Word count: 559
Choice count: 19
Section count: 14
Image count: 13
Error count: 4
Field Related Analysis:
Education : 17 matches (School, choice, college, don, first, graduate, graduation, high school, level, market, options, private, public school, reader, school, task, university)
Computer Science : 8 matches (choice, computer, name, open, Private, reader, record, task)
Law/Paralegal-Technology : 7 matches (access, clerk, market, private, public, record, young)
Target Structure:
Hi, my name is Daryll and I'm studying Medical Records at Ahuntsic College. It's my final year in Ahuntsic and I have one of the most important decisions to make right now.
Choice 1 : A real decision.
Choice 2 : Clown.
Choice 3 : My real choice.

From here I have 2 options. The first one is to graduate from the school and find a job in my program. Or I can graduate in my program and go to the UQAM University for a plan B.
Choice 1 : Medical Records.
Choice 2 : UQAM University.
I drop out of school and I make a career in the circle. A clown makes $51,000 per years. It's not that bad choice for a plan C.
Choice 1 : Clown part 2.
After my graduation, I have multiple options. First, I can find a job at public or a private hospital. Or I could do a specialization.
Choice 1 : Specialization in oncology.
Choice 2 : Work life.
I love sport and I know I will always like it. That why I wanted to go to UQAM and help young athlete like myself to become stronger.
Choice 1 : Kinesiologist.
After my graduation, I thought about kinesiologist because I always wanted to help athlete especially athlete from public high School because they don't get the chance like the one in private school to have all the equipment needed to perform to a high level. I want to give them the opportunity to compete in a high level.
Choice 1 : Life of a kinesiologist.
A medical Record Clerk in oncology has to do the exact same task as a regular technician except that it will be with cancer. So basically the task are creates new medical records and retrieves existing medical records by gathering appropriate record folders and contents; assigning and recording new record numbers; verifying existing record numbers; inputting and recording locations to computer; delivering records.
Choice 1 : The beginning.
I go straight to the market and find a job in a public or private hospital and I do this for the rest of my life.
Choice 1 : The beginning.
I become very famous and make millions and someday someone kills me for my money.
Choice 1 : The beginning.
Many years after helping athlete from public school to compete against the private school, I got the opportunity to open my gym.
Choice 1 : Open my gym.
Choice 2 : Life of a Kinesiologist/ Medical Records Clerk.
Write this part of the story here and present your reader with choices.
Choice 1 : The beginning.
I finally decided to continue helping young athlete to perform.
Choice 1 : The beginning.
My plan is to graduate from my program, go to UQAM finish my study in Kinesiologist and work in both of my fields of studies. I explain. I will train them and also have access to their Medical Record, so I could help them better.
Choice 1 : The beginning.