 1 : I went to the flag-football try-outs.

Choice 2 : I didn’t go to the flag-football try-outs.

Police

I go to the flag-football try-outs.

The team seemed better than the team at my last college, so I hope to be in it because I have the time for it and it motivates me for school.

Choice 1 : I’ve been chosen to be in the team.

Choice 2 : I haven’t been chosen in the flag-football team.

Flag football

I’ve been chosen to be in the team.

I’m very happy to be in the team and my teammates seems great. I’m very motivated for this new year at this new College and I just hope to win the flag-football finals.

Choice 1 : We won the flag-football finals.

Choice 2 : We didn’t win the flag-football finals.

Chosen

We won the flag-football finals.

The fact that we won makes me very happy and to be in the team have really kept me motivated in school. My grades are great and I have passed all of my courses. It’s been the same for the 2 years after that, and my appliance at Nicolet have been accepted. So, I’m very happy.

Choice 1 : Start at the beginning.

Win

I didn’t go to the flag-football try-outs.

I want to concentrate my efforts in the Police Technology program and have the best grades to be accepted at Nicolet in 3 years.

Choice 1 : I’ve been accepted at Nicolet during my last year in Police Technology.

Choice 2 : I haven’t been accepted at Nicolet yet.

Not going

I’ve been accepted at Nicolet during my last year in Police Technology.

I’m very happy about going to Nicolet next year, it been an intense 3 years of work in the Police Technology program and I’m excited to become an officer.

Choice 1 : Start at the beginning.

Accepted

I haven’t been accepted at Nicolet yet.

I will do one year of University while waiting to be accepted at Nicolet. I will do a certificate in criminology to have more knowledge, and we will see when I am accepted. If I’m not accepted the year after that, I will do another certificate and it will help me to very learned the ropes in the Police world.

Choice 1 : Start at the beginning.

Rejected

I haven’t been chosen in the flag-football team.

I would have liked to be chosen in the team, but I will apply to have a job at the school pool instead because I have my lifeguard cards and I have the time to work. It will also give me a good background for my appliance at Nicolet in 2 years.

Choice 1 : I have a job at the school pool.

Choice 2 : I don’t have a job at the school pool.

Sad

I have a job at the school pool.

I’m happy to have this job, and I realized that there are a lot of similarities to the police world. I work at the pool for the 3 years I’ve been there and my appliance to Nicolet have been successful. I think the fact that I was a lifeguard at my school help a lot because it shows my hard work with all the overtime I did and it shows that I’m implicated at school.

Choice 1 : Start at the beginning.

Lifeguard

I don’t have a job at the school pool.

The fact that I didn’t have the job give me a lot of free times for school and because of my hard work in the Police Technology program during the 3 years, my appliance at Nicolet have been accepted the first time.

Choice 1 : Start at the beginning.

Not caring

We didn’t win the flag-football finals.

The flag-football season haven’t been great, we lost a lot of games and the finals. This have demotivated me, and my grades at school really shows it.

Choice 1 : I do the flag-football team again for the next 2 years.

Choice 2 : I didn’t do the flag-football team for the next two years.

Lose

I do the flag-football team again for the next 2 years.

I decided to stay in the team for the next two years, but it haven’t been great, we lost again and again, so my results at school wasn’t great, because my time management wasn’t good. My appliance at Nicolet have been rejected because of that, but I will try to apply at a University to upgrade my grades and be accepted at Nicolet in the future.

Choice 1 : Start at the beginning.

University

I didn’t do the flag-football team for the next two years.

This have really helped me to concentrate on school and have better grades. I think it also helps me to be accepted to Nicolet, because my grades where all straight A’s and I concentrate more about being an intern at the SPVM where I had an on-the-job-training. This internship had given me a lot of experiences and help me to know more about the police environment, things that is great for Nicolet.

Choice 1 : Start at the beginning.

90%

I don’t stay in the team and concentrate my efforts on school.

Not being in the team was a hard choice, but I was putting aside school. For the rest of the year, I put all of my efforts on school and it was worthwhile, because have been accepted at University in the program I wanted which is criminology.

Choice 1 : Start at the beginning.