Word count: 618
Choice count: 18
Section count: 9
Image count: 8
Error count: 40
Field Related Analysis:
Dance : 10 matches (Back, Balance, Face, Natural, Out, Rock, Shake, Slow, Touch, Wall)
Psychology : 7 matches (idiot, nightmare, order, process, reason, rocks, touch)
Tourism : 7 matches (Climbing, Human, Natural, alien, balance, slow, stop)
Target Structure:
ZIm had a nightmare. He was in the prescence of...D-dib-STINK the HUMAN! They were for some reason working with eachother to climb a mountain(?) and Zim lost his balance. In seconds, he was hanging on to a cliff with one hand. He tried to pull himself up, but he lacked upper body strength. His harness was connected to the HUMAN's so as soon as Dib couldn't climb anymore, he looked downwards and saw a struggling alien. Immediatley, he started worrying and assuming the worst in his screechy voice. Zim can either: 1. Tell him to shut up. 2. "What are you looking at?!?" 3. "Keep climbing!" 4. "Are you stinky AND blind?!? Help me!" 5. "Don't you DARE try to help me, HUMAN. I'm perfectly fine and I don't want your stinky, filthy, fleshy, human hands on my harness!" 5. "Stop worrying! I might fall and then I'll never be able to destroy this planet! Then someone else might destroy it better than me and I'll never be 'great'! I might—stop it! You're making me worry!" 6. "I order you to help me!" 7. "Help me Dib! Pull me up!" 8. "Please help me!"
Choice 1 : Tell him to shut up.
Choice 2 : "What are you looking at?!?"
Choice 3 : "Keep climbing!"
Choice 4 :
Choice 5 : "Don't you DARE try to help me, HUMAN. I'm perfectly fine and I don't want your stinky, filthy, fleshy, human hands on my harness!"

Dib watches in fear as Zim (insert choice). Everytime he does (choice), the cliff he's hanging on seems to shake. He clears he glasses and watches it move before his eyes. "Intruging," he mutters. He gets knocked back into reality by Zim's cry. Dib can: 1. "You idiot! Stop (screaming/choice)! You're going to kill yourself and bring me down with you!" 2. "Zim look! You're causing a natural process to occur! You should be proud!" 3. "I"m coming down to help you!"
Choice 1 : "You idiot! Stop screaming! You're going to kill yourself and bring me down with you!"
Choice 2 : "Zim look! You're causing a natural process to occur! You should be proud!"
Choice 3 : "I'm going to help you!"
Choice 1: "Don't you dare talk to ZIM in that manner! Once I get up there, you will suffer a slow and painful—" Choice 2: "I-I am? Wow! Yes! This is the magnificent work of ZIM!" Choice 3: "Hurry up!"
Choice 1 : "Don't you dare talk to ZIM in that manner! Once I get up there, you will suffer a slow and painful—"
Choice 2 : "I-I am? Wow! Yes! This is the magnificent work of ZIM!"
Choice 3 : "NOOO! Don't come near me!"
Whatever was chosen, DIb slowly climbs down and makes it a few feet above the alien. He shakingly holds out his hand for Zim to take, but is corrected by the look on his face.
Choice 1 : ...
With a twisted look on his face, Zim reels back in disgust at the HUMAN's offer.
Choice 1 : "Get away from me, Nethanderal!"
"You HUMAN filth! I'd rather stay here than touch you!"
Choice 1 : Screech
Choice 2 : Kick
Choice 3 : Hiss
"Stop that!" Dib hissed. "That small rock that you're hanging on to is about t give way, just like all of the other rocks above you. Your voice is causing vibrations that bounces off the wall of this mountains which can call an avalanche!"
Choice 1 : ...
"Why should I care?" he spat.
Write a choice here.