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A choice to make in life

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Nazanin Ahmadi

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Word count: 1429

Choice count: 37

Section count: 20

Image count: 20

Error count: 10

Field Related Analysis:

Education : 19 matches (School, choice, college, degree, diploma, don, exam, fail, failed, failure, graduation, intelligence, learned, management, mentor, school, teach, teachers, university)

Law/Paralegal-Technology : 16 matches (abortion, Child, condition, costs, court, divorce, fact, family, House, lawyer, marriage, office, partnership, reputation, settled, title)

Sociology : 15 matches (culture, School, divorce, fact, relationship, intelligence, countries, management, marriage, open, religion, school, self, World, wants)

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A choice to make in life

Before the end of College.

I will finish my my program at Ahuntsic College in one year. My program is Accounting and Business Management. Once I am done my technique I can work directly. Although I am not sure if I like that much my program and I find it hard. What should I do?

Choice 1 : Before the end of College.

Choice 2 : Change your program

Ahuntsic College

When I finish my technique in Accounting and Business Management.

I finished my program now I am ready to work. Although I can continue my studies at UQAM University and get the CPA tittle. But it comes with fact that I have to study more and harder for a few more years. Should I continue my studies in one of these universities? Or start working in the accounting institutions.

Choice 1 : Go to University

Choice 2 : Start working

College graduation

The CPA exam.

I chose to go to UQAM University to get my CPA degree. To get the tittle we have to pass the CPA exam which is really, really hard. We only have one year to get prepared for it. We only have three attempts to give the exam and it costs three thousand dollars each time.

Choice 1 : Give the exam

Choice 2 : Don't do the exam

UQAM University

The failure.

The CPA exam was not easy, I got my result and I failed it. I am very dissappointed, and now I don't know what to do.

Choice 1 : Wait another year

Choice 2 : Study harder and give the exam again

Failure

The hard work.

I chose to study harder, I studied day and night and one day I met one of my old teachers from College. His name is Bora Som, and he is a CPA, but he chose to teach because he didn't enjoy being an accountant. He asked me a question. Do you really see yourself working in an office 12 hours a day? Are you working hard just to get that tittle or you really want to be an accountant? He also told me that he has always imagined me as a business woman, and he has reminded me that idea that I had when I was in college. I always wanted to open up a beauty salon and be my own boss.

Choice 1 : Start your own business

Choice 2 : Give the exam

Reunion with an old teacher

The choice that worth millions.

I made a deal with my mentor for partnership, and we decided to open up my salon. Our hard works and his intelligence and sense of business made it all work. Once we figured out how the business works we managed to open 5 more salons. By the age of 30 I was already a millionaire. This all worked because we both were honest and trusted each other.

Choice 1 : Deceive your partner and stole all the money.

Choice 2 : Stay loyal and you will make more money together

Team work

Back to school.

One day, I was having coffee with CPA Bora Som, and he asked me why don't you give the CPA exam once again and get that tittle you really wanted. And I literally gave it a thought that I can try once more time even if I fail I got nothing to lose but what if I pass.

Choice 1 : Try one more time

Choice 2 : Never mind, and enjoy being a millionaire

Back to school

Get that title.

I decided to give the exam one more time. My friend who happens to be a CPA offered me help for my exam preparation because he has already done the exam to give me some better tips, but I wanted to pass with my own abilities.

Choice 1 : Prepare for the exam by your own self

Hard work

Success.

I chose to prepare for my exam by myself, I studied really hard and found my errors. I gave my exam full of confidence and didn't fear the failure, turned out I have passed my exam. We have a graduation party and now I have to figure out whom do I want to invite on this happy day.

Choice 1 : Invite nobody and just go get your diploma

Choice 2 : Invite the people who have always encouraged and supported you

Passed

The proud moment.

I chose to invite my family, my best friends and the CPA Bora Som who happens to be my mentor and a great friend. It the most amazing time of my life seeing all my loved once being so proud of me. I had to give a speech on the stage and I didn't know what to say.

Choice 1 : Tell your journey's story and drop some tears.

Choice 2 : Just say thank you and go.

Graduation day

Time to get married.

I got my CPA degree and I have settled my business, now it's time to get married. I got many marriage proposals, and they happen to be good people. But I don't know if I am ready for a big step.

Choice 1 : Get married before you grow older.

Choice 2 : Travel the world and find your soul mate.

Mariage proposals

The world tour trip.

chose to go on a long world tour trip. I visited almost all the countries I have always dreamed of. I got wiser and I have got more experience about life. I have learned new cultures and new traditions but more importantly I have learned to be grateful for all the blessings I have. I found the love of my life in Venice. He's Asian and exactly the prince charming I was looking for. He proposed to me but I didn't know what to respond because we belong from different culture, religion and family backgrounds, I have literally imagined all the problems I will have to face.

Choice 1 : Accept his proposal and take all the risks

Choice 2 : Refuse his proposal and save the family reputation

World tour

The real problems.

I chose to accept his proposal and take all the risks possible. I presented him to my family. Everyone was against my decision, no one supported me, and they threatened me of choosing one side.

Choice 1 : Chose your family and get married to their choice.

Choice 2 : Leave the house and get married to the love of your life.

Family problems

The wedding day.

I chose to get married with my soul mate, I invited everyone except for my family because they were against my decision, but I had a feeling that if I had invited them, they might forgive me and accept this marriage.

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Choice 2 : Invite my family

Choice 3 : You don't need their blessings

Wedding ceremony

The happy life.

After five years, I have bought my dream house and my dream car, my business was growing bigger, nothing was possible without my amazing husband. One day my husband said that he wants to have a child, but I wasn't sure if I am ready for this big responsibility.

Choice 1 : Get pregnant

Choice 2 : Enjoy the couple life

Dream house

I am pregnant.

My husband was so happy to hear this news, but I was not and I wasn't ready to become a mom.

Choice 1 : Have the child

Choice 2 : Get an abortion

Pregnant lady

The couple fights.

I chose to get an abortion, when my husband found out he got very heartbroken, and our marriage was almost over.

Choice 1 : Make things better with him

Choice 2 : Get a divorce

Divorce

The court.

We chose to get divorced, and his lawyer was trying to get a lot of money from me because I had a million dollars, but I noticed my husband was not happy while his lawyer was insulting me.

Choice 1 : Stop the divorce

Choice 2 : Let him take the money

Fighting over money

Reunion.

I chose to stop my divorce and make everything better with my husband because I had seen in his eyes that he really loves me, and we can work this out. He agreed to get back with me but only for one condition, that I have to give him a child.

Choice 1 : Accept his condition

Choice 2 : End the relationship

Together once again

The happy ending.

I got pregnant once again after a few months of us getting back together. My husband was indeed very happy, and this time even I was happy and ready for this responsibility. We got blessed with a cute baby boy.

Write a choice here.

Family